AdiYa FF ~The Hookup~ NEW CH UPDATED - Page 17

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Posted: 7 years ago

I'm loving where this is going, but obviously, I do not know where this is going but I liked the way it started off. 😆

Looking forward to reading further where Adiya meets in consciousness. 😆

And the way you write is awesome, I really liked some comparisons you made and the style of some sentences...

Both want to hide all evidence, which going to bit them back for sure. 😳

I do not know if you will justify their actions in the upcoming parts but I will personally not want a justification because concerning me cheating is disgusting whatever the situation you were in, drunk or not, conscious or unconscious. 🤔

Next part, please.

Keechu.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Something tells me Yash is not such an innocent party either. Just maybe Puja might be up to something too. Why did she miss her own anniversary party?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loving this story and the way you are writing the characters of Adi and Zoya
I do smell something fishy abt poo and yash some thing out there seems weird abt them
Thanks a ton for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
At first i was skeptical about reading stories about this pairing not only becoz i haven't watched the show after ep 1 but also it felt like i was betraying arshi...but uk way am officially addicted...this story is amazing
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Posted: 7 years ago
I just found this ff. It's amazing. Can't wait for next update. Plz pm me when you. I don't want to miss it.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AkshitaWrites.

I'm so happy you were the first one! And I read your comment, I'm going to reply to it properly but just wanted to let ya know that I'm waiting to read your story! 🤗


Take your time 😳 As for my story I am dealing with a bad bout of writer's block, so its taking time and to top it off its not coming off the way I want it to Will surely let u know when I post it 😊 Right now I am waiting for next sunday 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Very well written and look forward to more chapters. You captured their emotions and the scene very well. It's like a movie playing itself out. Well done.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res for one of my favorite Bepannaah FFs!! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Res for one of my favorite Bepannaah FFs!! 😃

Awww 🤗 Waiting to read the comment, lovely!
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Posted: 7 years ago
I liked the way you have detailed the emotional aspect of cheating. Every action has an equal and opposite reaction. In this case, the reaction is the guilt.
I am curious about how you will mold Yash and Pooja's character. I was reminded of the disastrous film called 'Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna'. Cheating on your partner when they are flawless has no justification. I dunno, I am confused. Waiting for the next chapters.😊

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