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Posted: 11 years ago
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<font size="3">Os 1: The Night After The Deed. 😊


"qubool hai " those words still echoed in my mind I cant believe iam married to my enemy, wait , hold on , MY enemy , zain is mine ? aliya what are you thinking , I snapped myself I was sitting in zain's room in front of mirror thinking about my marriage.

~~~

3rd person's p.o.v :

She was so lost in her thoughts, she didn't realise zain entering the room and looking at her ,he was mesmerized by her beauty ,suddenly aliya looked at mirror and saw zain standing behind her. She stood -up and walked towards him to clear the misunderstanding.

'zain actually I , need to talk' she said tears welling in her eyes 'yah, how can you break your promise Ms.aliya haider?'zain asked controlling his anger

'pls try to understand, abbu was not in good health and I had to do these for my abbu' she explained the whole situation , tears rolled down her cheeks. For a moment zain kept silent then replied 'hmm okay ' .
She wiped her tears and said 'iam sorry' ' but this all started because of your prank' she said sarcastically.

'really? but you agreed to marry me' zain replied in the same tone as aliya's

'I was not dying to marry you zain' she groaned 'you broke your promise, and I will break my promise ' 'but this, all happened because of you'aliya said
'dont remind me that, its because if your misunderstanding' zain said angrily ' lets make a deal'

'what' aliya asked raising her eyebrows.
' we will be normal , as if nothing happened, we are the same , as we used to be before our marriage,' zain stopped after saying the word 'marriage' Then said"is that okay with you?"

'yeah cool' she smiled. zain went to bathroom taking his night suit. Aliya sighed. She opened her baggage and took her night dress, she reached back trying to find the zipper on her dress "oomph, " she had contorted her body in such a crazy angle in an attempt to unzip her elegant wedding gown "ouch" Zain came out of washroom after getting freshen - up , her back was facing him.
'aliya' he called She jumped ane turned 'zain , you just scared me'

' need help' he smirked

'your help?'she frowned pointing a finger towards him , 'no way'.

'okay then, am going to bed ' he scooted.

Aliya's mouth and eyes widened ' zain iam changing my dress, pls wait outside or in the washroom'

' you can have washroom' zain said covering himself with blanket

'zain, how on earth , am I going to manage this kilos of dress in washroom?'

'that is not my problem, I asked you to get my help but...' he said

'urgh... Zain' aliya mumbled

'okay, atleast close your eyes and cover yourself under blanket , I will change behind the dressing table' she said

'cool'

She tried for minutes fighting with her wedding dress,and in this attempt her chiffon dupatta which ayat had perfectly pinned in her top , strucked at her jwellery , and zip in a very confusing way. 'ahh, I should have first taken off this chiffon dupatta' she winced, Next thing she knew was zain had came-up and helped her in removing the chiffon dupatta.
She felt zain's hand brushed against her, his hand was warm against the cool skin on her back, sending a chill down her spine. 'what was that .' she thought

'thanks ' she said, He just stared at her, not replying , 'zain' she called

'hun, see, I told you to get my help' he smirked and scooted back to where he had been sleeping.

~~~ when she came after changing , zain was sleeping peacefully 'where am I supposed to sleep' she thought. The room was big enough but didnt had a couch.

, 'zain, where should I sleep' she asked him but he was too sleepy to answer 'zain' she called a lil louder

'pls don't disturb me , sleep anywhere'

'ya allah, where have I gotten myself into' She kept the small pillow's in the middle like a wall between them, and slept .

~~~

She woke up to a loud knocking on the door , she was puzzled as to where she was sleeping After a few seconds ,she realised that she is now" MRS.ALIYA ZAIN ABDULLAH"! she was brought out of her trance from the knock again on the door. she sat up , wore her dupatta properly ,and was about to get down from bed when she saw him and frozed in her place. Zain came out from bathroom to take his clothes from almirah only in his shorts , his back was facing her
'zain' she closed her eyes with palm

'am... Am so sorrry' she said but didn't got any reply.
'zaaiin'

'what, why have you closed your eyes' zain asked after taking clothes

'what what?'aliya asked baffled 'wear your clothes' She said , her eyes half closed now!

'why , you dont like my six-packs haan, ' he asked taking slow steps towards aliya.

'stop there zain ' she said taking a step back.

'iam your husband aliya , anyway' Zain smirked, took his T-shirt and wore it.
Then there was a third knock on the door , zain went to open , but aliya stopped. 'you have your bath first , then I will'

'okay' he schmoozed ,Aliya opened the door and saw Nafisa standing their. 'Assalamualiakum' she said.
'walaikumassalam, mom asked to give you these clothes for the evening function , our neighbours and relatives are coming' she said
'okay, thanks' aliya replied.

~~~

Zain's p.o.v : I dont know why I changed my mind of making her life a hell, there was some kinda attraction towards her, but this was new for me. How come my anger vanished in a second when I saw her crying and after listening to her explanation.

~~~

A/N:
hola fairy'ians;) so here is the update, love it?? it didn't turn out as I had expected but anyway all criticism are welcome and hey do not compare this with the serial , its completely different , I guess this Will neva happen .
as usual all mistakes are mine and are made accidentally so pls ignore it and resemblances to any other fan fiction is purely co-incident.
hit like and leave your wonderful comments , 😳 pretty please 😃
Edited by MsfairyCindreLa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
awesome update mun👏👏
loved it
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
this is really a very nice story dear..
continue soon
Edited by ImmortalLove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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UNRES...I AM SORRY DEAR...I FORGOT TO UNRES ...AND IN BTWN I LOVED IT...😛
Edited by aksasya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic update dear...😊
i totally loved it...😳
i loved their fights... their were really very cute...😆
both hate each other very much😆
continue soon..😃
Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic update
I hope to see this in the drama, zain forgetting his promise to make Aliya life miserable.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update !
They are so cute !
Zain gradually forgetting his promise to make her life a hell !
Thanks for the pm (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
fantastic update
loved it
thanks for the pm 😊

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