ZAYA SS*kaisy mjhy tum mil gain PG11&12COMPLETE 6thDEC - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Superb update Hania.
Loved it
nd plz dont say that this is d last part of dis SS?
If not plz update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Cho-8&9 both were super 👏
I knew ki back facing face-off hi hoga 😆
Ok continue soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
chapter 10...(final part)

narrator's pov

7 days passed...for family members it was like blink of the eye but for zain aliya it was like 7 months...they keep talking on phone sending gifts to each other but they r not allowed to meet as the two churails are spyings them one is appointed at zain and anothr one at aliya...by their parents..
...
today was their mehndi ceremony every one was busy in fuction while zain finding chances to reach aliya but in vain...bcuz their cops are with them...😆

zain's pov

oh god yeh barkat to say ki tarah peechy par gi h...saya to rat m jan chor deta h par ye hai k din raat fevicol ki tarah mery sath chipki h...studies complete krny k bad main isy CID join krny ka mashwara dun ga...
...
the ceremony is finished...but zian remain unseccessful in his mission.he fed up than so he call aliya...
"hellow"ayat said...
zain keep away mobile from his ear and "yahan bhi aik mojood hai..."(irritated)
"kon"ayat said teasingly...
"zain...aliya ko phone do...plzzz"(i said sternly)
"kon aliya???"she said giggling.
"aliya my would be wife"i said gritting my teeth.
"ok ok...dy rahi hun jiju...itna naraz kiun ho ry hn"she said laughing.
and then i heard...
"pakden na jiju ka phone h"ayat said.
"ayat tujhy pata h mery mehndi lagi h"aliya said.
"to kia karun???aesa krti hun jiji sy kehti hun baad m call karen"ayat said teasing her.
"ayat"...she shouted..while i m enjoying.
"tu phone...tu phone speaker pr rakh dy or ja yahan sy"she said...
"agar na jaun to..."ayat laugh.
"ayat plzzz...plz..ja na"she plaedaed.
"ok baba jati hun"she said
"or hall m ja darwazy k pas mat khari rehna samjhi???"she said.
"oooh...wo to main ny socha hi nhn...thanks for the idea"ayat said.
"ayaaat"aliya gritted her teeth.
and then i heard the voice of the closing door and she speak...
"hellow"
"hi princess"
"shhh ahista bolo.mjhy lagta h wo bahar h khari h"
"(laugh)...to tum room m akeli ho"
"han"
"perfect"
"matlab"
"matlab ye k main tmhari window k theek neechy khara hun"
"to"
"to ye k...wait"
narrator's pov
and she keeps telling hellow hellow...but someone in busy climbing through pipe...😆

