Os.. If you ever come back - Page 4

Originally posted by: kokubaba

superb...give this story happy ending...

😛

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

Wow dear dis is another superbb update...
U rockd it...
Continue soon
Ll b waiting 4 ur next update

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome os

Originally posted by: virmanxyz

awosumme yar do cntnte tanks 4 t pm

Originally posted by: bharath91120

Please please continue i want aliya to come back

Originally posted by: BlossomingRose

Amazing OS, loved it!
It was quite emotional, nearly had tears in my eyes. You depicted Zain's feeling's very well! Just wish it had a happy ending.
But nevertheless well done and keep up the good work! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Silver_19

very heartbreaking os..and very well written.👏

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

Hi :)))

Sorry for late reply

but i was kinda writing an OS on something similar n so dint want to read urs and get influnced

Anyways i am here now.. and missy let me tell u u made me cry😭

It was beautiful. Zains pain n guilt 👏

Plz do continue and bring his life back😃

P.S> can u use a smaller font?😕 Becomes very difficult to read on phone 😳

dont forget to send me a pm when you post that ...

Awww.. you cried ...

fonts long ago... am really transfixed right now... ...

Originally posted by: Arul97

hey its so superb but very emotional, continue to write😊