~Pretty Women~ (A ZaYa Drabble)*UPDATE 8*(5/3)

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Ana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Awesome teaser.
But plz kal update kar dena.

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seriously???

@Uniquely...me

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Loved that if you would updated it today...

But plz...continue...

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zayalove

@zayalove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

So good sneak peak .
Now update soon

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Anagha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Awesome prologue

What!?! Aaliya is pregnant

Continue soon

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bloodsheds

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Read chp-2,3,4 & sneak peak as well 😆
Drabble series is very interesting 😳
Pls keep on writing 😉
Continue soon pls 😃

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Sunidhi

@-Mera-Hi-Jalwa-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

~Pretty Women~

Day 5: Ajab si adayai hai

Aaliya was feeling very low after the incident in the party.

Zain was trying boost her happiness.

Zain:Maamu ki bhanji...tum toh kehti thi ki tum kisi se darti nahi...kal dikh gaya mujhe tum kitna darti ho aur kitna nahi.

Tears brewed up in her eyes.

Aaliya:Zain...*she starts crying after remembering the incident*

Zain:Are aaliya...mai to mazaak kar raha tha...bas abh royo toh mat...mjhe bahut bura lagta hai...

Aaliya hugged Zain as tighly as she could.

Zain also reciprocated to her hug.

Aaliya:Zain wada karo tum mujhe kabhi bhi chod kar nahi jaunge...kabhi bhi nahi...

Zain:shh aaliya main tumhe kabhi bhi cod kar nahi jaunga...agar mujhse picha bhi chunaya chahogi tab bhi tumhare gale pe latkunga...ab bas plz rono band karo...tumhe aise dekhna mujhe bilkul bhi achaa nahi lagta...tumhari naak aur bhi lambi lagti hai...

Aaliya:Youuu*Takes the pillow and starts hitting him*

Zain:achaa sorry sorry...ruk jao maamu ki bhanji.

They both fall down on the bed in a hugging position Aaliya on Zain.

Zain's one hand on her head and the other on her head protecting her.

Aaliya's both hands were on his shoulder.

Aaliya shut closed her eyes in fear of falling down while Zain was carefully noticing her expression...every line of her face.

Zain POV:

Maine suna toh bahut tha ki jab pyaar hota hai toh sub cheeze achee lagte hai..par maine kabhi yeh nahi socha tha ki main kabhi iss...iss hi maamu ki bhanji se pyaar karunga jisse kabhi main nafrat karta tha...sochta tha ki is ke aane se mere zindagi bigad gayi par main galat tha iske aane se mere zindigi..ab compete si lagti hai.Iske chehra ki har ek line mujhe abh achhiii lagti hai...iski har adaa mere dil ki dhakane badha deti hai.Naa jaane yeh mujhse pyaar karti hogi yaa nahi...

Aaliya slowly opened her eyes to see her in the arms of Zain.

While Zain was lost in his imaginary world he heard a squeal.

Aaliya:Zain...

Zain:huh..umm haan..

He slowly left her .

Zain POV:

Mera man toh nahi kar raha tumhe chodne ka par phir be...main chahta hoon ki meri marte dum tak tum meri bahoon mein ho aur mujhe inhe addayo se maroo...MAAMU KI BHANJI

He said the previous line a lil louder,that even Aaliya could hear it.

Aaliya:Bolo Kitkit?

Zain:Umm...kuch nahi...

Zain left fr office.Aaliya was at home doing all the work including washing clothes,utensil etc.

Aaliya went to her room for taking some rest and she felt like puking.

She went to the washroom and did all the vommiting.

Aaliya:Patani kyu aaj itni tabiyat kharab kyun lag rahi hai...

Suddenly shaziya came in.

Shaziya:Aaliya tum saif ,sana,arub ko le aaogi?Plz mujhe bahar jaana

Aaliya:Jee bhabhi

Shaziya left from there and aaliya too to pick up the kids neglecting her health.

Zain forgot his important file in his room so he came back to BV.

Aaliya was backing and her head was spinning.

She was about to fall unconscious on the floor but Zain came running towards her and caught her in his arms.

Zain:Aaliya...aaliya kya hua *He shouted her name but she didn't respond*

He sprinkled some water on her face and after that she opened her eyes.

Zain:Aaliya kya hua...

Aaliya:Zain mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai stomach mein.

Zain:Chalo main tumhe room mein leke chalta hoon...*He takes her in his arms and goes to their room*

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Precap:Aaliya pregnant.

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BABA BI - Bhakt jano plz comment karo warna tumhe toh pata toh ho gaya ki main kya kahungi...

MERI AATMA TUMHE HAMESHA STAYEGI!!!!!!!!!!

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bloodsheds

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Yay me first 🥳
Achaa coming to this part of the drabble !
Hmm it was really nice
Zain miyaa totally latoo over Aaliya
Aaliya over Zain 🤪
Hayee really sweet update 😳
Continue soon !!

