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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#131

I Like your parts 4,5,6,7and8

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max_thakker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#132

Waitin for the next chapter eagerly

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harsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: deeps07
Read it all in a go...wow...its awesome..cant wait.to read more..
I am loving this Aditya and Zoya...loved how zoya explained to arjun about her feelings for him..
And that cliff hanger..cant wait to read more..i am addicted now..😆

Welcome to Toxic 😊

Thank you very much for your lovely comment. I am working on the next update. Can't just post anything, can I? 😉

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harsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: jyothirockz
Aditya definitely knows how to rattle up Zoya's Feathers. Feel bad for Arjun, but then it's really nice and courageous of Zola to state exactly what she feels and not keep him in any misconceptions.

Zoya is a powerhouse, the upcoming chapters will peel away further layers in their characters. 😊

Thank you. 😃

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harsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: SewwiVB

Hope you'll update the next asap cz this is one story I'm looking forward to in real sense 😉

The next update is under construction. 😆

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ArhiMaria

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Posted: 7 years ago

#136

Harsha, this latest chapter was magic!!👏 I think I am developing a girl crush on your portrayal of Zoya. She is strong, intelligent and has a no nonsense attitude. Love the fact that she is assertive and values her self respect. The way she handled Arjun and later Adi was sheer brilliance. She was quite honest with Arjun and super strong with Adi.

Adi and Zoya have such chemistry that one can't help but be drawn to them particularly when they are having an argument. Being the shrewd lawyer that he is, Adi ensured that Zoya remains in Aloha. Something tells me that he knows he messed up somewhere in the past and now in the present as well and just maybe he is trying to set things right between them even if he does a terrible job of expressing himself. Zoya, our wounded tigress can definitely put him in his place. Adi's reference to her being better off labelled as a s**t than being jobless and in turn her slapping him across his face played out infront of my eyes like a scene from a movie. Again kudos to you as a writer for creating these amazing visuals for us.

Needless to say I cannot wait to see what happens next...