ZaYa SS : Hospital Romance![Completed] - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Wow it is beautiful!! 😳
really emotional love it soo much!
poor zain bechara aliya ke bina naho jhi sakta hai 😭 😳
continue soon and thanks for the pm! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Amazing !! I want this to happen in the show !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
wow i also want that n u write this 😉 very beautifully written 👏 pls soon cont
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
OMG .. Thanku all for such an overwhelming Response.. I'm touched 😳
Luv u guyz 😃

PS : guttery stuff from next part lol .. Abhi i'm building up the situation... 😆

Zain : doctor .. kya huwa? Kaisi hai woh??theek hai nuh??kya mei usse milsakta hoon??*runs towards the doc*
Doctor : Mr abdullah.. Calm down.. She's fine.. Thode scars aaye hai unke left arm aur back pe.. Woh jaldh hi medication se theek hojaayeinge.. Khabraane ki koi baat nahi hai.. Abhi unhe hosh nahi aaya hai.. Par she's alright.. Thodi weak hain .. Aap logo ko unka khaas khayal rakhna hoga.. Yeh kuch meds ki list derahaan hoon.. Yeh mangvalijiye plzz.. Mrs. Abdullah ko hum kal shaam tak discharge kardenge.. Dont worry..
Zain : Thanku u doc.. *luks up*
Allah ka laakh laakh shukr hai.. Bhai mei anda jaarahaan hoon *goes inside the aaliya's room... Aaliya is sleeping.. She has an oxygen pipe attached to her mouth n a drip attached to her hand.. She has bandage on her forehead.. Zain goes beside her takes her hand n sits down.. He kisses her hand n a tear rolls down his eyes*
Aaliya : Main theek hoon Zain*opens her eyes*
Zain : sssh.. Zyaada baat mat karo*puts finger on her lips.. N stares at her.. He couldnt control himself n bent down to hug her .. He had tears in his eyes.. He moves away from her*
Aaliya : Zain.. Idhar dekho meri taraf
Zain : Main theek hoon *dosent luk at her*
Aaliya : acha toh phir aankhoun mei se naigara fall kyun beh rahi hai??*smiles*
Zain : halaat chahe jaisi bhi hoon .. Tevar tumhare vahin rahinge *smiles*
Aaliya : i'm fine zain.. Kuch nahi huwa hai mujhe..
zain : main kuch hone bhi nahi deta *holds her hand*
Aaliya : Ya Allah.. Kya haal bana rakha hai tumne apna??*luks at him.. His hair messy, eyes red n he has a stubble*
Shave nahi kiya kya??
Zain : tumhe meri shave karne ki padi hai??mei pagal huwe jaara hoon tumhare liye aur tumhe meri shave ki padi hai??*suprised*
Aaliya : aur nahi toh kya.. Mera hot aur handsome shauhar ab devdaas lag rahaan hai*smiles*
Zain : Bas bahut hogayyi baatein.. ab aaram karo..*laughs and gets up.. Puts her blanket correctly n makes her sleep*
Aaliya : kahaan jaa rahe ho*hold his hand*
Zain : kahin nahi.. bas abhi aaya *leaves her hand.. Kisses her forhead n leaves..aaliya sleeps*
Zain : Fahad Bhai.. Main abhi thodi der me aata hoon..aap plzz aaliya ke saath rehna..
Fahad : fikr mat karo zain.. Main yahin hoon.. Jaldhi aana..
Suraiyya : Kahaan jaa rahe ho zain??
Zain : bas abhi aaya mom*leaves*


DARGAH


Zain : Allah Aapka Laakh Laakh Shukr hai Meri Aaliya Ki Hifaasat Karne ke liye.. Main uske bina nahi jeesakta.. Woh aapki bandi hai.. Uski hamesha Hifaazat Kareh.. Woh Meri biwi hi nahi ..woh meri sab kuch hai.. Meri zindagi.. Mera ghuroor.. Mera ishq.. Mera junoon .. Meri humkadam .. Meri humsafar.. Woh Meri aaliya hai*kneels down n prays*
Baba : Beta tumhari dua zaaya nahi hogi.. Yeh lo aur apni biwi ko jaagar pehnado.. Allah uski zarur hifaazat karega *gives him a taveez..zain takes it n leaves*


