FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 41

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Posted: 10 years ago
The past few chapters reminds me of this lyrics:
Pyaar hai ya sazaa, hai mere dil bataa
Toot ta kyun nahi dard ka silsila.

I don't know why. Somehow it returned me to BI days. The pain that Zain and Aaliya carry and feel isn't easy to submit even to us, readers. Their needs are strong but they don't fall in that trap. I'm glad they don't allow themselves to be captured by the lust.
15. chapter, honestly, gave me hope that Aaliya will forgive him. Especially when he said that he would leave only when she forgive him. Oh wait, from her room or her life?
Then I was afraid that she'll forgive him. What if she forgive him and he then leave? What then? How will they live without each other?
At the same time I want and I don't want her to forgive him. If she forgive him, he may leave. If not, he will stay there but will be hurt all over again. They deserve to be free of that pain. Both have suffered enough because of mistakes and greed of others.
I can't wait for next chapter. Little afraid of what will happen but more impatient.
Amazing chapters, really.
Lots of love, Sim 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Khushi ka niqaab jo pehna hein hamne
Isse zara utha ke toh dekh...
Gham ke aansun jo chipaye hein hamne...
Inhe zara mitta ke toh dekh...
Na ji payenge iss nafrat ki aag mein
Hamein iss mein jala ke Na dekh...

This chapter at the end bought me at the verge of crying...today he begged, not to Allah but to Her! For not her love but acceptance of his love! Zain has always taken my heart away...He makes me feel fimiliar to all he goes through...what he did today has shown thats his insides are yet cracking and falling apart, today he clearly wants to show Aaliya...that if she dosent accept him soon she'll have to face times where he will not be with her even if she wants him...

Zain. Is a mirror, a mirror for suffering and pain in love...he reflects each part of it! But I proudly say he!s the reflection of 'Love' and 'Hatred' as a whole...he loves whole heartedly he hates whole heartedly!

But Aaliya...her terror and anger and unsecured feeling is well understood but what he's doing, and what she's getting him to do is 'Harsh!' It's unbelievable to see how heartless she can show herself to be...being well aware how soft she is on the inside this mask of being heartless will not only get her to end up loosing Zain, but frankly she'll loose herself!

Sim...your turn...i have no words to compliment this writing these emotions this story! Your way to express and convey jist makes me want to scream out my emotions...but im still in the shakles of my unsecure bubble...someday I might release my soul and let it out but again it'll take time...

This story is a mirrior to ME! It shows me what has happened to me...what I could have done what I still can...but yes!
THANK YOU! FOR THIS REFLECTION!


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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update so aliya decides to go to the movie but in a burkha lol but zain got his revenge. The way you showed the angst btwn them was great, they both have so much pent up emotions hopefully it will sooner or later get out. Maybe next chapter?? lol can't wait for the next one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm very interesting precap wonder why they are mad at each other update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

amazing updates...
beautifully written...
hehe I loved d part where zain was teasing her when she was secretly trying to finding him 😆
& d movie part was awesome...
cont soon...

Thank you Deepika
yup the searching and movie ..
wait and watch
love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nashfa

Amazing chapter

Movie part was awesome
Loved the part where aliya hiding behind curtains & finding zain
Continue soon



Riya

Thank you Riya
keep reading
love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry

fab update sim!!!👏...khup khup khupach chan ..aliya❤️..spatula se hi shi dava toh lagayii😛..eksss zain ka bhojpuri romance☺️☺️☺️..bechari aliya puri tarah se phas gayii..but iske baad zain ka kya hoga soch ke bhi dar lag rha hai😆...loved it specially last part ..so beautifully written👍🏼...awesome precape..so excited😛 ..plz update lavkar lavkar...waiting😳..thanxx for pm..😃

Ishu
Thank you
ya zain ka kya hoga ...yeh toh upar wala hi bataye
love
sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harsh_pree

Amazing as always..
Zain washing clothes...haha
Luv the movie part...awsome




-mariya

Mariya
Thank you so much
yup the man is doing it all
love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

He uttered ...I love you Aaliya ...bahut akela ho gay hu ...kis muh se maafi maangu yeh bhi nahi maloom...jab maaf karogi tabhi chain aayega ...bas sukoon chaiye ...sirf tumhare daman mai milta hai woh ...sona chahta hoo ...har cheez se doori rakh sakta hoo...par tumse nahi ...maaf karna ...tumhari kahi har baat thukrayi ...par nahi rok sakta ...nahi baand sakta ...har din tootunga ...par aaj ek din sirf tumhare saamne bikharne do ...I love you ...❤️

I love you SIM for this Amazing 👏

Continue soon

Kiran
yes those were written on the forum itself ...the best ones
love
sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

wow ! Superb chappy...loved it a lot...ye aaliya b na...kya treeka nikala zain k sath jakar b na jane ka :p...bt zain is no less...aaliya ko apne hi jal mein phasa diya 😆 ...Omg d last part was so emotional...loved it...precap angry aaliya...do cont soon !!!

Priya
Thank you so much
yes she is a smart women ...
keep reading
love
Sim

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