Toxic ~ Even if we can't be together in the end - Chapter 23 Up ! - Page 38

Hey! I've been meaning to write this reply for a long time now but something always comes up and I forget 😛 But I want to thank you for writing Toxic! 😊 It is honestly one of the most beautiful pieces I've read in a long long time. Believe me when I say that I can visualize Adi and Zoya when I'm reading, I can feel their characteristics and the nuances that make them. The scene when Zoya tells Adi that she's pregnant has my whole damn heart. I read that part when I was sitting in the library one day and I ended up half smiling, half crying like a fool. I have never ever watched or followed an Indian TV show before. I watched a few episodes of Iss Pyaar Ko and Ek Haazaron Mein because my friends forced me, I joined India forums after that to read a fanfiction but never really came here after that. I came across Bepannaah's opening montage on my social media one day and I was intrigued, I never knew Indian TV did these kind of shows! I am obsessed with the show now and I am in love with AdiYa and JenShad (I cannot stop thinking about Harshad Chopda its become a problem I swear 😛) My heart broke when the show ended today. Sorry I'm ranting, the point is, I really hope you continue writing because that way I'll still feel connected to the show, as if its still part of my life. You have a beautiful flair for writing and Adi's and Zoya's characters in Toxic are the most alluring characters I've seen in ages. So thank you! ❤️And sorry for the super long rant 😛

Oh My Oh My!! What a beautiful update!! Zoya and ger feelings are described so beautifully, i just loved it how at the end she realized that her destiny is only Aditya in every damn universe!! eagerly waiting for next update!

Originally posted by: sezo

That was amazing. Loved zoya pov. I so thought she would go and he would find her again. I can't wait for the next part. Plz so update sooner.

Originally posted by: Tyshal

No yaar...The last line said by zoya...Uff...U made me cry..

Today was the last episode nd I was totally in bepanaaah zone since morning nd still I m.

We always wish..We always plan...But life runs in its own way..unexpected.

We always wonder...Hm aisa kr lete to ye ho Jata...Waisa kr let to wo ho Jata...But sad part is...We can't control anything, it is totally in nature hand.

Life will give us setbacks...happiness...Pain..Relief...The point is what we choose nd in what manner, with what prospective.

Update soon dear...U r the connection for me to zoya ND adi.

One thing more...I just love how u analyse human behavior nd emotions. Sounds too realistic too me 👏

Originally posted by: gprs

me 😊

Dear Harsha,This is beautiful..heart touchingly beautiful..
And I'm happy to hear from you..You know what also come in my mind after reading your reply,I'm not getting your points correctly,na??viewing in a different point..

Zoya in her own self shedding all her masks,My heart goes out to the woman who loves her man more than anything and away from him for the same reason..When the love will be fair to mere mortals who only wished for each other..

Why did you write so beautifully??your take on emotions are splendid..I was sad for a reason and then the update left me teary eyed..

So Zoya went to abort and had seen the accident which changed her life..Forced to go away to save him too..
She put herself in risk to come here..She even refused a good chance in earlier days too..The things love makes one do,sigh..

Now she thinks he release her to go away from him..Why do i think this is the case of letting go only to grab tighter than before..Damn i was like why don't you two speak what is in your mind instead of playing these games..And here comes the reply from her..

And the title,isn't what the difficult part of everyone's life..
Thank you dear for the pm and I beat you to read it..hehe..


i did forget to tell about the multiple universe.I love that you know..Sometimes i too wish the answers for what ifs via that theory.. For her every things lead to him..He didn't find her and she didn't find him,Both found each other,the that was/is supposed to be their journey..

Originally posted by: harsha..

Oh dear, I hope you are more collected now. Hate to see you sad.

Take Care - khush raho abaad raho, yeh pal kal ho na ho😊

The beauty of any artistic work be it a novel, painting, sculpture or movie is that the audience will interpret individually. You don't need to see Toxic through my eyes because mine are kinda rusty when it comes to this story.

Once upon a time, a million years ago I used to write an FF for Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon and it so happened that the male protagonist always used to be late for their meetings. Like every damn time. So one reader gave a beautiful analysis as to why the male lead is always late to meet the female lead. Many readers even liked her comment. But, the funny thing was I never intended it to be like that. Like her explanation was bang on but it was totally unintentional. It was pure coincidence that I wrote that way.😆

When I write any update I have a rough sketch of how it will begin and end - the main revelations and emotions, after writing the bullet points I begin writing the update. It is not set in stone as such so I imagine like fifty scenarios before zeroing one particular one. But, the bad thing is because I imagined those 50 other scenarios, proof read it, then did the grammar check (though I have no clue if the grammar is point on or I irritate you with my mistakes) it is difficult for me to keep a tight leash on what I am writing and how it is coming through. That's the reason I love reading insightful comments because finally I get to know what the hell I had actually written.😆

That is what I meant by saying that your comment really helped me in writing the next update. I had a solid base to move on and write the next update.😊

You always beat me to read the update. I am so glad❤️

Once again, thank you for lovely analysis.😊

You never miss a single point. I am surprised you noticed that West Coast Fellowship detail, I hadn't expected anyone to catch on to that new little thing because my updates are goddamn essays.😆

I'm good now dear..Thank you..
Okay,i got the point of different views, i was just worried that i misunderstood your points..I too love reading various comments as it gave so many new ideas on a single thing..Thanks for explaining

well,in that case i love to read your essays..And i just love how you analyse about everything..

The show ended?!!Damn..I was thinking to watch it from mid December..
Are you speaking about "IIT meets DU"..Now i remember some scenes,the meeting in some function in college campus,local train,fear of height,cute convos..I read that in a single go i guess..God i was so sad that it was incomplete..Do you have any plan for it ??That's a beautiful story..

Originally posted by: gprs

I'm good now dear..Thank you..
Okay,i got the point of different views, i was just worried that i misunderstood your points..I too love reading various comments as it gave so many new ideas on a single thing..Thanks for explaining

well,in that case i love to read your essays..And i just love how you analyse about everything..

The show ended?!!Damn..I was thinking to watch it from mid December..
Are you speaking about "IIT meets DU"..Now i remember some scenes,the meeting in some function in college campus,local train,fear of height,cute convos..I read that in a single go i guess..God i was so sad that it was incomplete..Do you have any plan for it ??That's a beautiful story..

Originally posted by: tannu_love

brilliant👏👏