FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106

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deepika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#491

Thanks for d dedication...
Updates were amazing... loved it...
oh so aaliya is Ill...that's why she is doing dis..
beautifully defined... still feeling very bad for zain..
n I hope zain will win..
cont soon...

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manny136

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Posted: 10 years ago

#492

Great updates, what a rollercoaster of everything. I knew aliya letting zain come was not gonna be so easy and bam she made him the driver and had the other guy comes as well. altaf is such a piece of crap no manners. Poor zain but im glad we got to see him fight back a bit even though it got him sick. Glad we got to see what happened to zain after aliya left i was waiting for that. So aliya's accident has messed with her brain and now she has issues i was wondering if it was her brain injury also messing with her emotions. Like zain said if she could get her memory back she can get better. Lets see what happens next pls make zain kick tht altafs ass lol

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

"For a second she thought she should stop it ...like all her other challenges ..he will complete this too and make her feel worse ...but maybe this one will work...she would make sure he wont be humiliated ...just emotionally hurt ...pushing him towards his own home ...she wanted him to be away ...his face made her go uneasy ...a clock ticked in her heart ...her brain always hated to recall those moments ...good memories came with mounds of bad nightmares ..."

Oscar Wilde was quoted saying-"They've said that dreams come true,but they forgot to mention that nightmares are dreams too"

Its true that at time love comes like a dream and leaves like a nightmare...and its the bad memories..the haunting loneliness which slowly eats us away...the memories haunt us in the most unexpected of ways and times.they never come with a warning sign...maybe that is why they end up blinding our present.

Even if we keep aside Aaliya's anger and hurt..don't you think that she's trying to push him away,not because she has stopped loving him butbecause she wants to save herself from PAIN..

Their pain resonates through every single action of theirs..am not here to take sides..or even defend any character..am here as an individual..who is made to feel for both the characters equally by the writer..

Truth to be told,and you know that I'm not for flattery..believe me when i say this,i don't think even the CVs could have given this dimensoon to their characters..and developed Zain's character in this way..

"Maine hi kaha tha tumhe ..mai jala nahi tha ...toh aaj yeh bhi kar liya ..." This was one of my fav. lines from this chapter..

And Sim,regarding what happend in the twiterworld..darling you and I both know who and how she is and to the extent she can go to prove her superiority.

But then why should we bother ourselvs with people who are neither worth our time and energy..

And the rest of the discussion..we'll continue in DM :)

Love

Ann

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Riya
Someone intentionally created a fake account and wrote bad stuff about my story
This story dosent need any publicity
I get several readers each day on Twitter coming to read it , I hvd great frnds like Ann who still tweet their support. This person commented on her tweet, claiming this story as degrading love n humiliating ur lover, infact septically dissecting the names n characters
I should have understood their intent was to hurt and stop me from writing
I wrote the 3rd chap in anger, it dsnt hve a soul tht I put in each update
I realize my mistake sumthng tht evn Harshu did , he saw hate tweet more than love
But just like him, I say stay blessed
You don't like it don't read it, it's not a favour on me
If I write well I hve ppl coming bck to read it
N ur one of those readers tht I love to get feedback from
Above was not a reply just a note to tell you
I love you too
I need 2 days to reply to all the earlier comments
Evry wrd tht u all type matters to me
N it's my way of saying Thnk u
Loads of love to you dear
Sim

Riya ,dear Sim is not angry..she's upset..even I am,because for any writer,what he or she writes..or creates from the scratch..is like his/her baby..and then someone comes along labelling it and then cynically dissecting it,with the intention to hurt someone because that person's got personal grudge against him/her...is hurtful..and irritating and the girl in concern,lets be honest spews more hatred than love in a day,and am speaking from personal exp. because I ahd gone through something similar.

And Sim,as long as I live I'll be grateful to you for putting this up..and I'll remember BiIshq,in its true form,because it has and continues to leave an indelible mark in my heart..

Love ya both

Ann

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#495

"Whenever I hear old chronicles of love, it's age old pain,
It's ancient tale of being apart or together.
As I stare on and on into the past, in the end you emerge,
Clad in the light of a pole-star, piercing the darkness of time.
You become an image of what is remembered forever."(Rabindranath Tagore)

These were the lines that one of my readers had quoted in the comment on one of the chapters of The last 4 days...

And for the first time am quoting this for you,because its from one of my fav. poems..

And I feel that these lines speak for themselves,just the way your story does..

I have exhausted my vocabulary to extol your work..the poignancy in your words and the fact that they can make me feel like am going through the same motions..so before I get verbose,I would like to thank you for coming into my life and bringing in both the rain and the rainbow along with you,because I haven't read something like BIshq in a long time...Rhea/Aaliya maybe Zain's da...but you're for sure,mine...

TILL DEATH SU DO PART...these vows are expressed in different way,in different customs..but the meaning behind it remains the same..."Love' which had blossed in the hearts of two people ,cannot be nullified with the stroke of a pen or few words..because the strings were tied by the heavenly synod..no matter how hard it is.or how many thorns are laid on the road..its the will to hold on till one's last breath and chersih that person through sickness and health,bad times and good times,is what makes love the most celebrated and again misunderstood emotion in the world!

Someone might call Aaliya's actions degrading..call this a way of humiliating a person who is already guilty...but the person who question it..did she ever question the reason behind Aliya's uncontollable anger..i don't think so..

Love for sure is pride and all those other ornamental and beautifl things that poets and writers and ofcourse lovers have sung praises about..but it is a lot more than that..

If it brings smiles..it can bring tears too..if it heals .it can make wounds too..if it cares..it can hurt too...if it light then it can be dark too..

And that is where the beauty lies...if love is breathtakingly and beautiful,then I'm in love with this story..

We live in a society where there will always be a section of people who will find it difficult to accept the darker sides and deepest secrets of the human psyche..and its simply brilliant how you have intermingled science with literature.

Keemat hi toh hai ...chukka dunga ...jab tab tak ek ek ghaav ka hissab nahi du ...main ahi wapas aaunga ..

Tab tak mai intezaar karunga ...har dard bardahst hai ..har beizzati ...har zillat aur har chot ...tab tak jab tak usse sukoon na mile ...

ek pagal khane mai baithkar ek pagal se hi yehi baat bol rahi ho aap...

"I'M NOT SORRY THAT I MET YOU..
I'M NOT SORRY THAT YOU MADE ME QUESTION EVERYTHING
THAT IN DEATH YOU ARE THE ONE THAT MADE ME FEEL MOST ALIVE
I'M NOT SORRY THAT I LOVE YOU" (Elena Gilbert):

this is what i feel for this chapter..
No one said that loving someone is going to be easy..but its always going to be worth it..as long as you know that ,that person is worth is and as long as that person is more important to you than your breath..

Love
Ann

P.S. btw Sim,was Aaliya's Amygdala hurt..isn't it part of the limbic system and responsible for fear and anger...?