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@Coffee_Chips

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#201

Damn! So this was it & how much I enjoyed reading from Adi'd perspective was smtn else 😆 I totally relate to the shampoo reference for the way Adi handles girls in his life & Zoya separately LOL I've come across such an instance, so I understand 😉

Adi seemed to be irrevocably in love with Zoya & excited to know how their next conversation will go. Hope you'll be giving it with Adi's perspective again 😃

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@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#202

thanks for pm as always.
It was nice to read what he thinks, Adi is so unpredictable.
I loved how you explained emotions from buying shampoo.

I cant wait for there first encounter. How will she react.

Please update sooner if possible.

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Santiago24

@Santiago24

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#203

Man! this aditya is indeed an asshole!

I cant stand him and that is precisely due to excellent writing! Great stuff! i love it... are u a gal or a boy? Such a wonderful hang of male mentality!

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: vamanali
Read it first thing in the morning at 5:30am.. .
Lived the away it's been written from Aditya's point of view.. It seems Zoya has hurt him really badly in the past.. And as that hurt is still raw, he could be showing himself as a difficult person while dealing with others..
This Aditya too has many shades to him just like the one in the serial.. For dealing with him Zoya should remember the tag line: Dikhave pe mat jao..

Beautifully written, dear.. It's a very engaging FF..

Thank you 😊

I have tried to give multiple dimensions to every character, just like we are in real life. I hope I can keep you engaged with the upcoming updates too. 😊

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Adiyalove
Aditya is a such a hot mess and you have explained him in
such beautiful way. I am not bored but I want to read it more just more...this story is just so addicting that i just want more... So plzzz do update it very very soon👏

Hot mess is Aditya's middle name. 😆

Thank you for being a consistent reader of Toxic. You always leave a lovely comment for each update. 😳

I have already started writing the next update but getting into Aditya's head is hell lot of difficult. He is an asshole but somewhat a redeemable asshole. Like you want to give him a second chance but also kick him for being an idiot. 😆

I hope I can engage you with the upcoming updates too. 😊

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: princessSonia
Two words to describe Adi...

He is a HOT MESS...!!!!

Oh my my... Oozing out charm...

How will a girl control her heart...

Awesome update...

Do cont soon...

I love the titles you add to every chapter...

They are quite interesting... And makes you more eager to read the update...

I try to capture the essence of each chapter in the titles. I am glad you like them. 😊

And how can Aditya not be charming. That would be a great sin.😆

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: rashuaq
You are hands down amazing writer Harsha.. Love your work..

Thanks a ton buddy 😊

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@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 7 years ago

#208

Just five words for you...YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER ⭐️

The way you describe characters' emotions is commendable.

As a reader I felt every emotion and imagined every scenario you beautifully explained in detail. 👏

My addiction with this story is TOXIC 😉 but I'm loving it ❤️

Keep writing because there's always me who's waiting to read.

Coming to the story...

I love how Aditya is shown to be a carefree guy who has a side that remains unrevealed.

Aditya and Zoya are becoming a mystery for me

I would love to see what more this story has to offer

Please do continue soon

Edited by Aquabutterfly - 6 years ago

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: SewwiVB
Damn! So this was it & how much I enjoyed reading from Adi'd perspective was smtn else 😆 I totally relate to the shampoo reference for the way Adi handles girls in his life & Zoya separately LOL I've come across such an instance, so I understand 😉
Adi seemed to be irrevocably in love with Zoya & excited to know how their next conversation will go. Hope you'll be giving it with Adi's perspective again 😃

Thanks for reaffirming my faith in Adi's perspective. I was so not sure that people will like it. He is a confused idiot with considerable power to do as he pleases which makes him borderline dangerous. 😆

Yup, you will be getting the next chapter from Adi's perspective.