zaya os No Goodbyes... Part 2 (pg 4)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey everyone 😊😊 ... this os is taken from one of my works I have done a while ago on another couple. I have remade it and here I present this os on the sweet and sizzling couple zaya... I hope you like it, fingers crossed.

Forgive all the mistakes please 😳😳 .


No Goodbyes...



Part 1



That cute squirrel jumped into a nearby bush after sniffing around in the clearing for a while, obviously oblivious to any human observing it with a smiling face.


Its nearly afternoon but I am feeling still fresh in this awsome atmosphere. Its first time I am coming out of Newyork city after a very long time, coming out of that hustle- bustle in the city is somehow a relief and it feels really great.


I came here, to the Old Stone Park with a tour group. My excitement is knowing no bounds as I keep wandering through the beautiful place snapping pictures with my newly bought camera. Caressing on the camera with my hand I couldn't help the smile to appear on my face.


The birds chirping as if singing to me; light breeze blowing and my hair flowing around my face and neck tickling my skin playfully; the crystal clear lake water and my reflection wavering upon it... everything is just so much enchanting.


But one thing, the one particular thing is really annoying me to the core. That one thing is spoiling my mood totally. Well again... nooo... Since morning an asian tall boy is really irking me beyond limits. Whenever I am happily taking a picture shot.. this stupid boy starts laughing holding his stomach or mouth looking at me. Wherever I go avoiding him, he appears following me there and starts laughing pointing at me like a maniac. Such a jerk.


I am trying whole heartedly to avoid him but its getting impossible. Is there anything wrong with my face, I pull out the handy mirror from my handbag and scutinize my face really carefully. Aaliya... you are looking great and gorgeous like always and you are obviously not looking like a joker... I told myself . Then what is wrong with this stupid fellow.


He is annoying but I also cant ignore the fact that... that he is quite handsome, tall and fair but with a touch of a typical asian colour of skin. Has strong built muscles and his chest is revealing a little as the top few buttons of his shirt is open... wait... wait... what... no aaliya stop now. He is annoying... remember. I mentally slap and smack hard my head.


But his twinkling black eyes have the power to hold me captive in them for an eternity and it's so damn difficult to look away from the depths of those eyes.


So I again decided to concentrate on taking pictures of this beautiful place and... there that idiot starts again. He is laughing louder now and tears came into his enchanting eyes cause of all the crazy non - stopping laughing session. Stupid... idiot... arghhh...


When around beutiful girls, boys seem to do all the weird and crazy things unknowingly. But they never do at least like this. They dont laugh like this... shaking their whole body like this... so shamelessly. Its really embarrasing... really.


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Its getting on my nerves now. Seriously !!!... Do I look like a joker ! Obviously not... So !!!... He is still laughing. So I thought to ask him directly. I start walking towards him and he stops with his laughing seeing me coming towards him. I stand in front of him with a straight face and glare showing off the fury blazing in my eyes. I was so angry that I wanted to shout at him and say some world famouse slang words, but its my manufacturing fault that whenever I am too much angry I just cant say anything and act completely opposite. Weird me... huh...


So I asked instead, "You are laughing at me since morning. May I know the reason ? "


" Obviously not. " He answered with a smile.

" And why the hell is that ? "

" Well I will tell you after your photo shoot is finished, ask me then... ", he replied with a smirk.

" I am done with that, so tell me right now. " I commanded him getting all furious.

" You were snapping pictures without removing the cap off your cameras lense... haa ... haa... heee... haaa... heee.. heee... uhhh... haaa... haaa ", he burst out laughing again showing all the teeths of his mouth... screw you moron...


I was fuming by then , he seems to notice that finally and stops laughing with great difficulty. I wait for him to get a grip on his craziness. After a while I speak again...


"But it would have been better if you had told me to remove the cap off instead of behaving like an annoying.. insensitive.. jerk the whole freaking day. Dont you know any freaking manners !! "

" Hey.. dont get hyper now, actually this incident reminded me of something. When I first came in this country I was so amazed, that I started taking pictures of everything I saw around with my camera. Later I invented that I was taking shots without removing the cap off my camera, see where my excitement lead me ... haa... haa... haa... haaa... "


Uff !!! He again starts laughing.


This is so embarrassing. I guess he is a certified retard. I move away from him stomping my foot on the ground, it's really irritating to stand there and listen to his haa.. haa... hee... hee.. continuously.


I hear him saying from behind loudly, " Oye.. mam.. hello... you should have bought a digital camera, then you wouldnt have to face this kind of situation.. "


" Thanks for your unwanted advice.. now go to hell and give me some peace... ", I snapped straight away.


Looks like the 50 dollars went into vain, just because of this one stupid person. This is one of the rarest time I am feeling so much anger bubbling inside me. The next half an hour I saw him moving around me and staring at me wearily from corner of my eyes. But I keep on ignoring and try to concentrate on the beautiful scenery around. But the earlier good mood is ruined now, it wont recover no matter how much I try.. I can feel that in my guts.


I notice him disappearing for a few minutes. Thats good... stay away of my sight ... you a**hole. But maybe fate is not with me today.


But proving me wrong of thinking too high of my fate... he appeared out of nowhere with all his glory before me...


" Can I sit here, beside you ? ", he sounded very polite.


What the hell, now he is trying to flirt with me. How dare he !! Ignoring him with an attitude I turn my head away looking elsewhere, but the next moment this shameless creature sat himself beside me.. Cant we girls expect a little bit of decency from boys !!


" Actually I am sorry for earlier. I shoudnt have laughed at you like this, I am feeling really ashamed and guilty... " , he continued after a pause " I bought a film for your camera, hope you will forgive me, if I had enough cash with me I would have surely bought a digital camera for you. " he said sincerely.


I stay silent for a while but my anger reduces a bit.


He was still holding the so called film in his hand as I was not showing any sign to take that.


There's an awkward silence and he broke it first. Clearing his throat he spoke , " Ummm... my name is Zain... Zain Abdullah... "




So.. how was that ?? Let me know how you feel about this os through your comments.

Please hit the like button if you like it and don't forget to comment, feel free to give suggestions and tell me if you want me to continue it or not.. 😕
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Love u all... take care... muaahhh... 😉😉


Part 2 ( pg 4 )...



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-Minion- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute and awesome one.poor Aliya she feel embarrass,but Zain is a sweetheart.i love the way he asked for forgive.u would continue it.i would love to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great os Lara👏

beautifully written👍🏼

loved it❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superbbb...
Awesome as usual dear...
Loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was fun to read it again lara... 😃
used dat very idea of urs... imagination 😉
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting OS, like the whole concept of it😃
Pls continue it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is cute... Hope to see next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely OS

keep writing dear

u r gr8 writer 😳
zaya ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice :)

I so knew he was laughing coz she hadnt taken off the camera cap off 😆

and it was cute on his part to get her new film..<3

do continue :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update n very sweet too. aww poor aliya she felt embarrass. n what can i say about jain he is always a sweetheart. n yeah you would definately continue it..would love to read :p

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