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Posted: 10 years ago
Aaliya.
She amuses me! Knowing how much she loves Zain...and then seeing the way she punishes him is like breath taking! It is said...We often hurting those who are most precious to us...But when for Aaliya it is a war, for Zain it is love...
Ans neither can be blamed because Everything is fair in Love & War!
Aaliya, can not yet seem to forget the humliation...her soul had been torn apart, jst like today Zain's love was questioned and made point against her love had been accused- her love towards Zain, her love towards Mamu.
Aaliya's situation reminds e of when we just want our to stay joint together, we dont want it to break! That is when we see no right or wrong, we just see the safety of our heart...and usually that is when we throw away, push away the thing most valuable to us...here for her it is 'Zain' because she knows Zain can be the reason for flying on cloud 9 but also can be the reason to a great fall off a cliff, or a drowning in the sea!

Sometimes your writing makes me speechless Sim, I find no words to comment...but once I start writing, I flow, and the reason is even if you don't want someone to reflect the pain this story captures...I have captured it, at times I see myself! That is probably why I read between the lines and understand the meaning behind meanings...it's a heart and destiny connection that you seem to write a story so deep that I see me...

I await the part where bth Zain and Aaliya become ZaYa again, become one because that is where probably I'll predict or make out an end to my story and that is probably when I might tell myself 'All's well that ends well' that is probably when I'd let my heart give justification and that is when I'd speak up for what I've waiting from the past 5 years...

Hats off to you Sim!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow man aliya did it again but zain is getting to er and her reaction though extreme is taking her to her breaking point. Poor zain how much will the guy go through lol Aliya is so hurt and confused her judgement is getting clouded and so her actions going to the extreme. Though this was a mini blow up soon a big one is coming. Cant wait for the next update, great chapter btw.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Will reply all tommorrow nigh, was busy tweeting harshus pic from KKK6 and running around my 2 yr old😆.

Dedication: This ones to my dear Manny😃, i still remember how i tricked you to write ur comments and its worth the effort. Love you for all your words sweets, and a comment is always better than a silent like helps me know where I am heading. Keep talking, and once again thank you for coming out of that silent world.

Loads of love

Sim

Funny, sad mixed update



Chapter 17

Mai karu Intezaar tera...

Aaliya reached home and sneaked to her room ...throwing the burkha on the floor ...she walked in the shower and switched on the cold water ...sitting below it ...shivering ...

she was turning harsher and harsher with him ...and he was soaking everything ...

As she turned off the cold stream ...and changed ...she realized her mistake...her anger had blinded her ...why was she getting so angry ...her dad had told her few things had changed in her personality post her accident was this one of them ...

She walked towards the balcony ...his bed was rolled up...she was feeling worst ...she should have stopped him ...searched for him ...what if he was harmed...there were wild animals around ...and it was cold ..very cold ...he would feel cold ...he had not eaten anything ...the sadness was eating her ...she cursed herself ...picking his torn picture she kissed it ...

As she walked back towards her drawer ...taking a sleeping pill ...the headache and thoughts would kill her ...she needed it today ...it had taken Rehman a lot of strength to deaddict her from these pills...but today she needed it ...as she took it and slept on the floor ... The night and heart was more peaceful now...everything dissolved ...like a mirage ...

It was ...afternoon when the brightness haunted her ...

The knocks were loud now...she walked uneasily towards the door to open it ...

Rehaman looked at her ...Aaliya ...school nahi gayi ...Zain kaha hai ...

She looked at her watch ...it was 2:30 ...dad aapne uthaya nahi mujhe

Beta subha se knock kar rah ahu...maine principal sir koh call karke kaha ki tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai isliye nahi aaogi ...tab who Zain ke bare mai pooch rahe the ...

Her head felt heavy and dizzy ...she was scared to look at Rehmaan ...where was Zain

Uska phone aaya tha kal raat ...friend ke paas gaya tha ...school bhi nahi gaya ...theek hai na woh ...

She walked back and picked her purse ...shrinking her fears ...no he would be in school ...or maybe ...

Dad...jara bahar jaa rahi hu ...jaldi aaungi...

Aaliya tabiyat thhek nahi hai ...ruko mai bhi aata hu...

