Toxic ~ Even if we can't be together in the end - Chapter 23 Up ! - Page 19

Originally posted by: Binzzz

It was awesome. .adi is really confusing...eagerly waiting to read the chapters through Adi 's perspective..it will be very interesting...update soon..

Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

First of all, thank you so much for sending me the PM !

The forum moves so fast that we can't keep track but this is one story I am pretty sure I am gonna refresh and see whether you have updated or not. It's just like you cannot just sit back and enjoy the story, more like you are at the edge of your seat, tightly gripping the handrest while you see the scenes unfolding, you also have those queer but delicious butterflies in your stomach and Kudos to you for that ! 👏

Sometimes you just stumble into a gem so unexpectedly and that is what this is ! I read all the chapters at a go in the dead of the night and couldn't seem to stop when I literally needed the sleep. That just shows you the power of your great writing.

I don't know what's more tempting the exotic gray plot or the sexy writing style. Zoya is everything a woman should be : Feisty, Stubborn, Firm but at times her vulnerability showed through her thoughts and only because you planned that way. You can't help but not relate to Zoya especially in regards to her relationship with Aditya. Can't actually love him but can't hate him too. Too much attraction is her Achille's Heels and I am pretty sure , same for our suave Mr. Aditya Hooda.

The small nuances. The unescapable logic. The exclusivity of the characters . And your edgy way of writing all of this makes this story of the very best I ever read. Would not be surprised if you send this to a publishing house and get published.

Thank you for treating us with this amazeballs story by taking out time to write for us :) Don't know the next time I will be able to comment. But you deserve all the appreciation :')

Also would love if Zoya doesn't compromise with her self respect and holds it strongly as she has been doing.

Lots of Love

-Lisa

Originally posted by: reddyr

Beautiful chapter. I love how you write. Its like reading a well written mills and boons novel. I love zoya's. portrayal so much. And I freaking love how she refused to have sex with him. Way to go self control. Usually in stories the woman always gives in to the man. Heart over mind. But this zoya is badass. Mind over heart. Cant wait for the next update. Do write soon

Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

First of all, thank you so much for sending me the PM !

The forum moves so fast that we can't keep track but this is one story I am pretty sure I am gonna refresh and see whether you have updated or not. It's just like you cannot just sit back and enjoy the story, more like you are at the edge of your seat, tightly gripping the handrest while you see the scenes unfolding, you also have those queer but delicious butterflies in your stomach and Kudos to you for that ! 👏

Sometimes you just stumble into a gem so unexpectedly and that is what this is ! I read all the chapters at a go in the dead of the night and couldn't seem to stop when I literally needed the sleep. That just shows you the power of your great writing.

I don't know what's more tempting the exotic gray plot or the sexy writing style. Zoya is everything a woman should be : Feisty, Stubborn, Firm but at times her vulnerability showed through her thoughts and only because you planned that way. You can't help but not relate to Zoya especially in regards to her relationship with Aditya. Can't actually love him but can't hate him too. Too much attraction is her Achille's Heels and I am pretty sure , same for our suave Mr. Aditya Hooda.

The small nuances. The unescapable logic. The exclusivity of the characters . And your edgy way of writing all of this makes this story of the very best I ever read. Would not be surprised if you send this to a publishing house and get published.

Thank you for treating us with this amazeballs story by taking out time to write for us :) Don't know the next time I will be able to comment. But you deserve all the appreciation :')

Also would love if Zoya doesn't compromise with her self respect and holds it strongly as she has been doing.

Lots of Love

-Lisa

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

😉 would love Aditya's side of the story, this is so hot and toxic for one's sanity

Originally posted by: Syed695

Spectacular update!!!waiting for more :))