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Posted: 7 years ago
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"Jaane do use!" kehte rehte hain sab
"Khud ki bhi kuch kadar kar lo tum ab"
Bepannaah mohabbat se anjaan hai vo
Jo na samjhe mera ab usi se hai rab

Gumshuda yun hue the na milte kabhi
Gila thi, the roothe hum khudse tabhi
Usne aise bulaava tha bheja humein
Laut aaye bhula baaki baatein sabhi

Jeene se hi hum darne lage the jab
Aake thaama tha yaara hume usne tab
Khudse phir ishq karna sikha jo gayi
Use jaane du kaise, batao tum ab

- from Aditya, with love.


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In case you're interested, here's a couple more of my AdiYa drabbles:

Khudgarz nahin hai mohabbat meri!: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=5028404&PID=148485830&#p148485830

AdiYa OS: Qubool Nahin Hai!: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=5027350
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: hriti713

Such deep words! ❤️


Thank you for spending a moment to appreciate 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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❤️❤️
Beautiful Beautiful Words Dear and so apt for Aditya's Situation!!❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is so deep and heart touching❤️
Beautiful❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I just love your play around the words ..they are so deep!
His reactions, his pain, his words, his tears was so genuinely depicted. Can just see how deep he's in love. And if he thinks he can let go of her...its such a lie.

Its Beautiful 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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heart touching and sooo beautiful❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hunnie1

I just love your play around the words ..they are so deep!

His reactions, his pain, his words, his tears was so genuinely depicted. Can just see how deep he's in love. And if he thinks he can let go of her...its such a lie.

Its Beautiful 👏


Thank you! Means a lot ❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago
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This was beautiful ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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O god where were you👏
Heartwarming it is❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Apt poem with such meaningful words!! You have an amazing talent!

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