Nahi theek hu...she walked a bit fast ...as the car moved she topped at several places trying hard to recollect where she had left him ...she had no memory the drowsiness was making it all cloudy ...

Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena
Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena

She was crying now ..he had said he would reach the school...where was he...maybe she had lost him forever ...it was dark and any wild beast might have attacked him...the tears were more insane now...she finally got the paved road and drove fast ...reaching the spot again ...

As she parked and popped out of her car scared to see the consequences of her blind hatred ...she walked towards the thick patch of trees where she had seen him last walking ...he was no where ...

She called several times ...crying and searching like mad ...

15 minutes later ...he was nowhere to be seen ...she had to tell Rehman ...they would have to call the police ...she had lost him ...her foolishness ...her hatred had harmed him ...when a small pebble hit on her back...she turned around fearing wild animal ...

She could see no one...when another pebble hit her back...she prowled again ...still no one...before the third could hit her she looked up...he was sitting on a branch ...giggling ...

Main tenu samjhawan ki...Na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki...Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera...Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

She felt so happy that she rushed towards him...he jumped down ...

Aao gale lago...he extended his arms...

She starred back...tumhe school jane koh kaha tha na...her anger mixed with happiness doing the talking now

Haa ...chutti leni padi ..

Kyu ...

Iske vajah se ...he showed his leg ...it had a swollen ankle ...bruised ...the floaters that he was wearing had broken too

Mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne...Tere dil diyaan raahan
Tu jo mere naal tu rehta...Turpe meriyaan saaha
Jeena mera.. hoye...Hun hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar aitbaar mera...Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri...Main tenu samjhawan kee
Na tere bina lagda jee


She was shocked, sad ...hurt to see it ...her tone milder now...

Pair koh kya hua ...

Woh mai kuch bana raha tha ...toh marod gaya ...actually mai gir gaya ...aur phir woh patahar bhi laga ...

Kya bana rahe the ...she asked ...

Ek minute ...he walked uneasily towards the back of the tree ...yeh ...

She saw a knotted basket ...handmade from dried long leaves ...filled with flowers ...

Ve changa nahion keeta beeba...Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Dil mera tod ke...Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan...Naal tere jod ke

She was angry now...

Tum yeh bana rahe the...

Haa ..tumhare liye ...

Zain tumhare pass dimag naam ki koi cheez hai ...

Nahi bas dil hai ...

Kab se bana rahe ho ye ...

Well kal raat se ...par pair marodne ke baad jyada phul nahi ikhhata kar payaa..

Aur yaha ped ke upar kya kara rehe the...

Tumhare gaadi ka intezzar

Agar mai nahi aatti

Toh yehi rehta ...haa doosra thofa bhi socha tha maine ...

Tenu chadd ke kitthe jawan...Tu mera parchhanvaa
Tere mukhde vich hi main taan...Rab nu apne pawaan
Meri duaa.. haaye...Sajda tera kardi sadaa

Tu sun iqraar mera...Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

Main tainu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee

She looked at him ...his love amazed her ..

Naukri se nikal denge mujhe agar tum jaise awara ke saath aur waqt guzara toh ...

Oh...toh tumhe jaana ha school ...jaao ...shaam koh aa jaana theek hai ...yehi wait karta hu, waise bhi ab Mougli jaise lagne laga hai ...jab shaam koh aaogi tab tak shayad bageera koh bhi dhoondh hi lu

Chalo gaadi mai baitho ...her dominating voice ordered

Who shahara chaiye ...chal nahi sakta na ..his eyes squinted in naughtiness ...

She gave him a stick...yeh lo aur chalo ..

He smirked ...zinda insaan ka haat milta toh behtar hota ...she looked back ...

Chalo ...ya yeh bhi feku...

She was amazed ...his craziness just grew in leaps and bounds ...as he sat in the car he kept the stick on the back seat ...who baadme bhi zaroorat padegi na isliye ...

She stopped at a food place and got him food...

Bhook lagi hai mujhe ...she emphasized ..in other words telling him she didn't care about him ..

He chuckled ...

Kal raat se kuch nahi khaya ...bhook lagi hai mujhe ...the mujhe was a bit hard pressed for his ears

Accha, tum toh ghar par thi na acche se khaya aur soyi bhi hogi ...infact maine toh khana banaya nahi tha ...toh tumhari toh davat lagi hogi ...

shayad jyada acchi neend aai hogi ...tabhi abhi dhophar koh time mila, mujhe yaha akela chodkar chain ki neend ...he chuckled

She turned her eyes away ...