HOSPITAL


Fahad : agayye tum??itni der kaise lag gayi??*zain cumes in*
Zain : woh kuch nahi.. Aaliya theek toh hai nuh bhai?
Fahad : haan woh uthi thi.. Tumhare liye puch rahi thi.. Maine kahaan ki tum thodi der baad aaoge.. Hum sab wahin uske paas the tab se .. Ab woh sogayi hai..
Zain : hmmm theek hai bhai.. Aap mom aur ms universe or ms world ko lekar ghar jaaye.. Main yaheen aaliya ke paas rahunga..
Fahad : Par zain.. Tumhe bhi rest karna hoga warna beemar padh jaoge
Zain : main theek hoon bhai.. Waise bhi aaliya ke bina mei ghar pe chain se nahi reh paunga.. Isiliye aap chale jaao..
Fahad : kuch chahiye toh bata dena..
Zain : bhai bas ek tshirt bhejwaade ali bhai se..
Fahad : sure zain .. *all of them leave and zain goes into aaliya's room*

ROOM


*Zain enters the room n sees aaliya sleeping.. He goes n sits on the chair next to her bed.. Takes her hand n kisses it*
Aaliya : Kahaan chale gayye tum??*opens her eyes*
Zain : woh main *takes out taveez from his pocket *
Aaliya : Tum dargah gayye the??*suprisingly happy*
Zain : haan tumhare liye yeh laane *he dosent luk into her eyes*
Aaliya : zain yeh..*has tears in her eyes.. Tries to get up*
Zain : yeh kya kar rahi ho?? Leti raho.. Uthne ki koi zarurat nahi hai.. Kuch chahiye toh mujhse kaho *dosent let her get up.. Aaliya opens r arms n signals him to hug her.. Her bends down n hugs her.. She wraps her hands arnd his neck and kisses his hair ..she had tears in her eyes*
Aaliya : I love You Zain
Zain : I love You Too Aaliya *kisses her forehead and moves away.. TAkes the taweez n ties it on her right arm*
Ab yeh tumhari hifaazat karega.. Isse utaarna mat*aaliya luks at him*
aaliya : tum kitne badal gayye ho zain..
Zain : tumhi ne badla hai mujhe...*knock knock*
Come in..
Sister : sir.. Mam ki dressing aur medicines ka time hogaya hai..*zain aaliya stare at each other*
Aao plzz thodi der ke liye bahar wait karre..
Zain : nahi ..mei kahin nahi jaara.. Biwi hai meri.. Mere saamne dressing hosakti hai..*argues cutely*
Sister : par sir..
Aaliya : rehndo do sister.. Inhe yaheen rehne do..
Aaliya : Allah.. Isse mere zakhm dekhlene do.. Uske baad iska jo bhi faisla hoga woh mujhe manzur hoga*monologue*
Zain : dekha.. Isse bhi koi problem nahi hai*smiles victoriously*
Sister : jee sir..ab aap yahaan hai toh plzz dressing mei help karde..
Zain : okay.. *makes aaliya get up slowly*
Sister : sir unki back pe zakhm hai.. Unki back ke saare strings kholde plzz
Zain : okay.. *gulps .. Sits on the bed .. Aaliya moves forward n hugs him.. She keeps her chin on his shoulder n hands arnd his neck n closes her eyes*
Aaliya agar tum comfortab
Aaliya : ssh.. Plzz yaheen raho mere saath*snuggles into him.. Zain removes her strings while the nurse gets the ointment n bandages ready...
Sister : ready mam?
Zain : wait.. Isse dard toh nahi hoga nuh??
Sister : sir zakhm gehre hai.. Dard toh hoga hi*zain luks scared and holds aaliya tightly.. The nurse comes forward n removes the old bandages.. Aaliya clutches his shoulder due to pain.. She slowly removes her bandages.. She takes the ointment n puts it on her back*
Aaliya : aaah *clutches zain's shoulder n has tears in her eyes..*
Zain : hogaya aaliya .. Bas thoda aur.. Sister aaram se karo plzz ...meri biwi ko dard ho rahaan hai*
Sister : sir mei kitna bhi aahista karun inka dard kam nahi hoga kyunki zakhm gehre hai*applies ointment n starts bandaging her back.. Aaliya clutches his shoulders as tightly as possible .. She has tears in her eyes*
