~Pretty Women~ (A ZaYa Drabble)*UPDATE 8*(5/3) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Welcome back baba
A really nyc update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
This update of yours made me remember the pool side scene after holi..
This was an awesome update...
Thanks fr the pm...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Lovely update
I loved it
Aapki aatha hamesha sathayegi 😆
Thanks for d pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Amazing update ...!!
Very well written :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Its amazing.
I'd be waiting for more.
Seems like a good concept.

-Tanu. ^_^
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Wow...
Very nicely written update...
Just loved it...
Amazingly written👏
Pls continue soon...
And thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Lovely update!
Loved it...
Continue soon n thnx for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
~Pretty Women~

Day 2: Jadoo Teri Nazar
Zain was getting ready for going to the office but he
was not able to select a shirt to match his trousers
Zain:Kya roj-roj ka jhanjhat hai yeh...har roz formal wear pehen ke jao...
i mean come om man can't wear casual to the office?
Which should i wear today?
Yeh Pink wali ya yeh blue waali?
Inki pinki ponky...
inky pinky ponky...
nahi samjh aa rha
he puts the pink one in front of his chest and looks in the mirror
and the blue one.
Aaliya was seeing this whole hazard from behind
she indicated him to wear the blue one with her gorgeous eyes.
..
Zain went to the washroom and came out of the washroom wearing the pink one.
Zain's POV:Samjhati kya hai yeh mkb apne aap ko...issne kaha toh main pehn lu..huh
Aaliya POV:Pata tha mujhe yeh aisa hi karega...isliye maine blue waali boli thi take yeh pink pehne...hmmm pagal!
Zain:Aisa kya soch rahi ho maamu ki bhanji?
Aaliya:Mm..main...woh...kuch bhi toh nahi...lao tumhari tie band du...
She snatches from him
Zain:Koi zaroorat nahi hai...
snatches it back
Aaliya:DO...*And finally he gives it*
She is tying his tie while he is slowly moving forward towards her...
She is taking steps backward and finally she hits the wall.
The tie is tied...aaliya tries to go but zain stops her by keeping his hand on the wall.
They are just inches apart.
Zain:Aaliya...
Aaliya:Huh?
Zain:Kyu karti ho tum meri itni phikr?
pushing him aside she told hm
Aaliya:Zain tumhe kitne baar kaha ki tum mere shauhar ho...aur apne shauhar ki phikr karna koi galt bat nahi...
And she left
Zain POV:
Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane
Poochhoon To Main Zara
Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu
Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha...oye zain yeh kaise thoughts aa rhe hain..
shut up!!
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BABA BI - chota sa uphar aap sab ke liye...
zain ki buddhi(Brain) aa jayegi...aap chinta na kare..
Aur hann like and comment zaroor karna warnnaa u know...
MERI AATMA TUMHE HAMESHA SATAYEGI!!
LOL
(Lots of love)
Edited by -Mera-Hi-Jalwa- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Loved d update
Reminded me of Zaya all d times when Aaliya helped Zain to wear his tie
Kya din the woh
Thanks for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Just loved it..
Typical zaya...
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