zaya os No Goodbyes... Part 2 (pg 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS..!!!! Zain is cute n quite bubbly...very nice..waitin for next n thanks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gotcha :D "MIRRORS"
but u know this chap nly made me read al your ff's
one of ur best stories...i wud love to read this with ZAYA!!
continu soon awesome :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww isnt Zain a sweetheart ❤️
cute OS ...

Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm wrk dear...
Asalways outstanding wrk...
Loved ir...
Thanks alot for pm dea...
Keep rocking
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

cute and awesome one.poor Aliya she feel embarrass,but Zain is a sweetheart.i love the way he asked for forgive.u would continue it.i would love to read more.

Thnks dear... 🤗
Ofcourse I'll cont it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina927

it was fun to read it again lara... 😃
used dat very idea of urs... imagination 😉
thanks for the pm...

Glad to knw that you are trying with that " imagination " idea... 😊
Hope this works... fingers crossed.
Love u naina... ❤️❤️
thnks a lot fr ur comment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

Awww isnt Zain a sweetheart ❤️

cute OS ...

Loved it

Yes... ☺️... he is...
Thanks a lot for ur comment... take care... 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SunShine_A

This is cute... Hope to see next part soon

Thanks... 😳😳 and yes I'll updt soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hiii lara...
I like this os n their kit kit. ... pls continue. ...

n pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u all so much for liking and commenting on the first part. I replied a few of your comments and though I wanted to reply to all of them but coulndt... :( .. sorry for that and I hope you will understand.

Forgive the mistakes please...


No Goodbyes


Part 2



I don't answer. But how come this shameless excuse of human being wont say anything, staring at me for a few seconds he asked, " Well.. I said my name, why don't you say yours ?? "


I did something stupid now. Shocking myself I answered, " Aaliya ".


What the hell !! Why I said my name to this jerk !! Maybe, I am also turning into a freaking insane like this guy. Madness is also spreading through the air like swine flue.


" And your surname ? ", he asked with a little smile relaxing his body a bit , as the so called conversation has started now.


" Franqlin.. Aaliya Franqlin ", I answered dazed and confused of why in the first place I am talking to him .


" Whattt !!!... haa... haa... haaa... uhhh... heee... haaa... ahhh... ".


Holy f*** !!!... He again started laughing !!! ... Again... !!!


Whats so funny about my name now !! If I say I am feeling like slapping him hard.. it would be an understatement, but I cant really slap him.. my so called manufacturing fault. I felt tears moistening my eyes , I stood up and started moving away but he caught my wrist hurriedly. Which level of audacity he has !! It wont be bad if I could kick his ass right now. In fact I would have if he hadn't pulled me towards him suddenly and me accidently falling on his rock like.. chillesed chest. And now I am sitting on his lap my palms resting on his shoulders instinctly because of the impact of the fall.


Our eyes lock with each other for a few moments maybe.. which seemed like hours, we stay as if gazing into the depths of each others souls. Never have I ever felt so exposed like this infront of anyone, he seems to read my emotions now as his own eyes suddenly start burning with so many unsaid things. He's looking at me so intently that it's almost etheral.


I jump up hurriedly and he also stands up. He notices my uncomfortableness and apologized sweetly holding his ears. It was so genuine that I couldnt help but smile nodding my head. He requested me to sit back again... well obviously not on his lap but on the chair and I sit back.


" So why you were laughing at my name now.. its not something funny I guess. " I asked getting serious.


" Umm actually I laughed... cause your surname reminded me of that creepy dr. Frankenstine, it's weird and so are you. "


" Excuse me !! "


" Hey... dont take offense, but its actually funny. "... he stiffled another fit of his laughter.


We stay silent for a while.


" What ?? ".. I ask him noticing that he has been staring at my eyes now with his eyebrows furrowed.


He shook his head back and forth saying... it's nothing. But I ain't gonna buy that, so I glare and feigning getting scared he chuckles slightly raising his hands up in surrender.


Clearing his throat he says... " Well... theres this thing about you eyes, they are this oddly light brown... "


So he's back to his flirting mood now and would start those pickup.. cheesy lines.. typically starting from eyes.


" What !!!... First you see a beautiful girl .. tease her.. laugh at her like a maniac and if that is not enough you now try to flirt ... ", I couldnt finish my sentence as he cut in.


" Whahh !! Whahhh !! Look... now thats the place where all the problems are getting started... you are imagining yourself , actually over imagining yourself as very beautiful... "


" So you think I am not beautiful ? ", I ask with a straight face.


" Dont take me wrong.. huh.., you can be called beautiful in this country but in India you will be not called so. "


" How's that? ", now I am getting curious. I was born in this country and hey I don't think of me like a running model or something.. but I am not ugly either.. huh... So I am kinda curious to his explanation.. of .. armmm... beauty... ??


He streaches his chair a little bit forward and continues with his explanation.


I lean back leisurely and listen to him...