Zain : hogaya..ur done.. We're almost there.. Meri aaliya bahut strong hai.. Woh aisi vaisi cheezoun nahi darti.. Ulta unhe daraati hai.. Meri aaliya is duniya ki sab se strong ladki hai*has tears in his eyes n holds her tightly.. Aaliya keeps screaming due to pain n finally faints due to exhaution*
Zain : kya huwa isse??*luks at her.. Rubs her cheeks*
Aaliya utho..
Sister : sir.. Woh exhaust hochuki hai isiliye .. 10 min mei theek hojaayegi..yeh meds unke uthne ke baad unhe dedijiyega plzz *leaves.. Zain makes her lie down n sits on the chair beside her bed*
Zain : i'm sorry aaliya.. I'm sorry .. Main tumhe iss dard se nahi bacha payaa ..i'm sorry*cries n holds her hand*
Aaliya : zain..
Zain : ssshh .. Plzz kuch mat kaho... Tum plzz aaram karo*wipes his tears*
Aaliya : zain .. Mein theek hoon.. Tum plzz aise mat..*luks at him-*
Zain : aaliya yeh medicines lo aur chup chaap sojaao.. Koi tension koi stress nahi lena hai tumhe*hands her water n medicnes.. She takes the medicine*
Chalo ab so jao.. *makes her lie down.. N covers her with the blanket n starts gng*
Aaliya : kahaan jaa rahe ho??
Zain : sofe par .. Wahin sojaaunga...*aaliya luks at the sofa*
Aaliya : mere saath so plzz *moves in a lil*
Zain : aaliya par...
Aaliya : plzz zain.. Mujhe akele nahi sona.. Plzz*luks at him eith tears in her eyes*
Zain : aaliya *moves towards her n luks at her*
Tumhe chot lagi hai.. Mei agar is chote se bed pe tumhare saath sounga toh tumhe dard hoga
Aaliya : kuch dard nahi hoga.. Agar tum mere saath nahi soge toh mujhe dard hoga*begs with her eyes*
Zain : theek hai.. *smiles n removes his shoes n gets in her bed.. He sleeps on her left side.. He wraps his hand arnd her waist n pulls her close while the other hand is acting lyk a pillow for aaliya..aaliya moves in n snuggles with him..*
Gudnyt Mallika-e - zain..*kisses her forehead*
Aaliya : gudnyt kitkit *both of them cuddle n sleep together*


TO BE CONTINIUED ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Res..!!
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Yeeeaayy..!!First reply..!!
I loved this..!!
This was awesome..!!

Waiting for next part...!!
I love sooo much Sumaiya..🤗🤗
Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Too gud sumi...I wish thy shw sumthing lk ths if nt in the hospital toh zaya bedroom bhi chalega...bt want these scenes...keep writing...waiting for next part.
N u see we guttery mind ppl love emotional scenes also...😭😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Haye i love you for this update its awesome this is exactly what i want to see in episode but our badluck.. :( thank you for this ss continue soon... :) :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
awesome!!!... Superb update👏👏
loved it❤️
ty so much for d pm
plz continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
aww it is soo cute!👏
bechari aliya kitni jote lagi hai usse!😭
love reading it😳
continue soon and thanx for pm!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Res...!!
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Unres...!! awesome update sumaiya 👏
I wish ki show mein bhi kch aisa hi ho..😆😳
It was an emotional update😭 but my gutter mind sab cheez ko guttery bana deta hai...😉
My zaya cuddling and sleeping together... that was the best part of thi update...!!😆😳
Edited by craziness05 - 11 years ago

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