Os.. If you ever come back - Page 5

damn man the emotions wowowoowoow!! i luved it <3

Originally posted by: shaalivirman

damn man the emotions wowowoowoow!! i luved it <3

but plz continu no tragedy end poor zain and aaliya 😭

awesome OS 😃

Originally posted by: kateyes

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Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Beautiful piece.

Ohh gall !! This is such a brilliany piece of work. Yoi took me to a ride of several emotions at the same time. The opening paragrapgh was so intense and passionate and rest followed so heart wrenching with ZaYa encounter ad both anger, sympathy and sorrow investing. Zain just saw losing his child, he had been waiting for and in rage held Aaliya as culprit foegettinf het pain over losing their kid. Beautifully depicted Zain's feelings, his regret, repentance and self anger for hurting her so terribly... Loved the os

Read ur reply to sum1 tht u won't continue well I wish you would have coz this is a brilliant piece and really deserves a different ending, happy or sad upto your choixe but Zain atleast deserves to knw what hapoend to Aaliya and we writets can really formulate new story quickly on demand so try it if possible otherwse will wait for your other work :)

Originally posted by: SunShine_A

Ohh gall !! This is such a brilliany piece of work. Yoi took me to a ride of several emotions at the same time. The opening paragrapgh was so intense and passionate and rest followed so heart wrenching with ZaYa encounter ad both anger, sympathy and sorrow investing. Zain just saw losing his child, he had been waiting for and in rage held Aaliya as culprit foegettinf het pain over losing their kid. Beautifully depicted Zain's feelings, his regret, repentance and self anger for hurting her so terribly... Loved the os

Great job... Hope I'll be seeing 2nd part to this and if yes then do add some passionate scenes to it. I would love to read them and visualise on Zain- Aaliya :P

Keep ur work cmng

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Read ur reply to sum1 tht u won't continue well I wish you would have coz this is a brilliant piece and really deserves a different ending, happy or sad upto your choixe but Zain atleast deserves to knw what hapoend to Aaliya and we writets can really formulate new story quickly on demand so try it if possible otherwse will wait for your other work :)

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

mind blowing

absolutely brilliant

This OS made me cry like hell! 😭 😭 😭

I felt so bad for Zain and Aaliya at the same time, plus why would she ever return when his last words were that he never wanted to see her face ever again?! 🤢 Atleast he did feel guilt and pain and felt disgusted of himself for doing that to her.

Lara you really do surprise me with your painful but yet beautifully written stories! 😆 I just loved this OS! It was amazingly written, loved every bit of it yaar! How do you make me fall in love with your stories like this?! 😳 Great work!! All the best on your future stories on ZaYa! 😳

wow lovely os