Zaya Drabble Date

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Posted: 11 years ago
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*8pm*
Zains POV
Oh god ye MKB bhi na bola tha jaldi karna nekin ni she'll take her sweet time. I don't even know why I'm doing this. Because you love her and you feel bad for yelling at her thats why your taking her on a redo date.admit it the first one wasn't really you it was mostly bak bak and her dare but this date will be different. Ugh that stupid voice!!! First I have to deal with my alter ego and now this annoying voice.
Aliya's POV
Allah Miya kya Karu is kitkit ka? Pehli bar tho date ke baad itni buri tare daant tha hai or ab dusri date ke liya bechain hora hai.sambhal ke aliya don't let him hurt you this time. Hmmm konsa dress pehnu? Ye pink wala ya fir ye orange wala?
Z:pink
I turned around. He was leaning against the door with his arms folded and that signature smirk on his face. God he looked so sexy in that black blazer. I should stop staring
A:I'm sorry just give me 5 minutes
I grabbed the pink dress and rushed in the bathroom. For some reason my heart was beating so fast it's been happening whenever his around I need to go to the doctors. I opened the door and peeked out. He was standing by the window looking sexy as ever.ok I have to stop. I quickly pulled my hair back with a clip,brushed on some eyeshadow and put a quick swipe of lipgloss
A:ok I'm ready chalo
He turned around and started walking towards me. He stopped right in front of me.
Z:ek problem hai
A:huh? Kya?
He started leaning in. ab is ki kya problem hai! Uh oh he was coming too close. I squeezed my eyes shut and tried not to faint. His cologne was strong but soothing and very zain-ish at the same time. I felt his hot breath at my neck. It's surprising how my heart hasn't jumped out of my chest yet. I felt my hair open. He moved back.
Z:ab thik hai.
I couldn't help but blush. He held out his arm and I looped my arm through his. This felt so right. I felt strong with zain by my side. He opened the car door and gestured me in. I couldn't help but chuckle at this. We started to drive. I kept on stealing glances over at him. He had a very content smile on his face which made me smile. He stopped the car and got out. I followed him and saw a bag in his hand.
A:is mai kya hai?
Z:bata tha hun
He then picked me up like I weighed nothing and plopped me on the car's hood. I was taken by surprise but I found it so cute!
Z:ye lo tumhare liye
He handed me a DQ strawberry sundae and a spoon. I raised my eyebrows at him.
Z:what! Don't expect me to take you to a 5 star hotel at night this was all I could do!
I giggled.
A:koi baat ni mere liye ye kaafi hai
Z:Aliya...I wanted to take you to a really nice place but..
A:zain I told you I'm happy with whatever I get!
I looked up and saw something sparkle.
A:wow! Toot tha hua taara!
I quickly folded my hands together and closed my eyes.
Zains POV
She was looking at the night sky and I was staring at her. She looked so angelic and serene with her eyes closed and a smile playing on her lips. She was beautiful no doubt. Everything about her was different and unique. Her smile her laugh her voice her everything. I loved her laugh most of all. The way she lightly tossed her head and her thin hands shyly covering her face, her tinkering voice and the way her eyes sparkled. She opened her eyes and turned to me. She gave me a sweet smile and started on her ice cream. I had the strongest urge to hug her. But I didn't. I lied down on the hood and stared up at the star filled sky. She also rested beside me. We both just lied there in silence staring up at the black sky. She let out a sigh and rested her head against my shoulder. On an impulse I lifted my arm and brought it around her bringing her closer. I hope she didn't mind.
Aliya's POV
I was hesitating to rest my head on his shoulders but i did it anyways. No doubt I was surprised when he pulled me closer. I smiled and rested my hand on the purest heart I knew.
A: this may not be a 5 star hotel but I wouldn't want to be anywhere else.
Z:I'd be happy to be anywhere as long as I'm with you.
He placed a soft kiss on my head and I closed my eyes. I felt like my heart was going to burst with happiness. There was so much going on at home but I felt so calm and peaceful being in zains arms. I relished this moment with all my heart. I looked towards the sky once again and sent a prayer of thanks to Allah for giving me such a kind and perfectly imperfect husband. And from the heavens Allah blessed the beautiful couple on earth.
The End

guys please tell me how it was!!! 😃😳😊 your comments will help me improve

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my god! This was an awesome Drabble! You're such a good writer! 👍🏼👏 I hope you write more I just loved the ending.❤️😃🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was awsome dear
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very cute os, keep writing !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow beautiful os
Loved it
Very beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was amazinggg... i was feeling like a leach ... spying on them..it was aol vivid ..

the serenity...the happiness...the contentment...just flew out if each word... :))))

loved this :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was beautiful 😳
thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome...
beautifully written...
love the resting-on-the-shoulder scenes in every writing...
m left speechless...
keep writing...😃
thanks...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb one
loved the ending

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