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Posted: 10 years ago
Aaliya reached her room and cried ...every hatred towards him was killing her soul...and he needed her, but she didn't want to move with him...the roads had dried up ...but she had to find what was hurting him ...it was more than her hatred ...he was still fighting with her ..but his soul was losing a battle against a pain ...

These lines describes Aaliya's state that how desperatly she want him to be with her but at the same time she cant It reminded me of Zain's dialogue in Beintehaa when he said tum is waqt mujhe apne pass b chahti ho or khud say door bhi. . . . .

Zain is working in graveyard when I read that I was on the verge of crying .😭
and how his suffocation is increasing day by day when he wanted to share it with Aaliya but he is all alone in spite of her presence the darkness of the room when he wished to spend just 5 minutes with her
It just drenched my heart I was feeling like some one is squeezing my heart in a fist believe me while writing this comment I'm about to cry

And the poem you have written what a marvellous work it was I'm speechless hats off to you my dear👏
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg sim bahut rulati ho tum sachi me!!!.. it was so heart wrenching and emotional😭😭😭 ..poor zain💔...but the way described it was so beautiful..brilliant job done👏👏👏...waiting for their confrontation...plz update lavkar lavkar...thanks for pm.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ch-7 was Lite one but Ch-8 made me angry upon Aaliya.she was behaving so opposite of her character BTW hats off Sim as I never thought in my dreams even that a day would come I don't feel good of aaliya but your writing MashaAllah ...U R Incredible
Love
Jaya
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am soo sorry Sim!
It took me a long while to read the chapters!
But kya karein... whenever i started reading, my eyes woulg get moist to such an extent that i can't read further and then i had to run to the washroom to wash my eyes!
I am sure my mom was thinking that I was watching some very emotional movie by the amount of confused stares she was sending my way!
I started reading yesterday but finished today! Actually i just cud not bring myself to read further from the part when Aaliya rushes to her room...
I know I sound like a duffer but i just cud not read further.. So I stopped reading after that... And I completed the chapter now...

Again, all the lines used were amazing... It is difficult to pick certain lines here but i will just give you a quick list-

- One, when Rehmaan tells Aaliya how Zain treated her n then how she is treating him... That sentence actually gave me a quick recap of the whole story and I got angry on Aaliya even more...

-Then, the first time when he asks her to just sit with him for 5 min and her horrible reply! Well, even that was when I was crying like a fool...

-Then was when she called Fahad Bhai... well i felt my own hated towards Aalia lessenin a bit...

-And finally... the mst touching scene... that 5 minutes of them together were so horribly given by Aaliya... and of course, Zain's lines,
'Da...bas paanch minute maanga tha ..usme mai bhi sivya khamoshi aur andhere ke mere saath mai kuch nahi.

Sorry tumse kuch maang liya, shayad galat kiya ...agar aise hi akele andhere mai baat karna tha toh khud ki kar leta ...

Rehne do ...meri ghutan mere seene mai hi dafan rehne do ...tarash khan eke liye shukriya ...chali jaao .."



What was this yaa? Whatever good i had felt about Aaliya some time b4 directly went into the drain... It was sooo sad... And to know what Zain had been doing to earn those damn 800 rs, it was more heart-breaking...


All in all, Amazing chapters... I dnt know you have even read till here or not... If u reached till here, then one last thing to say... and thats


HATS OFF TO YOU SIM!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sim,once more u proved that u are a brilliant writer.
it was very emotional & th lines u were used were just awesome
continue soon
take care
lots of love


riya
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya5666

I am soo sorry Sim!

It took me a long while to read the chapters!
But kya karein... whenever i started reading, my eyes woulg get moist to such an extent that i can't read further and then i had to run to the washroom to wash my eyes!
I am sure my mom was thinking that I was watching some very emotional movie by the amount of confused stares she was sending my way!
I started reading yesterday but finished today! Actually i just cud not bring myself to read further from the part when Aaliya rushes to her room...
I know I sound like a duffer but i just cud not read further.. So I stopped reading after that... And I completed the chapter now...

Again, all the lines used were amazing... It is difficult to pick certain lines here but i will just give you a quick list-

- One, when Rehmaan tells Aaliya how Zain treated her n then how she is treating him... That sentence actually gave me a quick recap of the whole story and I got angry on Aaliya even more...

-Then, the first time when he asks her to just sit with him for 5 min and her horrible reply! Well, even that was when I was crying like a fool...

-Then was when she called Fahad Bhai... well i felt my own hated towards Aalia lessenin a bit...

-And finally... the mst touching scene... that 5 minutes of them together were so horribly given by Aaliya... and of course, Zain's lines,
'Da...bas paanch minute maanga tha ..usme mai bhi sivya khamoshi aur andhere ke mere saath mai kuch nahi.

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sorry tumse kuch maang liya, shayad galat kiya ...agar aise hi akele andhere mai baat karna tha toh khud ki kar leta ...</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Rehne do ...meri ghutan mere seene mai hi dafan rehne do ...tarash khan eke liye shukriya ...chali jaao .."</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">What was this yaa? Whatever good i had felt about Aaliya some time b4 directly went into the drain... It was sooo sad... And to know what Zain had been doing to earn those damn 800 rs, it was more heart-breaking...</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">All in all, Amazing chapters... I dnt know you have even read till here or not... If u reached till here, then one last thing to say... and thats</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">HATS OFF TO YOU SIM!</font>


U have no clue reading this makes me so happy
I did reach the end atleast 5 times
Loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb updates felt bad for Zain
What hapoened to Zain in the 15 days and what's bothering him 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

chp 6-amazing chapter
jealous aaliya
loved it
really beautifully written
aww..zain's pain
chp 7-awsm chappy
a lil funny
lol zaroon's tricks
bt aaliya tk zain's side ;)
hppy to c that
aww...wat hppnd to zain
wat he has seen that ?
Chp 8-aah aaliya
why she cant jst cmplete his atleast one wish
m literly crying
so aaliya gt to knw abt where is zain wrkng
excited 4 precap
d chp was defined really brilliantly
do cont asap !




n d shayari is really beautiful

Thank you so much Priya
I know was a sad update ...]
keep reading
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

wow jst amazing updates..
Read almost 3-4 chap in a go..
N thanks for pms..
Nw cmg to d updates..i have no words to describe hatts off to u..
Omg poor zain he was jst wanna talk wid aaliya for 5 mins..hope aaliya's heart will melt soon..
Zain is working so hard..
Pls update soon..

Hi Deepika
yes zain miya is doing everthing to woo her back
thank you so much
loads of love
Sim

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

It hurts too much , he just asked for five minutes and even in this he just got loneliness and darkness , she is hurting him way too much . I feel crying for him , because reading this chapter , reminiscing all the hardships he went through and now he is still suffering just add to the pain please just give him a little hope even 1 percent and the shayari i want to thank that special friend of yours who gave you the ability to write such damakedaar things ,I know it's your personal matter but seeing the beauty of this poem just try to send it to that friend , who knows , you might get an answer 😉 .

Sim Sahiba the Great , c'est ce qu'on appelle une oeuvre d'art ! (this is what we call a masterpiece !

loads of love !

A makhi !

Saleha
Thank you so much ..I know that 5 minute scene was difficult for me to write to
yes the friend of mine gave me the best gift of words ...and unfortunately is not around anymore...sometimes people move away and you have to let them go, I did ...and it was not on a bad note...and its been 8 yrs now ...the person dosent even know to the extent my writing has grown from rhymes to novel...
and the comment in french is priceless ...
Merci Mademoiselle 😳
loads of love
Sim

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