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Shreya

@Adiya45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Amazing update

Loved it

It's written beautifully

Update soon

Plz pm when you update 😳

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: MissRight

I swear to God! right!!!!! The man is pure hotness...I was extremely jealous of that Club wali girl in the last episode cause she got to touch him... Hes a privilege that should only be allowed to some... namely Jenny😉

I actually liked the club girl, she was so direct with him...why waste time on niceties when you can go straight for the kill 😉

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: AkshitaWrites.
I finally read the two updates, I had missed. Loved them! I have to say, you're good at writing steamy parts lol. But really, I enjoyed the updates a lot. Waiting for the next one! ❤️

Thank you very much 😊

What to do, I love writing 18+ parts. I suck at writing an emotional scene. Though I am thinking of writing an emotional OS this time...just testing the waters. 😉

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: harsha..

I actually liked the club girl, she was so direct with him...why waste time on niceties when you can go straight for the kill 😉

Point! respect her for the girl power..

But the man was Harshad naa.. would have preferred to see Jenny (for Mr Chopda) or Myself there in her place (for Mr Hooda)...😉

Hum kaunsa kisi se kam hain? 😆

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Adiya45
Amazing update
Loved it
It's written beautifully
Update soon
Plz pm when you update 😳

Thank you very much !!

I have accepted your buddy request. PM for the next update coming right up 😊

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: harsha..

Thank you very much 😊

What to do, I love writing 18+ parts. I suck at writing an emotional scene. Though I am thinking of writing an emotional OS this time...just testing the waters. 😉

Lol experiment as much as you want to! I try to do the same with my stories. It keeps things fun!

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: SewzVB
I like the titles you chose 😆 Quite out of the box..
Adi & Zoya definitely have a weird past & when I read the whole thing, I realized her comparing boi to a Calvin Klein model equals to not having a bitter idea abt him.. 😃
Well, pm me the next & more if you write on AdiYa 😎

Thank you so much 😊

I am glad you like the titles. I actually devote time to find a suitable one which summarizes the update in a single line.

I have added you to my buddy list. You will surely receive a PM for the next update. 😊

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688
Loving loving the story
Awesome update

Thank you. 😊

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ArhiMaria

@ArhiMaria

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

interesting update there, the more I read the more I want more so I am already looking forward to the next chapter. This Aditya reminds me of a cunning version of ASR. He used her as a scapegoat yet he follows her to monitor her reaction to everything. It is obvious that they have a past and a sizzling chemistry so until I have a clear idea of the past I can't judge the character too harshly but you have definitely created the illusion of this intense connection. Great write up and thanks for the PM!👏

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ArhiMaria
interesting update there, the more I read the more I want more so I am already looking forward to the next chapter. This Aditya reminds me of a cunning version of ASR. He used her as a scapegoat yet he follows her to monitor her reaction to everything. It is obvious that they have a past and a sizzling chemistry so until I have a clear idea of the past I can't judge the character too harshly but you have definitely created the illusion of this intense connection. Great write up and thanks for the PM!👏

Thank you for this beautiful comment. It really made my day.😊

I guess there will be bits of ASR in every story I write. Afterall, he is my first love. Who can forget the perfect enunciation and that damned eyebrow lift? 😆

This is my first thriller. I hope the future parts also manage to keep you hooked.