ZAYA SS*kaisy mjhy tum mil gain PG11&12COMPLETE 6thDEC - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Kya baat hai yaar...zain reminded me of me when my dad did the same and I rejected it saying...no I am too young...😆...
Waiting for the next...dekhte hai ZA situation kaise handle karta hai...
Awww loved the pasta queen as well...it's weird we all made an angel here in our stories...
Loved this part...Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Ilovezaya

I knew that it was Zain only to be groom of Ayesha Ghulam Haider !! 😉
Will be a treat to see both of their reactions on knowing this fact ! 😆
Continue soon 😛


Hehehe...you guys r so genious...😉

Will continue asap.
thanks 4 comment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Kya baat hai yaar...zain reminded me of me when my dad did the same and I rejected it saying...no I am too young...😆...

Waiting for the next...dekhte hai ZA situation kaise handle karta hai...
Awww loved the pasta queen as well...it's weird we all made an angel here in our stories...
Loved this part...Continue soon...


Thanks habeeba
awww u really did that???Lol...good job😆
Ya we love to see positive side of her we fed up with her witch avtaar...
thanks 4 liking.
will update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update..!!👏👏👏👏
loved it so much❤️
super excited 😛
please continue soon..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

awesome update..!!👏
loved it so much❤️
super excited 😛
please continue soon..😊


Thanks ruhanika...
will complete it soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Oh yess mera guess sahi nikla ...
I m really xcited for next chptr
Plzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zayalove

Oh yess mera guess sahi nikla ...
I m really xcited for next chptr
Plzz update soon


Ya ya u all are guessing queens.
will update soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
chapter 8

zain's pov

finally the time came when i had to face that disaster which my mom and dad are planning for me GOD knows from how long???...but i can't deny my parents so i decide to meet her as mom's wish and tell her what m thinking...
...haider mansion...
we all reached there bcuz they think it was a big day for us both but they are unaware of my plans.we enter the house.the house was beautiful,well decorated,similar to ours but little more fancy...i greeted them all as a good gentlemen and we have some good conversation with mr.ghulam and her wife and their youngr daughter ayat.but ayesha was not there she was with barkat and kahala in her room...may be she was shy to come face to face infront of whole family members like tipical indians do...but who cares???i was beyond happy that may be she is also not intrested and this will going to help me.

after some time zarina khala came bucuz she is my mom's PA and exuses others and take me with her...while others are smiling...kniwoingly...she grab me to the tarrace...
"kia bat hai khala???"i asked irritated.
"tum yahan samosy khany or chay peeny nhn ay ho...kisi or kaam k lye ay hn beta g"khala said smirking at me.
"what is it?"i asked angrily.bcuz i m acting i know everything well.
"yahen khary raho abhi pata chal jay ga...or hilna mat yahan sy warna seedha baji sy shikayat karun gi???"...khala warned me.like i m a small kid.
i took a deep braeth...showing my anger and i spat..
"fine"
"good boy"she pinch my cheek which made me more angry...
here i m fighting with my emotion and they are treating me like 5 year old kid...disgusting...😡

i stand there with my 1000 digree centigrate brain temprature...and waiting for her...
and then i heard ayat...appi uper jaye tarrace py koi aap ka wait kar ra h.god these girls!!!...and then she and bhahi giggled...i can hear them but not her may be she did'nt answer...i was standing facing my back to the entrance of the tarrce gate.relaxing my hand on small wall...when i heard...
CHAN...CHAN...CHAN...
sound of her anklet...and i lost for sometime bcuz it seems familiar...but then i gain my concious and i want to keep everything straight...i don't want to give her false hopes..so when the sound stops and i realised she is standing right behind me so i started...

aliya's pov

i was sitting infront of my dressing wearing my white anarkali with blue dupatta...i don't want to dress all fancy i just open my cupboard took that dress and wear...

i don't want to go down stairs and join them.i sit in my room but his aunt and sister came to my room.i did'nt knew barkat was ayat't college friend...means i know ayat had a friend named barkat but i never met her bcuz i was in my home and ayat was here...aftr sometime khala came and signal ayat...ayat's ayes filld with mischieve and she took me by my hand and drag me till terrace stairs and she said...
"appi uper jaye...koi aap ka wait kar ra hai"and they both giggled.
i was so nervous and confused...what will i say???how will i face someone total stranger??i took slow steps towards the terrace and...
i found someone standing facing his back to me...i just took a few glances at him but did'nt look at him briefly...bcuz he could face me any minute so i keep my face down and collecting my courgae to speak when i hraed...

