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Since all the writers on IF r having party in bawdi so i thought to write something on zaya
Its my first tym i am writing story on zaya i am a new writer i dont even know ABC of writing but still try my level best
So enough of my bakwaas and lets start with the story
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There was one day in barkat villa when all the members of barkat villa were standing with their heads high in the air and I (aliya) was standing with my head down although i was not at fault but bcoz of my parents mistake all of them blamed me and the one person i trusted the most was looking at me with so much hatred in his eyes when ever i tried to justify myself he would simply say shut up ...
Now there is a day in barkat villa where all of them are standing with their heads down eyes welled up of guilt but i am standing here with my heads high ...
(FLASHBACK)
Rehan : zain i have got to know who is the person responsible for the death of your father who is responsible for those 7 hours u and surraiya mam spent in jail who is responsible for your this condition ...
Zain : who is it rehan ????
Rehan : its none other than your beloved (as rehan said beloved zain looked up at aliya ..and froze for a second ..) bhabh yesw fahad bhai your beloved wife nafeesa abdullah
(then rehan showed them the number from which the police was called all the history of the call on documents and the call awas also recorded in the police station every body listened to the call and every body was hell shocked
Zain had his head down as if kilos and kilos.of weight was kept on his shoulders no body was able to make eye contact with me .
Zain: ( shittt... what i have done ? How can i do this ? What i have done with aliya all the scenes were going through his eyes he jst closed his eyes filled with guilt ... after coming back to senses )
Q bhabhi apne aisa q kiya kiya bigara tha hum ne apka apne ne hamara sab kuch chin liya hum se mujh se mera sab kuch chin liya mere dad chin liye apne meri aliya chin li apne mujhse (at this aliya look into his eyes and gave him a disgusted look ) zain felt he crumbled his own beautiful world with his own hands and that was it with that he suddenly fell on his knees and started crying with only one thing on his lips (what have i done ) he kept on repeating this as a mantra
Fahad: y nafeesa y did u do this to us and with that he slapped her and said get out ...
Nafeesa : fahad plzzz listen to me ...
But that was enough and with that fahad bhai kicked nafeesa bhabi out of the house ...
Fahad bhai turned around and he was coming closer to me when i lowered my eyes bcoz of tears which were ready to spill out at any moment but he came closer and held my hand and raised my head and as i looked up he joined hos both hands and started
Fahad : i am really sorry aliya ( i could clearly see that he was repenting for what he did ) mein ne tumhe apni choti bhen mana ttha lekin mein ek bhai ka farz nahi nibha saka ( with that he broke into heavy sobs ) mein janta hoon meine zain ne hum sab ne tumhe bohat takleef di hai par plzzz hume maaf kardo plzzz plzzz.agar tum mujh maaf nahi karo gi toh mein dad ko kiya mooh dikhao ga woh bhi mujhe kabhi maaf nahi kare gein plzzz aliya mujhe ek mauka do apni galati sudhar ne ka mein apni behn k liye woh sab karna chahta hoon jo ek bhai karta hai plzzz aliya mujhe apne bhai hone ka haq apas de do mujhe phir se fahad bhai bolo plzzz mujhe bhai bolo aliya with that he broke down
( that was enough for me to forgive him )
Aliya : fahad bhai ... ( and with that i see a glint in his eyes as he raised his head )mujhe ap se koi shikayat nahi hai app mere bare bhai hain or ghalat fehmi kis behn bhai ke rishte mein nahi hoti (and with that i hugged him and he kept his hanon my bead ) ab app rona band karye q k mere cute se bhai rote hue bilkul bhi ache nahi lagte ( and with that we both broke into laughter)
Fahad : i am really sorry aliya
Aliya : offo fahad bhai ab bas bhi kijiye mujhse maafi mangna warna ab mein sach mein ap se naraaz ho jao gi ...
