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Richa

@sarcastic_teen

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Posted: 11 years ago

"The Surprise"

"Zain?", Aliya woke up in the middle of the night to find Zain's bed side empty. She took a glance at the clock hanging on the wall, it was nearly mid-night. "Where is Zain?"

She checked the bathroom but is was empty. Then her eyes fell on the empty jug of water."He must have gone to get some water", thinking she went back to bed and slept off.

Only 15 minutes had passed when she woke up again on the noise of breaking of glass. She noticed the time it was exactly 12 O'clock and also Zain had not returned to the bed. She decided to check kitchen.

The whole Abdullah family had gone to some function and only Zain and Aliya were at home because Aliya was having headache.

Moving through corridor she noticed that it had started to rain outside. 'Barkat Villa' was completely dark which was strange. She was a little scared. She was going to turn on the lights when she felt a hand on her shoulders.

"Aaa", cried Aliya

"Shhh Mamu Ki Bhanji, its me Zain"

"Zain? You scared me"

"Dara to tum ne diya mujhe!!! I was planning to surprise to you but you scared me with your scream

"Sorry", said Aliya in a low voice "but what kind of surprise you were planning to give me?"

"Come with me", Zain took her to balcony.

The sight of balcony amazed Aliya. There were pictures of their beautiful moments on the wall. She remembered their kitkit, their confession and everything.

"You remember?"

Aliya nodded her head. One month back on this day, they have confessed their love.

Their was also arrangement of dinner. Zain made Aliya sit on the chair.

"You slept without having dinner so I decided to make someting for you"

Aliya tasted the food and looked at Zain.

"What? Okay I know its not made by me. Actually I tried to make but...you know I am not good at cooking and... So I asked Chand Bi to make food...Sorry"

Aliya laughed at the way Zain confessed that he didn't make food.

They both enjoyed the night remembering their beautiful moments together.

So tell me how was it?😆

and tell me if you thought that it is some horror OS while reading the 1st part!😆

Edited by sarcastic_teen - 11 years ago

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vinu

@vinu127

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Posted: 11 years ago

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padke bataungi abhi...

unres

i am still smiling widely!

this was a lovely one..short but very sweet...

this is better way of celebrating one month anniversary than that party🤢

i really like the fact that zain put the effort to make his MKB feel so special and make sure she did not sleep empty stomach and also he stayed back for her! i mean this party animal! how much he cares for her-thats very endearing...

and nope-it did not seem like a horror OS sorry! ur title did not allow me to do that😆😆

it was a verywell written cute piece of work.. keep writing n i'll keep commenting😊

Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

beautiful os

loved it

very sweet and cute

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Maahi

@-Bubble-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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unres 😛

RICHA! u rocks dear 😳

awww shwweeet OS 😳

I gues its ur frst Writeup which I read :P

amazing OS

beautifully wrtten

shweeet confession love u zayaa

Awsum.. keep writing 😳

Edited by -KitKit- - 11 years ago

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nahsjdnusksmsj

@nahsjdnusksmsj

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Posted: 11 years ago

Res
Unres
Tera os ho aur me na parhun aisa ho nhi skta😳
Amazing os
It is really sweet and cute one
The one thing i liked the most is zain confessing that he didnt made food, his simplicity hayyeee
And no from the first part i didnt thought it was a horror one infact i was curious to read more
Loved it❤️
Keep writing and surprising me 😆

Edited by CrazyKSGlover - 11 years ago