FF Ananya & the Thakur Brothers: Into the Dragons pit (END) - Page 8

Originally posted by: debs4u

First thing is it d final chapter Riya?

I don't know but i feel there is 1more... don't know if m right or wrong but i think Garv n Ananya should talk about their relationship face to face... like all their mindtalks n thoughts should be out infront of each other... they should admit n accept... not only in bed but also in reality...

Though it's my pov...
n i 'll comment on this part too... after some time...

The next chapter will be my last. Thanks for liking it. Their relationship is quite twisted at this point neither wants to come right out and say it, but if anyone will it will be Ananya who tbh did try to stop him but couldn't bring herself to talk to him.

Originally posted by: ..DRoadSoFar..

three words

I AM DEAD ☺️☺️ ❤️

yaar this is hottt don't end it 🤔

Thank you so muchxx, next chapter is last but will b very long

Originally posted by: OtakuGirl-Debo

OMG..Riya...☺️..too hot to handle...😳...I just love you...❤️

hugsxxx
Thanks deb, I hope Garvs possessiveness came through

Ohk i was right... there 'll be a final one...thanks in advance...
Now for this part... i just loved it... first Ananya's self talks during convo with amar n samar...loved how amar is being nice to her.. like u mentioned laundiya to ananya...though for his character it's something huge that she also gave a thought on dat..n samar is like an innocent kid...for a little time being ananya did smile... but Garv is allover her mind... like he just captured her by thoughts... physically n mentally... n she is also thinking about the after effects of their new intimate relationship too... that she tried to hide d marks by covering her body... n she was right... it did affect on shakti when he saw dat...n he concerned for her just a little not much... coz somehow he guessed it that something is really happening between garv n her... so he also almost in a mess when ananya didn't denied that... ohh...heat is on...he seems confused n a little hurt...

N d last part was as fab as garv's cute n peaceful face almost made her fall for him at some point... forehead kiss is a bliss... n then again their hot,intense but somehow sweet encounter... specially dis time garv was not so aggressive n his eyes not full of lust... coz dis time he was possessive n down with her inner beuty...n like he knows dat he already claimed her so he is using his rights... in a soft manner... but ananya stopped him by dat kiss or he just let her do dat...well now she also knows how to stop him from going further... typical wifi thing she applied...

Awesome update riya...i just loved ur writing... all d emotional patches u just penned down so beautifully... waiting for the final parts... as wanna see Garv n Ananya to be on each others side...

N m so sorry for my so long comment... but i couldn't help it... had to write my views... coz m loving ur writing... u deserves d appreciation...

i have read the teaser part 🤔

Originally posted by: debs4u

Ohk i was right... there 'll be a final one...thanks in advance...
Now for this part... i just loved it... first Ananya's self talks during convo with amar n samar...loved how amar is being nice to her.. like u mentioned laundiya to ananya...though for his character it's something huge that she also gave a thought on dat..n samar is like an innocent kid...for a little time being ananya did smile... but Garv is allover her mind... like he just captured her by thoughts... physically n mentally... n she is also thinking about the after effects of their new intimate relationship too... that she tried to hide d marks by covering her body... n she was right... it did affect on shakti when he saw dat...n he concerned for her just a little not much... coz somehow he guessed it that something is really happening between garv n her... so he also almost in a mess when ananya didn't denied that... ohh...heat is on...he seems confused n a little hurt...

N d last part was as fab as garv's cute n peaceful face almost made her fall for him at some point... forehead kiss is a bliss... n then again their hot,intense but somehow sweet encounter... specially dis time garv was not so aggressive n his eyes not full of lust... coz dis time he was possessive n down with her inner beuty...n like he knows dat he already claimed her so he is using his rights... in a soft manner... but ananya stopped him by dat kiss or he just let her do dat...well now she also knows how to stop him from going further... typical wifi thing she applied...

Awesome update riya...i just loved ur writing... all d emotional patches u just penned down so beautifully... waiting for the final parts... as wanna see Garv n Ananya to be on each others side...

I love reading long comments dont apologise!!!
Thankyou Deb so much for appreciating the chapter and for your generous praise🤗. Im glad you enjoyed the interactions of ananya with her respective husbands. I enjoyed writing the AMar Samar scene, because they are so overshadowed by the others, we hardly know them as characters, so it was nice writing them in a more pleasant light.
Shakti is embroiled in his own guilt and frustration because he knows he has no control over the matter whereas Garv is propelling his own game with her. Ananya is trying to steer the game in her own hands but as soon as she was back in Garv presence it began to slip away from her again. In a twisted way that is very Garv Thakur like, she wants him to feel a longing for her just how he had invaded her, and plagued her thoughts, she is at the same time learning from him.

Originally posted by: ..DRoadSoFar..

i have read the teaser part 🤔

gosh... bhavna is in trouble

She is.. hope you enjoyed reading it

Through out the update I could actually empathize with anu. Poor girl was just not able to get rid of garv's thought. I liked her interactions with twin bros. It felt good to see Amar in a soft manner. Samar was as usual cute. Shakti's guilt was so much appealing. I so wanted anu to say those words in show also. Then last scene. I just blushed at the thought of ananya in garv's room. Specially after what had happened between them last night. Then ananya noticed him in sleep. You have penned down her attraction very well between all the contradictory thoughts. Although I would have demanded some emotional connection if you were planning to extend this story. But this was amazing. Loved how garv behaved softer this time. Letting her to take control in last and then her going away. Aah.. I could imagine all these things. About the last part it better have a steamy confession otherwise you will have to write one more part exclusively for it.

Found interesting that she trying to block out Garv and thinks about Samar and Amar who were quite nice to her here but she still can't get him out of her
Then Shakti he still mad for her but doesn't seem to know what to do.
Then Garv scene, it was nice seeing him a bit gentle with her and letting her go as it signals something more than just physical attraction but it was also nice reading his thoughts where he has these moments that quite feral.
You captured it well, Ananya inner thoughts too!