Toxic ~ Even if we can't be together in the end - Chapter 23 Up ! - Page 5

Originally posted by: MissRight

I swear to God! right!!!!! The man is pure hotness...I was extremely jealous of that Club wali girl in the last episode cause she got to touch him... Hes a privilege that should only be allowed to some... namely Jenny😉

Originally posted by: AkshitaWrites.

I finally read the two updates, I had missed. Loved them! I have to say, you're good at writing steamy parts lol. But really, I enjoyed the updates a lot. Waiting for the next one! ❤️

Originally posted by: harsha..

I actually liked the club girl, she was so direct with him...why waste time on niceties when you can go straight for the kill 😉

Originally posted by: Adiya45

Amazing update

Loved it

It's written beautifully

Update soon

Plz pm when you update 😳

Originally posted by: harsha..

Thank you very much 😊

What to do, I love writing 18+ parts. I suck at writing an emotional scene. Though I am thinking of writing an emotional OS this time...just testing the waters. 😉

Originally posted by: SewzVB

I like the titles you chose 😆 Quite out of the box..

Adi & Zoya definitely have a weird past & when I read the whole thing, I realized her comparing boi to a Calvin Klein model equals to not having a bitter idea abt him.. 😃

Well, pm me the next & more if you write on AdiYa 😎

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

Loving loving the story

Awesome update

Originally posted by: ArhiMaria

interesting update there, the more I read the more I want more so I am already looking forward to the next chapter. This Aditya reminds me of a cunning version of ASR. He used her as a scapegoat yet he follows her to monitor her reaction to everything. It is obvious that they have a past and a sizzling chemistry so until I have a clear idea of the past I can't judge the character too harshly but you have definitely created the illusion of this intense connection. Great write up and thanks for the PM!👏