she wait for several minutes and he appers from window smiling at her...she gasped...
aliya:zain...tum???(she panicked but can't move bcuz her hands and feet are coverded with mehndi)
zain:aliya...
(he was mesmerised by the view infront of him she was sitting on couch wearing low waist yellow lehenga with green and golden embroidery and since she was alone she was not expecting his would be husband infront of her so her dupatte was kept far. neatly folded on bed . bcuz it was heavy and could smash her mehndi and she is placing her feet on small table infront of her and for protecting mehndi ayat her lehnga was little higher from her feet showing some space of her milky white legs...)
(aliya look at her self and then at zain whose intense gaze on her melting her.he just keep staring her from head to toe)
aliya:zain...tum...y.yahan kaisy ay??(embarassed looking at her)
zain:pipe sy(lost in her)
zain slowly came and sat near her...she was stuck between this mehndi and his smoldering gaze on her...
zain:kitny din ho gay hn tum sy mily...tumhn dekhy...islye aa gaya.(in husky voice)
aliya:zain par koi...
zain:shhh...(keeping finger on her lips)
plz aliya kuch mat kaho...
(and he slowly remove his finger and staring at her lips...he start leaning in ..slowly slowly...aliaya can't move...he is about to kiss her when she suddenely move hER face and he end up kissing on her cheek...aliya closed her eyes tightly...zain smile at her shyness...
aliya:zain plzzz...itna wait kia h thora or kar lo...(braething heavily)
zain:ok...so u don't like it i think...(he said moving)
aliya:(open her eyes)...zain...bat like ya dislike ki nhn h...sahi or ghalat ki h...shadi sy pehly...ye sab...acha nhn lagta...plz zain i love u..and m urs plz...one more day...
zain:smile...oky...yahi to bat h jo tmhn sari dunia sy juda karti h...i love u too princess...
umm..mm..sorry if..i...
aliya:no zain no need to sorry...i m your fiance.main sirf yeh chahti hun k hamary rishty main hamesha pakeezgi hi rahy...
zain just smile,
zain:ok madam...aaj to aap apni pakeeza nature k bahany bach gain par kal kia hoga...no bahana...no fasana...(playing with the strand of her hair...she got shy and hid her face in his chest)...
suddenley they heard ayat...
ayat:appi..iii...andar aa sakti hun.agar aap ki private call khatam ho gai ho to.
(aliya suddenely move her head)
aliya:ALLAH...ayat...zain plz jao warna ye phata hua dhool sab ko bata dy gi..plz,,plzz.
aliya:han aik min ruk...main..main tujhy awaz dy dun gi...(panicked)
zain:tum itna darr q rahi ho princess???(smiling)
aliya:zain...main darr nhn rahi hun...bas m sab k samny embarassed nhn hona chahti wesy bhi aunty ny us din ham donon ko dekh lia tha...plzzz jao na...i'll call u when my mehndi dried.
zain:promise.
aliya:pakk promise ab jao plzzz...
zain:aesy kaisy itni mehnat sy aya hun...mazdoori to dy do.
aliya:nhn...koi mazdoori nhn mily gi...kal sari aik sath ly lena and she realised what she said and blushed...
zain:okyy...meri rules queen...kal milty hn...till then miss me..and i know u love...
aliya:i also know u love me too.by.
and then he leave from where he came...
...
MUBARAK HO MUBARAK HO...
hall was echoing with these sounds bczu two lovers became husband and wife and those were zaya...zain was looking at aliya throgh net curtain and aliya was also looking at him...
the rituals are going and finally there is a time of bidai...zain was so happy but aliya was mixed of emotions...and finally aliya leave her parents as aliya zain abdullah...leaving aeysha ghulam haider in her house for ever...
aliya and zain sat in the same car aliya was crying so zain hold her hand...and they reach barkat villa...
zain took aliya in his arms and took her to his...no their room...while everyone showring rose petals on them...
...
zain placed aliya on the bed and goes to lock the door...
the click of the door made aliya fist her lehnga in her hand in nervousness...
zain took slow steps and sit beside her...
zain:welcome to your new life aliya zain abdullah...
aliya blush and breathing heavily...
zain took her hand in his hands and it was too cold...
zain:what is it aliya???
aliya:zain...m...mjy dar lag ra h...
zain:(sat up and cupped her face)dar...magar kis sy???
aliya:closed her eyes tightly...zain i m so nervous i...m very scared...
zain:aliya why???u r scared from me...
aliya nod in no...
zain: then (caressing her cheek with his thumb)
aliya:(hugged him...and whisper in his ear)tm...tmhary pyar sy...
zain smile brightly...and break the hug.
zain:well...kehty hn k dar nikalny k lye us cheez ko aik bar try karo to dar nikal jata h...(smirking)
aliya:zain!!!!!!...(whispeher shyly)
(zain move closer and closer and remove her nose bangle slowly...aliya shivers...and he gently place his lips on hers.aliya clucth his shoulders more and more as he deepens the kiss...and taking her along with her down down...until her back rested on bed...he left her lips and look at her..she slowly opens her eyes and both of them stare at each other...he leans in slowly and switch off the lamp...
and the room was the combination of dark...and their voices..aliaya'moans and zain's groans ...whispers and breath...
aliya:sss...(hissed)
zain:ummm...(groan)
aliya:AAHHh!!!!...zian..
zain:u r so beautiful...aliya...(whisper)
aliya:za...i..nnn..ummm...(moans)...
zain:urghhh...
aliya...ummm.aah!!!...
zain:i love u aliya...
aliya:i...L.LOVE u too...(whisper)
(heheh...khud hi socho i m not good at this😆😉)
and after long beautiful and remembering night they became one ever...4 ever...

THE END____________________




Edited by butterfly20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Is this chp -10 ?
BTW its awesome yaar 👏 👏 👏
Continue soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
IMPORTANT NOTE...

PART 10 EDITED...READ IT AGAIN IF U NOT...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Haniaaa
Its so so so amazing ...
Really loved it
Thnks for da pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
beautiful ending😳...it was absolutely amazing ss!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ..loved each n every part❤️... thank u so much for writing such a beautiful ss🤗..plz Keep writing..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Firstly congratulations on completion of work😳
I know how happy u might be after completing it...
Just read last 3 parts, beautifully written, just loved it
Keep writing, thanks for writing this beautiful work
Badayi hoon Hania ji...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Nice update.
Mehendi ceremony was awesome.
Thanx for d PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Awesome part :)
It was truly an amazing story ...!
Keep writing more ...

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