" The kind of eyes you have is called cats eyes. In my country .. means in India, men usually dont want to marry girls having cats eyes. Thats kind of a superstition but still matters in someway. " He say's raising his one eyebrow.


I can clearly see he is trying to tease me, but he is dealing with the witty aaliya.. silly boy. So I decide tp play along, " Reallyyy... " I smirk.


" Yeah.. but I can give you an information about your eyes, that is.. your eyes are not going to be this light brown colour for forever... They will keep getting darker and darker with your growing age. "


" Really !!! how can you say that for sure ? "

" Well, I am a doctor. I am doing my internship at a hospital in NY. My speciality is eye. "

" Interesting. So when will my eyes get completely black ? "

" Urmmm... maybe when you will be old. " He answers after thinking a bit.

" So you are saying that, if I vgo to your country when I grow old.. they will call me beautiful at that time ... right !!! "


" Huh !!! haa ... haa.. haa.. haa.. hee..hee ... ", there he again starts.


I wait for him to stop. Few minutes later he stops, " You are funny.. really.. "


"And are you a pshyco...?? ", I ask out that precious question at last.


" No brown girl, I am a doctor... I told you right . But I have this laughing disease, I have a personal record of laughing continuously about more than an hour. "

" Huhh !!!... What more weird diseases you have ? "

" I have armm.. sleeping disease. When I sleep, its the most difficult thing in world to wake me up. "

" Thats a common disease by the way. Many people have this... "

" Yeah... but not like mine.. let me explain. A few years back I was living in a hostel in manhatton. One night I was sleeping and earthquake began. The rule of earthquake is first there will be a little shaking and after a while the devastating massive shaking starts."

I curiously listen as he continued, " When it was quivering lightly my roommates tried to wake me up from my death like slumber but all their attempts failed. So at last finding no other option they carried me outside and laid me on the road. The whole night during the earthquake I was sleeping peacefully on the road beside a waste bin when people were screaming and running for their lives. I woke up early morning and got the shock of my life, the whole city infront of me was a mess. Large building were crumbled down.. it was total chaos."


Now we both are laughing crazily. Zain's more likely to fell off from his chair. My stomach paining due to the unstoppable rofling. He clutches my hand in the process and I shiver a little.


He seems to notice that and stops laughing, we find ourselves lost into a little eyelock. Suddenly I break the eyelock snapping out of the spell of his eyes and look around. People present there were looking at us, our loud laughing certainly got their attention I guess.


I hear him clearing his throat...

" I think , we should find some other place away from them to sit and talk.. we are disturbing them. " He said pointing to the people giving us weird looks.


" Nope, I dont think so. Its time for me to leave. "

I say after a pause... " To say goodbye.. "


I saw shock and dissapointment written on his face.


" I have to leave now. Its getting dark. My tour members might be waiting for me in the bus.. Bye.." , I say again and stand up to leave.


He also stands up with me, " At least stay a little bit more. "


Is that sadness in his voice !! Maybe I am just imagining things.


" No.. ", my voice come out blunt and firm as I start walking away.


Sounds of his feetsteps are coming after me, " Hey.. I have my car with me.. Let me drop you home. "


" Thanks but I dont ride with strangers. " My tone again harsh without giving away any emotion.. great work aaliya. I pat myself on my back.


" But we are not strangers, you know my name and I know yours. " He said desperately.


" That doesnt mean anything to me, we are still strangers.. goodbye.. ", saying my final words and without giving him anymore chance to talk further, I hurriedly take steps away from this crazy guy.. zain.


He stops following me now... thanks God !!


While walking away, I can clearly imagine his hurt expression. I cant help but feel a little bad for him.. for hurting him and for going away from him like this.. for maybe leaving back this sweetly annoying jerk.


But the next second I brush off those guilty thoughts. It was necessary to teach him a lesson. Just by buying a film for my cam he thought that he earned himself a point... how stupid !! Now he got the aaliya style punishment. First let them climb on your head and then suddenly throw them into the mud mercilessly. Raising my collar playfully I force a smile of pride to appear on my lips...


Afterall revenge is sweet... right...

" No miss aaliya... not at all... "


I stop dead in my track hearing his loud voice from behind me. Swinging my head back I saw him standing in the same place but this time with a confident smile on his lips.


" This is not goodbye aaliya.. I promise.. I promise I will find you again and when that day comes I will never allow you again to say goodbye to me.. ever... "


There's so much sincerity in his voice... so much confidence that it begins making my hands clammy with nervousness as my heart starts thudding like it would jump into my throat any moment.


And I walk faster... away from him.. his promise still whirling in my mind and heart, giving me this feeling that it will be surely fulfilled.




That's the end of this os. I am eager to know about your opinions and views about this os, so pls pls ppls... comment. And dont forget to hit the like buttons sweeties...


Take care... love u all..🤗🤗

Edited by devilaonmoon - 11 years ago

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