ZaYa TS|Compromises| Part 2-Page 5!

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She flinched as the phone shattered to a million pieces before her eyes.
"I am sick!" He yelled,pacing the length of thr room. "Sick and tired of this everyday drama Aaliya!"
A tear escaped her eye. Never had he called her Aaliya. It was always Mamu Ki Bhanji or Korma Queen or some other twisted nickname he concoted.
"Do you know how physically and mentally exhausting it is to toil everyday at the office? And all I ask is some peace. Which you cannot provide!"
"Well,I am sick and tired too!" She yelled back with equal intensity. "It is the same for me Zain! Taking care of two kids is not easy! Taking care of YOU along with THEM is NOT easy! I don't have time for me anymore" Her voice cracked.
"Not MY concern!"
"Agar bacche chahiye hi nai tou paida kyun kia? And agar pyaar nai karte tou shaadi kyun?"
"Oh for god sakes Aaliya!" Her heart broke a little again when she heard him use her name with so much hatred.
"Stop with the emo crap already! I don't care right now! I loved you,maybe the biggest mistake of my life. And oh my god! Stop with the inquisition already! Kya khaya? Kya piya? Where were you? When will you be home? Am I looking fat? GUESS WHAT? I.DON'T.CARE"
She felt frustrated. She felt like pulling her hair by its roots. She felt like slapping him senseless. She felt like breaking down completely. So pushing down the hurt to the back of her mind,she screamed back
"I am your wife! I am entitled to ask you about your day."
"Yeah,but not every other minute! Thak gaya hun mein Aaliya! Maybe.."
She felt fear grip her heart as her eyes grew wide.
"Maybe what?" She croaked.
"Maybe we should stay away from each other for some time."
"Zain." She whispered "It doesn't work that way. We are married Zain,not in a relationship. We have two kids for godsake." Her voice grew louder with each word,her fists flying wildly,trying to get the point across desperately.
"This is for the best!" He screamed back. "Don't bother to contact me! It is you I am going away from after all." He strode towards the bedroom door.
And in a last attempt to save what they had, she laid down her dignity as she whispered- "please. Don't go."
His hand hesitated,hovering around the doorknob. Then he steeled himself and wanked the door open.
Aaliya felt her knees give away as she sobbed on the expensive kashmiri shag carpet. Sobs that echoed in their now empty room.
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To be continued...
Lol,holla folks ^_^
Priya (iluvzaya), anagha (anaghazaya), zayacrazy(sakeenah)... I am sorry for not updating A-Z drabbles.. I got called by my college since they were distributing marksheets and that happy ending's cast visted my college for promotions.. so I promptly forgot about the update 😛
So this TS is for you three. Hope you read it :)
To the rest of my readers... aalsi na bano,comment karo :) and like bhi ;)
Thank you all.
Buddy me for pms darlings.. but for now,no pms. I'll send them out when I update.
Not proof read.
-Sanika
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow sanika this is soo fantastic
loved it ❤️
do continue soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bichari Aaliya ka dil toddiya 💔 😭 😭
Continue soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sanika this was awesome...
Loved it to the core..
thanks for dedicating it to us...
And yes continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was totally awesome di!!!
Beautifully written
Aww u dedicated this to us ❤️
Whoa Happy ending stars did u meet saif ali khan ?? illena ??
N yeah jaldi jaldi continue karo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! For the first tym smeone dedicated smeging to me!
Overwhelmed!
Loved it!
I definitely agree everyone needs a break! But from love?
Waiting to knw ahead!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I read the things u write again and again.
Thinking one day, I will b able to write d way u do.

Its amazing!
Do continue.
Lovely start.

Thanks for p- Oh sorry, no pm's! 😆😆

Lots of BI,
-Tanu.

P.S.- Update fast! 😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start.concept look interesting.continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing start Sanika !
Intresting ...
Waiting for next part ...
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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God Sanika, this is heartbreaking.. yet so beautiful <3
Looking forward to the next update dear!

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