Sazaa akele waha raat guzarne ke liye thi...bhooke rehne ki nahi ...he smiled seeing her tensed

Who paas mai papaya ka ped tha ...sab kha gaya ...he laughed ...tum kha lo...varna gir jaogi ...

She breath easily...it was difficult ...to make him understand ...

Zain ...

He looked at her ...

Theek ho ...her sixth sense said he was not ok ...

Nahi..

Kya hua...

He showed his hand ...it was bleeding ...below was his La's thick brown wrist band ...reminding Aaliya

She opened the dashboard to get the medical kit out ...still not showing any overt concern

Kya hua...

Who koi janwar tha ...maine bhagaya ...toh kaat gaya ...

She looked down ...it was a small wound...but a bite on her heart ...her slap ...

Chalo hospital ...

Pagal ho kya mujhe injections se darr lagta hai ...

Rabbis ho jayega ...mar jaaoge ...ya pagal ho jaoge

Waise bhi pagal hu...aur hoga toh kya farak padega ...aur islye toh waha choda tha tumne ...varna kya resort samjh ke drop kiya tha mujhe ...

Ek baat batao, tum kya ho ...pehle jungle mai chod deti ho...phir marham patti karane bhi le chalti ho ...agar zakham deti ho to usse dekhna bhi seekho ...

She kept quiet ...Mami ka khayal hai ...varna tumhari parvah nahi hai mujhe ...

mujhe yakken hai uss janwar koh bhi tumne rishwat di hogi ...tabhi nere taraf baar baar ghoor raha tha ...tumhare tarah ...

Ho gaya mazaak ...ab chalo..

Da.. theek ho jaunga ...itni chinta mat dikhao ...kahi mai sach mai samajh lunge ki tumhara pathar dil pigal chukha hai ...aur mere kismat mei aur koi sazaa nah hai

She called Rehmaan ..Dad ...zain ke friend ke yaha who bahar soye the ...kisi janwar ne kata ...injections ready rakhiye woh aa rha hai ...

He looked shocked ...Da ...please yaar ...wapas us jungle mai chod do ...tumhe pata haina mai darta hu ...aur tum mujhe apna haat bhi nahi dogi jab woh badi sui layenge

Da...ek baat batao ...tum wakai mujhse nafrat karti ho...ya apna pyaar chupane ke liye mujhse door rehne ke liye yeh sab karti ho...khair dono baat mai ...dard toh mujhe hi hota hai

Accha kiya ...waha choda ...kal joh kiya shyad khud koh rok nahi paaya, control karna seekhna chaiye mujhe...jaise tum karti ho hai na ...

She didnt look at him

When they reached the hospital he didn't get down ...ma nahi utrunga ..gaye baar utra tha ...toh yeh sab hua ...ab toh soch ke bhi darr lagta hai ...

Uthro ...

Accha wheel chair lao ...

Kyu..

Aree pair dekho mera ...dard ho raha hai ...aur tum toh mujhe sahara dogi nahi...aise hospital mai lakdi ke saath chalunga toh log mujh par hasenge, aur waise bhi adha Jaipur toh mujhe nhar chukka hai ..aur izzat nahi utarvani ...jao le aao ...

As he sat in the wheel chair ...he asked her to push it ...she smirked...

Thodi seva bhi karva lu ...kaha dekhne koh milta hai aisa nazara jaha malik khud apne naukro ki chakri kar rahe ho ...he was laughing ...

Aaliya walked in and saw Rehmans face ...angry ...

Chachu ...who mere dost ne night camping bola ...ab mujhe kya pata ...aise janwar bhi aate hai apni camping karne ...usse mat dekhiye ...meri bevakoofi hai ...aise harkat hi nahi karni chaiye thi...

Rehman held his ears ...yeh pair koh kya hua ...

Ouch ...chachu ab aap yeh sab tareke mat sikhaye ...koi aapko observe kar raha hai ...pata chala agla experiment mujh par hi kiya jayega ...

Who mud gaya ..he examined it ...nange pair the ...

Haa ...

