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Posted: 7 years ago
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There she was, in all her glory
Ready to start a brand new story

Her view, his eyes drank
"For the last time." His heart sank

The final duty, he'd come to serve
Building up his strength's reserve

With every single step they took
The last bits of his strength shook

Suddenly, a strong tug he felt
His heart's desire, his eyes clearly spelt

That one last sudden ray of hope
Maybe he wouldn't have to learn to cope

And just as his fears, his doubts arose
With a smash came reality's dose


-x-

Again, hope I did justice to Harshad Chopra's heartwrenching portrayal of that moment.

Not sure if I should continue, since this is a beautiful end. But this was not his last wicked twisted fate moment, if we're looking at the precap (💔😭), is it? What's your view?

Also, if anyone's interested, here's some of my other works on AdiYa I simply couldn't resist writing:

To all those who were asking Aditya to just back off: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bepannaah/5027566/let-her-go

When Aditya Hooda broke. "Matlab isse achha humaari jaan hi chali jaati!": https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bepannaah/5028404/khudgarz-nahin-hai-mohabbat-meri


Love,
AT.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow...this is awesome...u made that beautiful scene even more beautiful with these lines...superb..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeps07

wow...this is awesome...u made that beautiful scene even more beautiful with these lines...superb..


That is a BIG compliment! Thank you!! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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this is so beautiful dear❤️
Suddenly, a strong tug he felt
His heart's desire, his eyes clearly spelt

perfect for adi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Your writing is so apt. ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ikhtiyar

Your writing is so apt. ⭐️


Thank you 😳
Harshad Chopda can do wonders, like you see above 😆
I dedicate it to him completely. For making me feel Aditya's pain and desire. His eyes, that hope! 🥺
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Posted: 7 years ago
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You are talented!! The words have captured every nuance of Aditya's state of mind in that scene!

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