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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Adiya45
Loved it
It's written beautifully 👏

Awww thank you so much!

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo
I'm curious to know why this reaction from zoya

Stay tuned, then😉

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

I generally give any FF tagged 16+ or above a wide berth coz atleast out of the ones I tried reading (esp in IF), it is all about characters wanting to rip the clothes off their bodies before doing whatever it is they want to do 😆 I am no prude but I simply find it hard to connect with a story that has no rhyme or reason. I read yours after a friend mentioned it and I am pleasantly surprised to find myself wanting to read more. The writeup is surely compelling enough for me to keep my prejudice aside. Good one 👍🏼 Will wait for next update.

P. S - I hope you weren't offended by my remark 😳

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: mrym_rauf
amazing! so here adi n zoya are cheaters or is their something else?! interesting interesting, would love to read more! :D

Thank you! And you'll just have to wait for the story to unfold😉

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon
I generally give any FF tagged 16+ or above a wide berth coz atleast out of the ones I tried reading (esp in IF), it is all about characters wanting to rip the clothes off their bodies before doing whatever it is they want to do 😆 I am no prude but I simply find it hard to connect with a story that has no rhyme or reason. I read yours after a friend mentioned it and I am pleasantly surprised to find myself wanting to read more. The writeup is surely compelling enough for me to keep my prejudice aside. Good one 👍🏼 Will wait for next update.
P. S - I hope you weren't offended by my remark 😳

I would definitely like to know the friend's name. I wanna know who is this sweet well wisher of mine but I think I have an idea of who it might be. And yes, I understand what you're saying. I usually don't read those FFs too. I didn't tag this as 18+ because I'm 18 myself lol and 16 year olds are aware enough. I'm glad the prologue compelled you to read the story! It's almost like now I have this huge responsibility of keeping you hooked but I promise I'll try my best 😆

I have a whole plan laid out for the story so I hope you like what's coming next. ❤️

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: harsha..
Interesting start. Very well written. 😊
Waiting for the story to start.

Thank you 🤗

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: SewzVB
Whoa.. What an intriguing start that was 😆 I didn't even think it would be the total opposite of the actual story LOL
Hope you'll be continuing & do pm me if you're free to do that ⭐️

Thank you so much! And surely, you'll be getting all the PMs!😊

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Aishu136
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Oh wow I'm first to reserve my place!😊

Well I loved the way you gave the prologue - No introduction, Just one scene and kept us all on the edge thinking

What? that really happened? - Yes!
Zoya doesn't remember anything -yes!
But That's Adi right - Yes!
What about confrontation? - Wait and watch!!
Awesome one😊

I can't assume as to what would be the genre - whatever it is, I'm actually happy that they already spent a night together😉😆 - When and How, we will wait and watch!!

Man, the way Adi was introduced - lol he was in his Pilot's uniform!!!😃 Super sexy he looks in Pilot Uniform - Who can resist him and poor Zoya!!

Ok ok, coming back - From her shock, looks like she knows him - so is it related to Bepannah track or a different take - I'm in both!!

Can't wait to find out Adi's reaction - I hope, really hope he remembers and teases Zoya!!

Babe, without further delay - bring it on the next update soon!!

Honestly, just posting the prologue without any author's not or introduction was a risk, especially with the prologue being this shocking. But I chose to take it and I'm glad because people seem to be enjoying it!

And I'm so glad you liked the sexy Adi and confused Zoya 😆

This isn't related to the Bepannah track. Let's just it's an alternative universe lol.

And I'm going to update either today or tomorrow which will reveal Adi's side to you. Thanks for reading!