ForEver & Ever- BepannahFF (Part 15- Pg 24 2 August))

amortentia15

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Posted: 7 years ago

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loved it!!! waiting for the next part

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Sonia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

amazing work dear👍🏼

do cont soon

loved both the parts...

AdiYa are cute...

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nish_vir

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mehr03
awesome fanfic...i really love how you are staying true to the story and characters. Please do not deviate from that. I love how Adil still resents her because it would not make sense for him to fall in love with her so soon. You also mange to express their conflicting emotions so well. You also write very well. The chipkali scene was so funny.
Just one request dr..i do not understand Hindi that well. If you could also include the English version of these hindi sentences, that would be very much appreciated. Thank you for sharing this fic with us. Please update soon and keep up the good work. Take care :)

Thank youu😃

And yes, I totally don't want them feeling attracted to each other this soon...but still I want them to be involved on an emotional level.

And I M a hardcore romantic,, so I'll set up situations to pull them close despite the fact that they'll feel nothing attractive about each other😆

And yes, from next time I'll write in English. It's just that the guttural words of harsh hooda wouldn't have sounded cheap, like I wanted them to be, if I wrote them in english😆

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nish_vir

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: __VIHU
Again a brilliant chapter... Just PERFECT.
Thank you for the beautiful FF. I am loving each and every scene, dialogue and words you write. I am crazy fan of drunk ML scenes and you offered that in the very first chapter. And this second one is such a treat to read.

I second you😆

And mygod! A drunk Adityya hooda, in my thoughts is a charmer beyond explanation.

Continue to share your views so that I can improve too!

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nish_vir

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: princessSonia
amazing work dear👍🏼
do cont soon

loved both the parts...

AdiYa are cute...

Thank you...

I'll post as soon as another fantastic scene grips my imagination😊

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She/Her

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

WOW!! Update it soon and I loved it!

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Ahhh that was amazing. Mr. Hooda is trying to play cupid 😆
Can't wait for the update 👏

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suhaaana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

beautiful start
Zoya meeting adi's parents is very interesting
waiting for more

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suhaaana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

part 2

superb part
senior Hooda is just awesome he knows how to pull Aditya's plugs and poor Zo she is his punching bag
senior Hooda's words are hilarious for Arjun 😆

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