"dekho ayesha!!!meri mom ny mjhy tmhary bary m ziada to kuch ni bataya lekin apni mom ki pasand sy keh sakta hun k tum aik bht achi larki ho jo mom ny tmhn pehli nazar m pasand kar lia...lekin main tm sy koi aesy wady nhn karun ga jo main pura na kar sakun...i m sorry to say ayesha...main ye shadi krny k lye razi nhn hun...i hope tum mjhy maaf kar dogi..bcuz main tmhn apni zindagi main apny dil main wo jaga nhn dy paun ga jis ki tum haqdaar ho bcuz...wo jaga kisi or ki h...jis s main bht pyar karta hun...😭."

and...when he start i heard the familer voice.the voice which i want to hear every morning when i woke up...he is zain...and he keep going with his confession but i was too shocked happy...don'nt know what???but i did'nt stop him...i want to listen what he will say...and when he conpleted i was still quite...it's like all the stars,sun and the moon are in my hand...i was soo soo much happy that my mind stop working and my heart doing his job...i slowly took steps and...HUG HIM...from back.

zain's pov.

when i was done with my outburst...i wait for sometime to listen her answer but nothing came so i decided to face her..may be she was crying and suudenly i felt a 100 watt cuurent...she hugged me😲...she hugged me from back i was so shocked i don't know how to react..i just stood still.
and she not she i heard a voice which i was dying to hear...
"PAR MAIN TO TUM SY HI SHADI KARUN GI ZAIN ABDULLAH"...
she...she...was aliya...my aliya...aliya whom i thought i can never met...
i immediately turned and stunned to look at her...
"ALLIYA!!!!"i whispher in disblief.
"hmmm aliya nhn...ayesha!!!ayesha ghulam haider"she said smiling...
"ye...ye sab kia hai???tum hi ayesha ho???"i said holding her sholders smiling...
"g zain abdullah ji...main hi ayesha hun aap ki fiancee jin sy aap shadi nhn karna chahty"she said smiling...
"par...ye ayesha...aliya??what's that all"i said confused but happily.
"ohoo...that's a long story pehly ye batao mujh sy shadi karni h ya nhn???"she said pointing finger at me pouting...
and words can not express my happiness my answer so i leave her sholder and engulf her into bone crushing hug...tear are brimming from my eyes..i was so happy that ALLAH give me the biggest happiness of my life...she hugged me back bcuz we both were having the same feelings...we stood there embracing each other for simetime and then she broke the hug...
she singnalled me to sit but i was in no mood to stay away from her for a minute..so i sat on chair and grab her and make her sit in my lap...she sit and fit there perfectly...i keep my hands around her waist and she keep her hands around my neck...
and we keep talking about these misconceptions...both smiling looking into each other eyes...

precap:suri:zain!!!!ayesha!!!...(faint)😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome awesome awesome update Hania.
Loved it.
Finally they met.
Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 9

narrator's pov

zain:aliya mjhy yaqeen ni aa ra ha k tum mjhy itni asani sy mil gain...(still holding her)
aliya:abhi thora intezaar karna parega...i m not officially yours now.ok??(brushing his nose with her finger)
zain:i m waiting for that day...(sigh)
aliya:me too...(blush)
zain:shadi!!!!mom!!!OH MY GOD...unhn bhi to batana h main to apni khushi m sari dunia hi bhol gaya...
he wants to go but she stops him...he look at her lovingly...
zain:kia hua???
aliya:thori dair plzzz...(pleading)
zain:oky...(smile and keep sitting with aliya in his lape)
...downstairs...
suri:zain kahan hai???
ayat:wo...wo...barkat..(smudging her shoulder with her)
barkat:wo bhayyu...mom..wo.
suri:barkat...kia wo wo laga rakha h.seedha batao zain kahan h???
barkat:mom wo tarrece pr hain bhabhi k sath...(she murmur and surayya hears) main bula kr lati hun.(she said getting up)
(surraya thinks zain must had said her something may be situation is worst between them now so she think she should go and console her).
suri:nhn main jati hun...
barkat:mom aap???
(she thinks the same which is exactly happinig...romance offcourse😆...but surrya did'nt listen and went towards the terrace...when she reached there the view infront of her was totally diffrerent from her imagination...aliya was sitting in zain's lap and they are in embrace of each other...surrayya's mouth got open in shock or happiness...don't know what???)
suri:zain!!!!...ayesha!!!!!...(she is about to faint😆 when ayat and barkat hold her bcuz they r spying them😆(besharams)

