AdiYa Os - Blame Game. [31.03] - Page 2

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

GIRRRLLL😆😆

Hii Girl! 😆😆

*FAINTS* Ahh You Don't need to else who will come and read my works and give such a long Feedback??! But trust me, I'm just too overwhelmed to know that you liked this piece of work 😃

Anya, how dare you?😆 Do you know you just killed me with this os. I'm dead this is aweeesssooommmeee *fangirls* Well I dare to do this else how would you have know that I write too 😳😆 Arre, I told you na Don't die soon, I will not let you die so soon so just relax, take some deep breath. In and out and you will be fine. I assure you and if it doesn't happen, then I'm Shorry!! 😆

Every line of your OS is written awesomly. 👏 Ahh! Thank you so much Bae! It means a lot!

The way you wrote Zoya's emotion. Her inner thoughts and how you described her shockness when she saw the betryal right in front of her eyes and how she came to the conclusion of denying that Yash couldn't do a thing. Also Adi's too. Well whatever I wrote It was a realistic response from anyone. We tend to decline the truth that someone whom we loved had betrayed us. Haven't we? Same goes with Zoya and Aditya, she was too petrified to understand that Yash had cheated her when he had taken all those vows to keep her happy and save.

Basically the way you portrayed the whole thing, hooked me in to reading more. Everyone can write, but only those who are talented can write and describe the surronding and the characters feeling within their writing. Your one of the kind. Once Again A big thank you for these kind words you have said for me. I'm overwhelmed. 🤗

You should defo think of writing an FF or SS. Well FF and SS are not my type, If I'll write it then due to my busy schedule I won't be able to finish it 🤢🥱 So no Stories more then three to four shots for now.😆

Also If only this how the actual episode was... Damnnn I would need an ambulance 😆 How the two play the "blame game". (The title fits perfectly, awesome choice of title.) Haha! I would have too jumped in excitement and cried at the same time if something like would have happened😛

I think its quite sad how Adi is solely blaming Yash and not Pooja. Cheating happens from both side not just from one. Pooja isn't a small baby that doesn't know any better. 🥱 Well you should have said Zoya too, because she too said that Pooja was at fault and Yash Wasn't but alas, this topic will never end because both of them are not in a mood to confront the truth

Please do write more and PM if you do!😳 I Will try! And I hope I do it soon ;)

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice