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Akshita Taneja

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Posted: 7 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: princessSonia
awesome story...

cant wait to read further parts..

AdiYa are the one here instead of Poosh...

bdw
i wanted to get your attention to two things..

firstly the link of chapter 1 redirects the page to an FF on Arshi...

and secondly on page 12 you have posted chapter 1 but it shows title as chapter 2...

this got me a bit confused...

do cross check...

thank you...

and please do update soon...

would love to see how Adi figures out it was Zoya...

I fixed it, like I mentioned earlier but thank you for pointing it out and also thank you for the compliments 🤗

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: coderlady
Both are married and it did happen. What a mess.

It indeed is a mess. You'll see how they handle it 😉

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: MissRight
I'm very sorry for his state of mind... n how things have begun with him and his true soulmate.. but I'm glad his "that was probably Pooja" misconception is over... cant wait to see how this unfolds!

Wait and see how it unfolds! So so many things to come 😉

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Dragonfly88
Can't wait to see what happens to next 😉

Update coming tomorrow!

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: husnkimalika
Awesome story

Thank you so much!

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon
Loved the way it is written Akshita 👏 Adi is burning with guilt, especially considering the fact that he made the same mistake that his father did for which he resents him to this day. To see himself in the same position must be infinitely worse. He has put Pooja in the same place his mother was in, a long time ago. He is not sure if he even deserves to be forgiven, given how strongly he feels about betrayal himself. And then the condom! I am guessing he will manage to hide it from Pooja in the nick of time but what if he doesn't? That would be the worse way of confessing to his wife of his infidelity act but even when he does will he able to say anything that can make it any better? Guess not 😳

Really interested to know where it goes from here and how Zoya is reacting to the whole situation. We already had a glimpse at it but there Zoya was more concerned about getting out. Want to know how she will react when she comes face to face with Yash. Good going 👍🏼

Thank you so much! Yes, Adi is in quicksand righ now 😆 But you'll see how he deals with it. About the condom, what do you think? Will he able to hide it or I'll let Pooja know i the second chapter itself?😆

Zoya's side of the story will bring interesting details about their lil night... there, I just gave you a spoiler! But her side of the story is really important too so the next chapter will be dedicated to that.

And thank you so much, these comments really motivate me! 😳