zain:mom!!!(shocked)
aliya:aunty...(immediately got up)

they both take surrya down..she was consious now but her words are not coming out from her mouth.every one gathered...
shabna:bhabhi kia hua???
usman sahab:surryya begum aap ki tabiat thek nhn h to ghar chalty hn...
suri:no no i m absolutely fine...(now she smile)...mjhy in donon bachon sy akely main kuch baat karni h.
(zain and aliya got confused and little worried)
every one leave while two churails hide behind the pillars to spying them...u know who???😆

surayya:zain ye sab kia hai??tum ny mujh sy kaha k...
zain:mom i m sorry...main aliya ko i mean ayesha ko janta nhn tha islye main ny aesa keh dia...
surrya:zain???(glared)koi jadu hua h k jis sy tum milna nhn chahty thy us sy aadhy ghanty m tmhn itna pyar ho gya k...(she stop and both embarassed)
zain:mom actually...(he looked at aliya.she is nervous)
mom main or aliya aik dusry ko pichly 2 mahiny sy janty hn...or...aik dusry ko...pasand karty hn.(he atleast blast the bomb)
surrya:or isi lye tum shadi s inkaar kar ry thy.(surrya still angry)
zain:mom...mjhy...
surayya:bas zain...kuch kehny ki zaroorat nhn h...(she turn folding her hands on her chest.they both looked at each other)
aliya:aunty...ham nhn janty thy k ham donon hi ky rishty ki bat chal ri h..ham ny apny parents ki khatir kisi sy kuch nhn kaha...(she said hasitaly)
surray:parents???kahan k parents???tum logon ko lagta h k tum logon ki khushi sy aagy hamen apni raputation h???aik bar to bata dia hota...agar...agr ALLAH ki mehrbani na hoti or tum donon aik dosry k lye na chuny gay hoty zian ki jaga koi or hota ya ayesha ki jaga koi or hoti to kia tm donon shadi k lye razi ho jaty???(she said angrily)

zain:nhn mom...main n aap ko pehly hi mana kar dia tha...
suri:or ayesha tum????
aliya:(stammered)...aunty main...m..umm.nhn mian sirf ammi abbu ki khatir khamosh ho gi thi lekin mjhy ALLAH par bharoosa tha...or aaj wo bharoosa or bhi mazboot ho gaya h.
surayya:lekin main tum donon sy naraz hun...
zain:pr mom!!!!
aliya:aunty...plzz m really sorry.
surayya:no sorry no plzz...apny parents ki hi bat tum donon k lye maana rakhti h na...ab faisla bhi parents hi karen gy...(and she leave angrily...but stop at the door and smile)
...
she went downstairs and they all sit togethr and khichri pakaying...while they both sat scarred like student who are waiting for their results...and after some time both spy team came and...
barkat:bhayyu...
ayat:appi...
togethera:aap donon ko sab neechy bula ry hn.
they both went together zain hold aliya's hand and...
zain:aliya ab jo kuch bhi ho main tmhen khud sy alag nhn hony dun ga...
aliya just nod and smile...
...
usman sahab:aaye aaye barkhurdaar...tashreef laye.(he lookd at both of them)
to tmhari ammi ny hamen sab bataya or ham sab ny ye ty kia h k itni bari baat chupany k lye saza to mily gi tm dodnon ko.
zain:par dad...ham ny ye sab aap sab ki khushi k lye kia.
usman sahab:khushi???hmary bachy apni zindagi apny maa baap ki marzi sy guzaren to is s hamen khushi mily gi???
fareeda:han aliya...beta ham ny tujhy apni beti kaha h or mana h pr afsoos k tu apni maa sy apny dil ki bat tak nhn keh saki.
aliya:maa ...main kaisy kehti???ap log faisla kar chuky thy...main...
shabana:bas aliya...ab hamen suuna nhn sunana h.
zain and aliya look at each other...
ghulam sahab:or ham ny faisla kia h...matlab main ny or teri ammi ny k...ham tujy apny ghar nhn rakhna chahty...tu aik hafty k andar andar...yahan sy chali ja.
aliya:abbu...(whisper)
ghulam sahab:meri bat abhi puri nhn hui...
and he stop for a minute look at shabana and all with a smile...and said...ZAIN K SATH.
(both zain and aliya got happy...and zain is about to hug her when she move away looking at everyone signalig him that everyone is watching...and all fits in a laughter making them embarassed)

Edited by butterfly20 - 10 years ago

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