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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi guys, I will be starting this part from serial's latest episode only where zoya will be meeting Aashish and there's a surprise tooo😆
Part 3

Zoya could not believe her ears.
" Yash and pooja knew each other since an year"
And she had no clue!
Hell...he never mentioned her!
She wanted to think that they were close friends. But why would Yash hide about a friend from her? Zoya was not so backward that she wouldn't appreciate friendship between a man and woman!
Why?
His company was running on her money!
That portrait that Aditya broke was made by his wife!
And suddenly she remembered something... Something she had ignored.
The baffled and crestfallen look on Yash's face when Zoya had found that solitaire..
Was it meant for Her?
Wasn't it Her birthday that day?
So the ring she was showing off to her Abbu wasn't even meant for her!
Zoya kept walking on the road, aimlessly.
And she had refused to believe Aditya...
She laughed at her pathetic self..
"Watch out you mad woman !!!" A man shouted from his bike as it barely missed colliding into her.
It was pouring heavily
Perfect!
She didn't want Yash to rejoice up there, thinking that she will be crying over him...yet again.
But this was the last time...
She will never shed tears, Ever Again...

Aditya cursed as his car refused to start, no matter what.
He stepped out onto the flooded road, water was upto his knee level already. There was no way any damn vehicle would be able to cut through.
Mumbai or uski baarish
He shook his head ruefully. His home was Far away and God knew if he would be able to wake up to tomorrow's sun, if he dared to sleep in his car...
It was risky
And he had absolutely no intention of joining Her!
Aditya started walking through the water clogged road, his mind fogged with Zoya.
He had seen her leaving the venue with a man. But she was familiar with him so he didn't bother to look out for her.
" Vaise bhi...I hate her" he whispered to himself taking a chug from his bottle.
Finally he was relieved to see a church, his shelter for the night.
As he continued forward, something collided against his legs. Looking down, he found a broken shard of bangle floating.
Picking it up, he felt an odd familiarity. He surveyed the water again and could see quite a few pieces.
Deja vu
But whose?
Po...she is gone.
Then there was no other woman other than her
.
.
.
.
ZOYA!
His eyes widened. Why were her bangles here? His breaths quickened. She was an idiot after all!
"ZOYA" He shouted switching on his flash light.
"ZOYA" He called out yet again.
Maybe he was being way too much of a worrywart!
But his chest was clenching uneasily.
He clutched his hair hard.
Where was she? How will he find her? God knew from where those bangles have floated from!
'Aap maane ya na maane, hamari kismat Judi Hui hai'
She did say that! And he recognized her bangle too! So he will definitely find her. Alive
After searching for half an hour, he started getting desperate.
Was she fine?
It was when his eyes saw a silhouette lying on the ground.
" ZOYAAA!!"
He rushed to her side and patted her cheeks to wake her up.
Zoya...
She was not moving. He pressed her ears against her heart.
Where was her heart beat?
And wasn't she ice cold.
" No, No,No...I won't let you die with your stupid belief " he shouted.
And picking her up, rushed to the church. She needed to go to hospital but the roads were...
Slamming open the church's door, he laid her on one of the benches..
She needed to be changed, but she was wet and so was he. He needed dry clothes but from where?
There were quite a few people around, taking shelter from the rain. He asked them all, but of course there were all soaked and none had spare.
He saw the bishop lighting some candles and rushed to him.
"Father I need help, Zoya will die, I...she...we need dry clothing, Anything will do! He begged, as his eyes pooled with desperation.
" Unfortunately, my son...I am helpless too! Jesus will help your friend "
Aditya's face fell and he rushed to Zoya.
He pressed her chest to flush out the water, on fourth try she finally coughed some water but her heart beat was...
He gritted his teeth. Jesus could go to hell, for all he cared. He wasn't going to let her die on his watch.
The Bishop's clothes looked pretty dry too!
Aditya went to the bishop and pulled him behind the pillar.
People looked on as Bishop struggled, cursed but to no avail. Aditya stripped him completely, save for his undergarments.
" Jesus will help you!" Aditya whispered mockingly and rushed to Zoya.
Now, how to change her! There wasn't a woman around and he possibly couldn't!
Couldn't!
She will die! Her life mattered way more.
But there were quite a few men around too!
Standing up, he shouted " Please step out!" They looked at him as if he had grown horns.
He glared at the naked Bishop who gulped on his saliva, and requested the men to step out for a few minutes. Closing the door, Aditya breathed hard.
"Look at her face only!" He ordered himself and started undressing her.
Her entire face was pale unlike the usual red hue.
Her big doe eyes were closed.
Aditya failed to realise when he was done dressing her, he was engrossed in her when a knock on the door broke his trance.
" Shall we come in, son!"
Aditya looked at Zoya and leaning her against the wall, opened the door.
He touched her and his hand recoiled, her temperature was dropping, fast!
He picked her up and went behind the Jesus statue. Putting her down, he picked up every single flammable thing in his view, candles and even his wet clothes.
And set them ablaze. Plopping down by her side, he pulled her close, pressing her body against his and engulfed her in his warmth.
" keep alive" he mumbled as his sleepy head fell against her head, resting on his shoulders.

So how was it??😆

Note: My cursing of Jesus here and embarrassing Bishop is for the sake of story only.
I mean no harm to any religion in any way.
Edited by nish_vir - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
i can so see adi doing such thing
finally zoya believed that yash cheated her
and adi again saving her
hmm they will save each other
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
It was awsm dear.. real a parts in one go..Must say 2nd part was best.. pm me next tym.. just a suggestion , the font u used in 2nd part was bold n eye catcy use that font.. the story is going great.. well done
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

i can so see adi doing such thing

finally zoya believed that yash cheated her
and adi again saving her
hmm they will save each other
please do continue
bye sumi


Yeah...I couldn't stop from writing a " Aditya gives her body heat to save zoya" Part😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: dreamyp

It was awsm dear.. real a parts in one go..Must say 2nd part was best.. pm me next tym.. just a suggestion , the font u used in 2nd part was bold n eye catcy use that font.. the story is going great.. well done


Aww...thank you😆
And I will consider your suggestion😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
well... It couldn't have been more interesting. Dear it was so freaking awesome. Few things really cracked me up and that's the essence of Adi's character which you maintained beautifully. I'll not be able to tell you how much I loved it... All I want you know is THIS FF DESERVES TO BE LOVED...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: __VIHU

well... It couldn't have been more interesting. Dear it was so freaking awesome. Few things really cracked me up and that's the essence of Adi's character which you maintained beautifully. I'll not be able to tell you how much I loved it... All I want you know is THIS FF DESERVES TO BE LOVED...


I am humbled to know that my efforts were appreciated.
Thank you😃
And continue to keep watch on my story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Awesome Chapter😊
It was so in character😛
I could totally see Adi doing that😆
Please continue soon and pm me😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Awesome Chapter😊

It was so in character😛
I could totally see Adi doing that😆
Please continue soon and pm me😃


I will
Thank you😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
"Jesus will help you he whispered mockingly!! Omggg this is so the sarcastic Adi!! Loved this part! Had a good laugh reading it and imagining the bishop

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