AdiYa FF ~The Hookup~ NEW CH UPDATED - Page 15

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Posted: 7 years ago
You're so quick omg 😆 Waiting to read your comment, lovely!
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AkshitaWrites.

She was welcomed by an empty room. The bed was prim, as if nobody had slept on it and Zoya wondered where Yash was.


I think I can assume where Yash had been LOL


How on earth could she tell her husband that she had spent the night with another man and even worse, she had liked it.


Just how piously her husband cheats on her isn't it? LMAO But yeah poor Zoya seems as if she's trapped badly..


Zoya had already gotten to know Aditya, a lot more than how much Pooja would've liked.


Poor Zo, no wonder she's going through a hard time but yeah drunken states can land you where you never thought of landing 😕 Her being a friend of Pooja is like more trouble..


Going to your friend's anniversary party and sleeping with her husband.

Cracked me up just like, a/c to Adi's POV in the show, "Meri wife pooja, uska darling bf Yash, uski darling biwi Zoya" LMAO 😆😆🤣 (I don't remem the exact dialogue)


This was a good pov & now that Zo remembers how she ended up on Aditya's bed & slept with him, she should obvio be feeling really messed up
Nevertheless the love bite, enjoying the night with another man who's not her husband, cheating on her husband & her good friend are truly issues for her. Just wanna see both pov's in the next but it's k if you've planned already 😊 Just bcz Zoya will be having a visitor at her door, who's supposed to be her husband & Adi coping up with the good nightmare 😳😆
Good job!
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is so well written that now I'm kinda confused... I'm in this two minds where I'm an AdiYa shipper but I really hate the "cheating" aspect of it so I'm kinda hoping that PooSh do something even worse which will not make it okay but atleast a little easier to look past...
Will just have to wait and watch I guess 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: MissRight

This is so well written that now I'm kinda confused... I'm in this two minds where I'm an AdiYa shipper but I really hate the "cheating" aspect of it so I'm kinda hoping that PooSh do something even worse which will not make it okay but atleast a little easier to look past...

Will just have to wait and watch I guess 😆

I'm going to respond to this comment properly, later. But I'm gonna leave you with this, boats with holes sink sooner or later 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
You are a fabulous writer! I love how you plan out emotions realistically and give out the viewpoints along with some revelations like how AdiYa ended up in the same party.. waiting for more!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ikhtiyar

You are a fabulous writer! I love how you plan out emotions realistically and give out the viewpoints along with some revelations like how AdiYa ended up in the same party.. waiting for more!

Arre how sweet are you!! 🤗 It takes a lot of time to plan this honestly. Ab school khatam ho gya hai na so I have all the time in the world 😆 I have 3 page Word Document filled with bullet points of what is going to happen in the story. See, itni mehnat 🤣
Jaise tum quota pura karne ke liye karti ho na, waise hi 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update
You an outstanding writer
Loved it❤️
Loved Zoya's point of view❤️
Nice revelation was curious to know how they both came to the same party 😆
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AkshitaWrites.

Arre how sweet are you!! 🤗 It takes a lot of time to plan this honestly. Ab school khatam ho gya hai na so I have all the time in the world 😆 I have 3 page Word Document filled with bullet points of what is going to happen in the story. See, itni mehnat 🤣
Jaise tum quota pura karne ke liye karti ho na, waise hi 😆


🤗 Yes, I know how long the planning can take.
Hehe, same here! School over so one month on my hands ⭐️ mehnat na phal bhi mil raha hai 😳
🤣 Waise I am a writer too or was. I stopped writing six months back. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ikhtiyar


🤗 Yes, I know how long the planning can take.
Hehe, same here! School over so one month on my hands ⭐️ mehnat na phal bhi mil raha hai 😳
🤣 Waise I am a writer too or was. I stopped writing six months back. 😆

Wait I thought you were 16 so how is your school over?😆 and btw, this is all in fun. I'll still respond to your comment from the point of view of this story's writer 😆
Because hello, I like to act like a professional sometimes🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AkshitaWrites.

Wait I thought you were 16 so how is your school over?😆 and btw, this is all in fun. I'll still respond to your comment from the point of view of this story's writer 😆
Because hello, I like to act like a professional sometimes🤣


10th got over.. 😆 I know, I know 😉
🤣 🤣

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