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harsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: MissRight
Oh my god... so passionate so charged with sexual tension I loved it!!!!!
glad he didn't steal her drafts from her... and the last line... Adiii I love you!

PS: in this fiction adi is a Lawyer.. atleast papa hooda's wish got fulfilled here 😉

I know, right !!

Nobody respects Papa Hooda or cares about his wishes. Atleast he got his wish fulfilled in this story. 🤣

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Awesome update

Loving the stelory

And the characterisation

And uff the sexual tension is through the roof

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harsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: SewzVB
Harsha tnx for sending the pm & yeah, this update revealed how he ditched her ideas. Zoya seems turned on with Adi every now and then LOL
Waiting to read the next since it might reveal more abt their history, I've a hunch 😆
This Adi is a sassy dude 😎 & that I loved

How can our Adi not be sassy !!

Sarcastic is the man's middle name 😆

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Sayma Afrin Khan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Passionate😳

Loved it so much

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter

Continue soon

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harsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Sunsethues
Absolutely loving the storys.. . Great pace... Update fast n add me to your pm list

Thank you. 😊

I have sent you Buddy Request. Please accept it to receive PMs.

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ArhiMaria

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Harsha this chapter was fantastic! I have now read it a couple of times and I can honestly say that I am so very proud of your Zoya because despite her strong attraction her self respect is intact and unlike some other mindless fan fictions that I have read they are not acting like hormonal teenagers and jumping each other's bones without resolving their issues and the very clear betrayal.

The line where he ends with the designer was to be blamed had a major impact because let's face it, Aditiya just confessed to having planned Zoya's career and reputation demise well before she could do anything, he is definitely the bigger culprit here. I guess he didn't count on developing feelings for the designer who was supposed to cop the blame. Zoya's reaction and realisation was just as impactful and realistic, so bravo yet again for your strong writing skills!

I cannot wait to see what Aditiya has instore for Zoya to make up for all his scheming and plotting against her from the get go.

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harsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: ArhiMaria
Harsha this chapter was fantastic! I have now read it a couple of times and I can honestly say that I am so very proud of your Zoya because despite her strong attraction her self respect is intact and unlike some other mindless fan fictions that I have read they are not acting like hormonal teenagers and jumping each other's bones without resolving their issues and the very clear betrayal.
The line where he ends with the designer was to be blamed had a major impact because let's face it, Aditiya just confessed to having planned Zoya's career and reputation demise well before she could do anything, he is definitely the bigger culprit here. I guess he didn't count on developing feelings for the designer who was supposed to cop the blame. Zoya's reaction and realisation was just as impactful and realistic, so bravo yet again for your strong writing skills!

I cannot wait to see what Aditiya has instore for Zoya to make up for all his scheming and plotting against her from the get go.

Did I tell you that tell I love you ? 😆

Thank you for such an amazing comment. It keeps me motivated to keeping writing. 😊

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harsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: .SSS.
I am hooked to Aditya and Zoya's equation in this story... So different.
Very well written. Can't wait to read more.

Thank you. I am glad I could write something different. 😊

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Sonya

@Ianoconic

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Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Hello Harsha,

I see that your FF is with 18+ tag. I hope you are well versed with the FF rules here. 18+ content posting is not allowed on IF. Please go though this: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3374457/adult-contents-and-the-mention-of-rape-in-ff

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harsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Ianoconic.
Hello Harsha,
I see that your FF is with 18+ tag. I hope you are well versed with the FF rules here. 18+ content posting is not allowed on IF. Please go though this: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3374457/adult-contents-and-the-mention-of-rape-in-ff

Thank you for drawing my attention to the matter. I wasn't aware that we can't have 18+ content. Till now, I haven't posted anything which would qualify as 18+ but had tagged the story due to the mature theme. You can go through the story if you so wish. I assure you that there is nothing explicit.

Edited by harsha.. - 7 years ago

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