zaya os No Goodbyes... Part 2 (pg 4)

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Krushi

@mayur-arti.4eva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome os

I liked Aliya's point of view throughout the os that you maintained😳

Part 1

It was soo good, loved angry Aliya and the "crazy" Zain 😆

Part 2

Wow, it was great!

Loved their convo and the last part was just amazing, Zain is really crazy 😆

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow tht was awesome prt..
Loved zain's confidence..
Continue soon..

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mridula

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

awesome update.Zain was really little strange and sweet also.he already fall for Aliya.their conversation was funny and nice.u would continue it i want to read more.plz continue it.

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Sunshine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

This was cute... I loved last bit and sincerity of Zain

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Arul97

@Arul97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

wow its superb, continue writing, i want more parts from you

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aparnalokam

@aparnalokam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Omg dis is really mindblowing dear...
Loved it...
I lykd each and every line...superbb

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Awesome...loved d update, zain must b very funny but adorable too...n his promise was so gud n determined...waitin for their next meetin n thanks for the PM!!