As i turned zain was still with his heads down but i decided let him repent for some more tym i will not forgive him soon this tym he should know how much he have hurt me let him repent
To be continued
I am really sorry guyzzz for all my mistakes
Tell me should i continue or not
All rotten tomatoes eggs chapal r most welcome
Par plzzz give me your reviews
With love
Alina
Its my first tym i am writing story on zaya i am a new writer i dont even know ABC of writing but still try my level best
So enough of my bakwaas and lets start with the story
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There was one day in barkat villa when all the members of barkat villa were standing with their heads high in the air and I (aliya) was standing with my head down although i was not at fault but bcoz of my parents mistake all of them blamed me and the one person i trusted the most was looking at me with so much hatred in his eyes when ever i tried to justify myself he would simply say shut up ...
Now there is a day in barkat villa where all of them are standing with their heads down eyes welled up of guilt but i am standing here with my heads high ...
(FLASHBACK)
Rehan : zain i have got to know who is the person responsible for the death of your father who is responsible for those 7 hours u and surraiya mam spent in jail who is responsible for your this condition ...
Zain : who is it rehan ????
Rehan : its none other than your beloved (as rehan said beloved zain looked up at aliya ..and froze for a second ..) bhabh yesw fahad bhai your beloved wife nafeesa abdullah
(then rehan showed them the number from which the police was called all the history of the call on documents and the call awas also recorded in the police station every body listened to the call and every body was hell shocked
Zain had his head down as if kilos and kilos.of weight was kept on his shoulders no body was able to make eye contact with me .
Zain: ( shittt... what i have done ? How can i do this ? What i have done with aliya all the scenes were going through his eyes he jst closed his eyes filled with guilt ... after coming back to senses )
Q bhabhi apne aisa q kiya kiya bigara tha hum ne apka apne ne hamara sab kuch chin liya hum se mujh se mera sab kuch chin liya mere dad chin liye apne meri aliya chin li apne mujhse (at this aliya look into his eyes and gave him a disgusted look ) zain felt he crumbled his own beautiful world with his own hands and that was it with that he suddenly fell on his knees and started crying with only one thing on his lips (what have i done ) he kept on repeating this as a mantra
Fahad: y nafeesa y did u do this to us and with that he slapped her and said get out ...
Nafeesa : fahad plzzz listen to me ...
But that was enough and with that fahad bhai kicked nafeesa bhabi out of the house ...
Fahad bhai turned around and he was coming closer to me when i lowered my eyes bcoz of tears which were ready to spill out at any moment but he came closer and held my hand and raised my head and as i looked up he joined hos both hands and started
Fahad : i am really sorry aliya ( i could clearly see that he was repenting for what he did ) mein ne tumhe apni choti bhen mana ttha lekin mein ek bhai ka farz nahi nibha saka ( with that he broke into heavy sobs ) mein janta hoon meine zain ne hum sab ne tumhe bohat takleef di hai par plzzz hume maaf kardo plzzz plzzz.agar tum mujh maaf nahi karo gi toh mein dad ko kiya mooh dikhao ga woh bhi mujhe kabhi maaf nahi kare gein plzzz aliya mujhe ek mauka do apni galati sudhar ne ka mein apni behn k liye woh sab karna chahta hoon jo ek bhai karta hai plzzz aliya mujhe apne bhai hone ka haq apas de do mujhe phir se fahad bhai bolo plzzz mujhe bhai bolo aliya with that he broke down
( that was enough for me to forgive him )
Aliya : fahad bhai ... ( and with that i see a glint in his eyes as he raised his head )mujhe ap se koi shikayat nahi hai app mere bare bhai hain or ghalat fehmi kis behn bhai ke rishte mein nahi hoti (and with that i hugged him and he kept his hanon my bead ) ab app rona band karye q k mere cute se bhai rote hue bilkul bhi ache nahi lagte ( and with that we both broke into laughter)
Fahad : i am really sorry aliya
Aliya : offo fahad bhai ab bas bhi kijiye mujhse maafi mangna warna ab mein sach mein ap se naraaz ho jao gi ...
As i turned zain was still with his heads down but i decided let him repent for some more tym i will not forgive him soon this tym he should know how much he have hurt me let him repent
To be continued
I am really sorry guyzzz for all my mistakes
Tell me should i continue or not
All rotten tomatoes eggs chapal r most welcome
Par plzzz give me your reviews
With love
Alina
Bade Achhe Lagte Hain
Anupamaa
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