Edited by Ilovezaya - 10 years ago

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MohabbatCrazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Wow!

Tht was so shewt!

Zain has totally fallen for Aliya!

And the precap is ahem ahem!

Looking forward to it!

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zayalove

@zayalove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Baba ji drabble was so cute ..
Aliya crying zain comforting her the bed part .. all r very cute
Lekin iss sab pe ek sawal toh banta hai boss
Aliya pregnant kaise ... .update soon i cannot wait

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Sunidhi

@-Mera-Hi-Jalwa-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

~Pretty Women~

Day 6: Jee Karda

Zain reaches their room with Aaliya in his arm.

Zain:Aaliya tumhe itna dard kyun ho raha hai?

Aaliya:Zain mujhe nahi pata...mujhe pet dard ho rha hai...

Zain:Ruko...yeh lo isse tumhara pet dard theek ho jayega.*He gives a tablet for stomach ache*

Aaliya:Zain mujhe subhe se ulti bhi aa rahi thi...

Zain:Aaliya kitne baar maine tumhe kaha hai ki itna kaam mat kara karo phir bhi...meri toh koi sunta hi nahi...

Aaliya:Zain mera kuch katha khane ka man kar raha hai...

Zain:Main abhi leke aata hoon...

He goes down while Usman and Surraiya enter.

Usman:Kya hua aaliya maine suna ki tum behosh ho gayi thi...

Surraiya:Abse tum koi bhi kaam nahi karogi...Samjhi?

Aaaliya:Par...

Surraiya:Par var kuch nahi...

Suddenly doctor enters

Usman:Aree doctor saab aaye...

Aaliya:Maamu doctor?

Usman:Haan doctor!!

Usman:Doctor sahab yeh hai aapki patient.

While Zain came up thinking..."Subhe se ulti aana...peth mein dard hona...kuch katha khane ka man...kahi maamu ki bhanji pregnant toh nahi...AEE PAGAL HAI ZAIN...jab maine uske saath kuch kia hi nahi to maamu ki bhanji pregnant kaise ho sakti hai?...par"

He entered the room only to see aaliya being on the bed and everyone around her.

Zain:Aaliya kya hua...*He ran near her*

Usmaan:Aaliya ko kuch nahi hua bas maine doctor sahab ko uske check up keliye bulaya hai.

Doctor:Shaadi ko kitne mahine ho gaye hai usmaan sahab?

Usmaan:shaadi ka bimaari se kya talooq?

Zain:ummm doctor 4 mahine.

Doctor:Oh

surraiya:Kya hua doctor sahab?

Doctor:Mujhe lagta hai inka ek PREGNANCY test humein kar lena chahiye.

Both ZAIN and AALIYA were shocked!!

Aaliya and Zain together:PREGNANT?

Doctor:Kyuki pregnant hone ke symptoms hai.

Main shaam ko apne assistent ko blodd sample lene ke lye bhej dunga...

Ab main chalta...

He left.

Fahad elbowing Zain:Kya baat hai Zain miyaan bade fast nikle tum toh...

Ayat to aaliya:Wah appi app toh bahut waise type nikli...

Usmaan:Chalo sab chalo aaliya ko aram karna hai

And everyone left.

Zain:Aaliya tum pregnant ho?

Aaliya:Pagal ho Zain main pregnant kaise ho sakti hoo?

Zain:Mujhe laga ki us din holi party ke baad meri nashe waale halath ka tumne kahi fayada toh nahi uthaya?

Aaliya:Pagal ho Zain...tum mere baare mein aisa sochte ho...chiii..chiii...

Zain:Are maamu ki bhanji I am sorry...par yeh batao yeh bachaa ayaa kaha se?

Aaliya:Pehli baat Zain main pregnant nahi hoon...mujhe lagta hai ki kal party mein jo maine mocktail pi thi usme STRAWBERRIES thi.

Zain:Toh?

Aaliya:I am alergic to them Zain!

Zain:Toh chalo abh sabko bata dete hai ki tum pregnant nahi ho *He grabs her hand and was about to move but she stops ZZain*

Aaliya:Nahi Zain hum nahi batayengi jab report aayegi toh sabko pata hi chal jayega...

Zain:Par aaliya hum bhi toh wahi kehengi jo report kahegi...

Aaliya:Zain plz...*She give him a tight bone crushing hug*

He very well reciprocated to the hug.

Zain:Bahut der se dekh raha hun main MKB tum kisi bhi baat par mujhe hug kar leti hoo

Aaliya tightens her hug.Zain understood what she was trying to indicate and he to hugged her tightly.

Finally the report came and everyone was disappointed .

Now again Aaliya was sad because she was the reason of their happiness now she is only the culprit of their sadness.

Will Zain be able to boost her happiness?

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PRECAP:Zain trying to boost Aaliya's happiness

Edited by -Mera-Hi-Jalwa- - 10 years ago

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