Toxic ~ Even if we can't be together in the end - Chapter 23 Up ! - Page 36

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: gprs

😊

"You know i do"
i was waiting for the aftermath..you did give an amazing update as usual..And the title is perfect..

what's stopping them??the past,the guilt or the fear??

The moments in room were surreal,knowing how much they feel,knowing the extend of effect their decisions and actions can cause in each other's lives,still can't be open entirely,easily see through the masks for the world this pair made me want to bang my head on walls and at the same time made me want to hug them..

You know what's classy in Adi there?He clearly knows where Arjun stands in Zoya's life and hates the easy company he gave to her..He knew it that he's wrong to shout..But maintaining his image with a resolution to make things work out in his own ways make him so cool

A storm is on your way Zoya..Be prepared..She wanted to act that nothing affects her..poor woman..wanted justice for fellow people and lost her own in the process..Is it the guilt or the fear of threats keep her away?
want to see the interesting ways used by Adi to woo her back soon..





Love love love your analysis. It always forces me to think differently. You might not know it but you always show me a new perspective to view Toxic. It's like when you are writing the story you are so hell bent on the way you see the story that you forget to take into account different angles.

Just so that you know your comment really helped me while writing the next chapter. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sezo

Thanks for pm as always

Wow loved the long update.

So he has let zoya leave the job. What will she do now. Is he forgiving her I some way or us he planning something else. So many questions. Plz update soon again.

Loved it so much. I miss your story. Thank you and updated soon if possible. What can I say the reader I me has to ask and as they say don't ask don't get



Thank you. 😊

Totally second you buddy - don't ask don't get. As a matter of fact I will be updating today.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Tyshal

O girl!!

I'm really really glad that I waited for long for this!!👍🏼

Just loved it!!

Update soon dear❤️



Thank you. 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: tweeter13

Wow! I am blown away..you are so talented...the story hooked me in at chapter 1...can't wait for the next update!!! Kudos!!



Welcome aboard Toxic Express 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: deeps07

Great update..so whats he upto now..ur update lifted my mood abt the show actually..hope to read more soon..



Oh man, this story is the only good thing right now for me. The character butchering in the last two weeks was just unbearable.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: oyepiyaaa

oh my gosh i can't believe this ...i waited soo long for this story...it was amazing n just saying aditya n zoya together,their sizzling chemistry sparks out...such a fantastic and intense update ...realllyyy uplifted my mood...adi n zo r sooo dear to me...keep up the good work ...will wait for ur updates..loveee yaaa




Thank you thank you for your patience and beautiful comment. Love ya ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Pori

THANK YOU for the lovely update and PM

I think I need to reread this chapter again to understand it a little better, not when I am stressed.

Loved their moment together in the beginning.

More importantly, Loved Aditya's time with his mother. He seems so lost but conceals it so well in front of other.

I wonder why they're not together yet.
Will you be revealing more about the case as the story unfolds?



A few more revelations coming right up 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
can you pm me. Haven't read once bp ends i will catch up.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: dylidvin

can you pm me. Haven't read once bp ends i will catch up.



Sent you a buddy request. As a matter of fact I will be updating today. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Thank you. 😊

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