Pathar bhi laga hai ...

Haa ...

His eyes had tears ...Zain ...waise toh mai teen injections dene wala tha ...

Teen

Haa

Par ek extra apni laparvahi ke liye ...

Nahiii the shout was loud as Aaliya walked out ...smiles tears relief ...it was strange

When Rehmaan got the injection the whole hospital was awakened ...he was shouting as Aaliya peeked to see his craziness ...as two wardboys pinned him down...

Cahchu atyachhar hai ...please chod dijiye...

Ek aapki beti mera jeena dushvaar karti hai ..aur ek aap ...tang aa gay ahu ...dono se ...he murmured ...

Aaliya stopped and looked away ...she had to do something before she could harm him more ...

Khamoshi thi tere bina... saanse bhi rukhi thi ...

ab jaakar chain aaya ...tujhe bin dekh aankhe taras gayi thi

SIM

Pre-cap: Zain and Aaliya the verbal battle continues lets spice it up with La ...oh La La

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Posted: 10 years ago
Reading this only one thing came to my mind...
Jab koi baat bigad jaye...
Koi mushkil parh jayein...
Tume dena saath mera...Saathiya!

These two share a bond that is more than wonderous and praisable...Aaliya melted today- clearly she did today let's say Zain made the first embark to his journey of winning her heart! Zain once again today makes me feel that is it really true? Do lovers like him exist!? The gift he made was bueatiful and the way he hid those wounds and terror that his mind registered the night before makes me feel is this really Zain?

Their love, their bond is mesmerizing! She dosent want to hurt him, to make his heart feel pain, she hurts him to drive him away- but he just has to much power to absorb it, like a sponge he takes it in and squeezes it out...

Aaliya releases her pain by giving him pain...whivh again is fair enough, because Everything is Fair in Love & War!

I smiled towards the end because Sim...as I said before love is pain but the cure to the pain is the love itself! And I'm amazed by the way you potrayed it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
A note to saleha
Dear I was katti IG u didn't update
But why r u katti with me
Did I say something wrong, Thn truly sorry
Sorry
Sim
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loved d chap...

tremendous... excellently written...aww...he is so hurt.

bt still trying to be brave... I love him...I just can't understand aaliya...first she hurts him n then feels guilty :( ...can't she just accept d fact dat zain loves her more than anything n everything... anyways precap is interesting... cont soon!!
Edited by Priya_arora - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
speechless updates
heart touching loved it from heart n in d last part I could c aaliya's concern hopefully nw she may not hurt him cont soon
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Chapter 16
The whole page from Aaliya's diary was heart wrenching
I cant imagine SIM from which level of guilt and regret Zain is going through their pain is immense and it always leaves me teary eyed
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zainedil

A note to saleha
Dear I was katti IG u didn't update
But why r u katti with me
Did I say something wrong, Thn truly sorry
Sorry
Sim



Missed me ? ;D my dear Sim i am not pagal that i Will get katti i was just writing on my phone since the laptop is not available , don't say sorry exams just ended and I will do lamba wala reviews for all the chapters don't worry and don't you ever think I am angry but hungry for your updates for sure , if you would not have done Kati then I would not have write that fast , and that means that a great writer like you my Sim likes these mere attempts of mine to write and your update is coming and is very long ! Love you btw I liked the angry Sim melodramatic queen , chalo kam se kam mujhe miss tho kiya warna inn deewanon ki bheer main humain laga aap humain bhul Gayi 😆 bauhat hogai nautanki 😆 ! Love you Sim Sahiba the Great !
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So, Zain miyan have become mooglie for his Aaliya😆

The way he said adha jaipur tw waise nehar chuka hai mujhe or izzat nai utarwani🤣

Da...ek baat batao ...tum wakai mujhse nafrat karti ho...ya apna pyaar chupane ke liye mujhse door rehne ke liye yeh sab karti ho...khair dono baat mai ...dard toh mujhe hi hota hai

Accha kiya ...waha choda ...kal joh kiya shyad khud koh rok nahi paaya, control karna seekhna chaiye mujhe...jaise tum karti ho hai na ...

These lines were awesome how perfectly he was describing Aaliya's situation.

Thanks for quick update your song selection is always amazing beautifully describing the whole scenario👏

Continue soon😊

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