Toxic ~ Even if we can't be together in the end - Chapter 23 Up ! - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: MissRight

This. This is what i absolutely love about this story. Gripping you so hard that you don't want to let go... Dont want to stop reading and every end of chapter is like "NOOO"

ZOYA QURESHI? hmmm... That is interesting...

Damn even i want so many answers now.. Zoya and Adi are so beautifully messed up...

And the KISS WAS HAWT...

I COULD Imagine Adi unbuttoning his shirt... Blush Blush..

Loved the updated.. Do come back soon!



Thanks for the wonderful comment. Muaahhh...This is my first attempt at writing a thriller. I am glad that you love it. 😊

Adi unbuttoning his shirt purposefully was my dirty fantasy after I saw that Haldi scene.😳 Can't demand the writers of the show but this story is mine. I can write whatever I want.😈
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Posted: 7 years ago


The best comment ever 😆

Mission Accomplished 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SewwiVB

That was pretty intriguing & Aditya was killing it with his motives. He's not over the fact that she left him ryt? & yes, I do agree people do have two sides & in fact perhaps three 😆 One in front of others that is friends & other outsiders, second in front of your family & last to your own. These two shady characters are running through a weird turmoil in life & yes, I'm waiting for the next chapter to unfold to see how Aditya & Zoya will be fighting their battle out..


Point well made dear.👏 I agree that the one side we have for ourselves is the truest - we know our wrongs even if we defend it in front of the whole world. 😉

I hope I can make the characters shady yet endearing. Like you want to root for them even though you know they are not totally correct and positive. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Santiago24

Fantastic update and terrific writing 👏


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
I am a Lawyer and absolutely loving this courtroom drama. I think its so very realistic and keeps me on the edge of my seat, truly. Loving this beautiful piece.
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Posted: 7 years ago
This story is so so so captivating and ... hot? I love it! Its so intense, my God!
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Posted: 7 years ago
I have fallen for this Aditya I mean... he is the pure definition of hotness. I haven't read anything sexier, trust me! This story is pure addiction. Hope u update soon and kindly do pm me as I have sent u a buddy request too and its needless to say, this is a f**king movie and not just a story. Everything is so well plotted and the way scenes are turning and taking place is just of another level. This is so very different from other AdiYa stories and I wish u all the best to keep up the tempo. It is.. I won't call it exactly dark but definitely handsomely devilish and oh Jesus, I love it!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _Rai_

I am a Lawyer and absolutely loving this courtroom drama. I think its so very realistic and keeps me on the edge of my seat, truly. Loving this beautiful piece.



Gosh ! I am so psyched right now. A real lawyer reading my story. Yipeee ! 😃


You gotta tell me if I make horrendous technical blunders. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _Rai_

I have fallen for this Aditya I mean... he is the pure definition of hotness. I haven't read anything sexier, trust me! This story is pure addiction. Hope u update soon and kindly do pm me as I have sent u a buddy request too and its needless to say, this is a f**king movie and not just a story. Everything is so well plotted and the way scenes are turning and taking place is just of another level. This is so very different from other AdiYa stories and I wish u all the best to keep up the tempo. It is.. I won't call it exactly dark but definitely handsomely devilish and oh Jesus, I love it!



Man, my ego just went through the roof. 😆

I will do my best to maintain the intensity and hotness, as you pointed out. 😉

On a serious note, thank you for being so generous with your praise. It just made my day. 😊


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sezo

That was amazing. I love how they both still need each other but neither wants to have in. They both want answers but don't get it. Plz update sooner.

Thanks for pm as always



Thank you. 😊

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