Love makes Life Beautiful : Adiya FF Part 11 - pg 15 - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
Character Sketch is just Fabulous
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Hello friends, thank you all who read n like this ff. Thank you frds for your lovely comments.
Part 3:
Noor rushed into the house with tears. Arjun hold her hand.
Arjun: what happened Noor?
Noor(push him aside n rush into kitchen): I can't speak.
everyone followed her inside kitchen. All where tensed. Noor emptied one full bottle of water. Everyone thinks what happened to Noor. She went n sit in living room. Adi n Zoya sit beside ber.
Wasim: what happened Noor?
Noor: i told na abbu. I can't able to speak.
Zoya: why? What happened?
Noor: i too don't know appi. I always bought in that shop only. It won't be like this.
zoya: what are you talking about Noor?
Noor: Appi i am talking about that chips. It won't be this much spicy everyday. I am going to make a compliant to the ahop owner.
everyone relaxed that nothing happened to their little princess. Arjun without knowing to anyone he wipes his tears.
Zoya: why you didn't tell it first itself? See everyone tensed.
Adi: she told it first itself na that she can't speak
zoya: because of you only she is like this.
Adi: ofcourse. Because of me only she is like beautiful angel. If it is because of you she will be like ginger eating monkey.
zoya: Adiii
she went to hit him. Pooja hold her hand.
pooja: You can fight later Zoya. First we will name child. Because Yash, mummyji n chottu has to go early.
Anjana: what are you going today itself?
Madhu: yeah bhabi. Yash ia busy with new shop opening.
Roshnaq: atleast leave chottu with us.
Mahi: Ammi sorry. I too go to boutique. We will come every weekend.
Yash: let's name child.
pooja split a paper into 5 pieces n give that to Adiya, Arnoor n Mahi. They write their fav names. Yash n pooja choose a paper from,lot. She show the paper to everyone.
Noor: Josh. Wow this is my selection.
she jumps in joy. Shakshi told everyone to have lunch. Zoya serves everyone. Pooja left to her room with tears. Yash followed her. Adi n Noor try to follow them. Zoya pushes them in Chair. Arjun and Mahi laugh at them.
Zoya: i don't know when you two are going to change.
POOJA ROOM:
Yash: Pooja.
Pooja(cries like kid): Yash i will also come with you.
Yash: don't cry yaar. It's difficult to understand girls. When you was in our house, you wish to come here. When you are here, you wish to come with me.
Yash wipes her tears n hugs her.
Yash: i will be always with you only in your heart. I will come every weekend.
Evening Yash n his family leaves.
Adiya n Arnoor where playing with Josh. Zoya takes Josh in her hands.
Zoya: Josh baby. First i will introduce myself.
Adi: second Josh will introduce himself.
Noor and Arjun laughed. Zoya look at Adi scornfully.
Zoya: i am your chotti ma Zoya n she is your another chotti
Noor(cuts inbetween): Appi i am not that much aged. Josh you can call me as Noor. We will be best friends.
Arjun admires Noor.
- to be continued.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Nice update dear
Loved it
Noor antics were nice
Crying on spicy chips packet
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
Awesome update dear👏!!!! Noor went inside as she cant talk to them... All became tensed... But...she was...angry that her chips were spicy😆🤣... Oh God this Noor na... Arjun was really scared... Baby's naamkaran... JOSH-the name selected by Noor... AdiYa n ArNoor😳❤️... Pooja sad as Yash leaving... Eagerly waiting for next part dear... Thanks for the PM... Update soon...
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
Double post...
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
noor was crying over spicy chips. ha ha.when zoya said noor is like this because of adi he said bcz of him noor is an angel n if it was bcz of zoya she would have been ginger eating creature😆funny.arjun wiping noor's tears was cute.nice name for poosh baby .my fav scene was poosh scene very emotional n realistic.loved the dialogues.family scene with Josh was cute
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
Lovely Chapter

I liked Noor , it was actually cute
crying on spicy chips
but the conversation between Zoya and Adi concerning Noor
was hilarious
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Love your all 3 parts.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Awesome update 👏
Loved it
Noor crying over spicy chips 😆 She loves making other worried for her. Aww...Arjun was crying as well.
Pooja and Yash'a conversation was nice
Aditya and Zoya are forever fighting...
Thanks a lot for the PM
Please update the next part soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
thanks for pm as always.

sweet update. loved Noor crying over chippies that was so adorable

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