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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#171

Both of them are SO in love with each other it drives them crazy. AND YES HARSHA! i was Just about to say that I really want to read Aditya's perspective. His mind is going to be even more turbulent and that is the beauty of this story. The messy, violent, all consuming love that both of them deny but cant get over.

The intensity of your romantic scenes gets to me everytimeee!!!! more than Adi, i think i wanted her to say Yes ;)

and then she said no... but hmm... he "found her"? interesting.. ye angle kya hai??

"disappear in thin air AGAIN" so she disappeared the last time...!! Okay... I REALLY want to know the back story now..!

so going to be waiting eagerly for the next one and I hope it's Adi's POV

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#172

It was awesome. .adi is really confusing...eagerly waiting to read the chapters through Adi 's perspective..it will be very interesting...update soon..

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CaffeineMuggle

@CaffeineMuggle

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#173

First of all, thank you so much for sending me the PM !

The forum moves so fast that we can't keep track but this is one story I am pretty sure I am gonna refresh and see whether you have updated or not. It's just like you cannot just sit back and enjoy the story, more like you are at the edge of your seat, tightly gripping the handrest while you see the scenes unfolding, you also have those queer but delicious butterflies in your stomach and Kudos to you for that ! 👏

Sometimes you just stumble into a gem so unexpectedly and that is what this is ! I read all the chapters at a go in the dead of the night and couldn't seem to stop when I literally needed the sleep. That just shows you the power of your great writing.

I don't know what's more tempting the exotic gray plot or the sexy writing style. Zoya is everything a woman should be : Feisty, Stubborn, Firm but at times her vulnerability showed through her thoughts and only because you planned that way. You can't help but not relate to Zoya especially in regards to her relationship with Aditya. Can't actually love him but can't hate him too. Too much attraction is her Achille's Heels and I am pretty sure , same for our suave Mr. Aditya Hooda.

The small nuances. The unescapable logic. The exclusivity of the characters . And your edgy way of writing all of this makes this story of the very best I ever read. Would not be surprised if you send this to a publishing house and get published.

Thank you for treating us with this amazeballs story by taking out time to write for us :) Don't know the next time I will be able to comment. But you deserve all the appreciation :')

Also would love if Zoya doesn't compromise with her self respect and holds it strongly as she has been doing.

Lots of Love

-Lisa

Edited by CaffeineMuggle - 7 years ago

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reddyr

@reddyr

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#174

Beautiful chapter. I love how you write. Its like reading a well written mills and boons novel. I love zoya's. portrayal so much. And I freaking love how she refused to have sex with him. Way to go self control. Usually in stories the woman always gives in to the man. Heart over mind. But this zoya is badass. Mind over heart. Cant wait for the next update. Do write soon

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#175

😉 would love Aditya's side of the story, this is so hot and toxic for one's sanity

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#176

That was worth the wait. It would be nice to have both perspectives. Thanks for pm as always

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: MissRight
Both of them are SO in love with each other it drives them crazy. AND YES HARSHA! i was Just about to say that I really want to read Aditya's perspective. His mind is going to be even more turbulent and that is the beauty of this story. The messy, violent, all consuming love that both of them deny but cant get over.
The intensity of your romantic scenes gets to me everytimeee!!!! more than Adi, i think i wanted her to say Yes ;)

and then she said no... but hmm... he "found her"? interesting.. ye angle kya hai??

"disappear in thin air AGAIN" so she disappeared the last time...!! Okay... I REALLY want to know the back story now..!

so going to be waiting eagerly for the next one and I hope it's Adi's POV

Oh yes, it's going to be Aditya's POV. You are going to love it. 😉

Thank goodness you adore the scenes. I was a little cautious while writing them because they aren't exactly mushy. I was scared that readers will start hating Aditya because of his high handedness. Messy and violent are accurate words to describe this love affair.

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@Coffee_Chips

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#178

Aditya aditya aditya... What is he even??? ☢️

Zoya smoothly managed to get herself together in the messy situation 😆 What's this I found you thingy? Seems suspicious but I'm eager to know everything from Adi's POV because this dude is definitely off to smtn & he has some kichdi in his mind which is pakaofying Zoya tbh 😉

Waiting for the next & this time I think the story will turn more sassy 😛

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Adiyalove
I am confused with Aditya did he hates or love zoya ? What does he really wants from zoya?
Now its going too be hard while waiting for the next update.
Anyways the amazing update and update soon plzzz don't make us wait for so long for the next chapter😉

Thanks buddy 😊

I know Aditya is really confusing and frustrating. I hope to ease your doubts in the next Chapter which will be written from the devil's perspective. 😉

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ArhiMaria

@ArhiMaria

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#180

Harsha, can't you see
I'm calling
A story like yours should wear a warning
It's dangerous
I'm falling

There's no escape
I can't wait
I need a hit
Harsha, give me it
You're dangerous
I'm loving it

Too high
Can't come down
Losin' my head
Spinnin' 'round and 'round
Do you feel me now?

Oh,
With the tone of your story
I'm on a ride
It is toxic I'm slippin' under
With a taste of a poison paradise

I'm addicted to it
Don't you know that it's toxic?
And I love what you do
Don't you know that it's toxic? ❤️

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I never thought there would come a day when I would be quoting/changing songs and what not!😆 What can I say with the latest chapter I can't help but be reminded of the Britney Spears number that I just penned down for u. Infact, it was going through my mind as I was reading the chapter. The song is so apt for Adit and Zoya's relationship at this moment. Zoya knows that her equation with Adi is so totally toxic yet she can't help but be drawn to him just the way he seems to be drawn to her.

He goes hot and cold but it seems like it all comes out of sheer frustration, he is mad at her for leaving and his verbal spats and hurtful words get even worse when he suspects that Zoya is not opening up about her true feelings about perhaps why she left him.

Speaking of Zoya, she is just super awesome, even if she feels completely vulnerable inside she does not show it, kudos to her and to you for portraying her the way you are! so so proud of her for not giving into her desires and jumping into bed with so many unresolved issues/misgivings. ( btw the scenes you created were pretty steamy and much appreciated, even if I am glad they didn't actually go all the way!😉)

I cannot wait to read our Mr Bipolar's perspective, I am sure it will shed some light on his true feelings just the way you have made me admire Zoya, I already know you will make me appreciate Adi too.

Edited by ArhiMaria - 7 years ago

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