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[Please read chapters on pg 11 before this one if you have not already done so]


Scene 13

Ananya opened her eyes in a daze, almost forgetting where she was. The sounds of the door being unbolted had jolted her awake, she must have fallen into a stupor. Could it be Adharsh? She thought waiting with expectancy, perhaps he had rescued Bhavna who would tell him where she was. Of course her hope was all in vain, her misfortune continued its rule as she looked at Garv who was emerging from the dense blackness, locking the door behind him. Ananya retreated against the wall with a racing heart while he edged forward. His face was a shadow. He knelt down but she started to kick wildly, before he lifted her up and turned her round calmly untying the rope from her wrists. Her heart leapt with a small flicker of hope, but was quickly extinguished the moment he spoke.
'I despise you, I want you to know that'. He came round to face her and there was a flicker of madness in his eyes. Ananya pulled the bandage off her mouth and flung it aside.
Hating her was easier, destroying her till she begged for mercy was easier. And then there was Shakti, her history with him compelled him to fill him with contempt. She was only property...something he had to remember when looking at her, when becoming lost within her earnest eyes ... and she was his, only his.
'We often pretend to hate what we desire most' the words just slipped out, Ananya didn't know what possessed her to say this to him. Maybe she wanted to reel him in, maybe she enjoyed it despite of her better sense. Or maybe she saw herself mirrored through his eyes...
Garv pulled her into him and shoved her against the door.. His face was inches against hers, suffocating her vision, eyes burning into hers. He placed one hand on her cheek running his thumb along her mouth.
'I feel nothing but hate for you.' He said softly breathing against her mouth before kissing her deeply. Something inside her stirred at the tone of his dreamy voice. She realised she should be fighting him off but his kiss was sending her into a trance, and she relaxed into him while running her slender fingers through his hair in approval of his advances. There was an urgency in it making them seek each other as if nothing else mattered.
As they broke for breath she said

'It's not hate Garv, it's not what you think it is.'
'Don't test my patience Ananya' he breathed heavily.
Garv fixed his intense eyes on hers and he resumed his kiss with her again with more vigour this time while unfastening his shirt and tossing it aside. She was thankful to him as she slid her hands up his bare chest feeling the flexing taut muscles of his body. He pulled her up by her hips and onto the table. She leaned into him while he kissed her down her neck and pressed his fingers into her waist slowly running one hand up her body. There was a playful look in him as he met her eyes.

'Now tell me that you hate me.' He said huskily before kissing her again. Ananya felt him brushing his thumb playfully across her blouse just before he pulled her down from the table again and brushed his body fervently up against hers as they kissed, causing her to break the kiss, while gasping from the intensity. Her voice was arousing, compelling him to venture into her with deeper urgency as he did before. She clinged tightly onto his arms as he found her mouth with his, kissing her softly. He brushed his mouth down her neck
'Do it Ananya. Tell me you hate me.' He breathed, sliding his fingers just beneath her blouse and fondling her there gently. Ananya melted into his warm enticing touch and gasped as he became persistent in his caresses.
'Garv' she sighed from resignation, not managing to say anything more as he met her mouth with his again. It was the reaction he was waiting for but he wanted to surprise her even more. He slid his hand back around her waist again and pulled her into him while thrusting himself into her hips till they clashed against the wall, causing her to gasp from the shock, he kissed her softly and slowly began rubbing up and down her body giving her time to match his pace, insistently seeking her mouth with his as she shied away more from want of breath. He pressed his forehead against hers looking at her reassuringly and spoke softly

'Tell me if you want to me to stop' while further probing her reactions with a deep fondness in his eyes as he continued to steadily press himself into her, his mouth was hot against her skin

'Don't stop..' she said breathlessly leaning into him and clutching his skin. He smiled savouring the high pitched sounds of her submissive moans, feeling the arching of her hips as he urged her closer still into him.

'Then say it, say that you hate me' he whispered against her mouth in a raspy tone. She squinted her eyes shut, sliding her hands across his back and turning her face away his from his in order to reclaim her breath while relishing the sensations he was giving her. What more do you want from me Garv? She thought internally. He grew aroused by the sounds of her voice. Her compulsive moans of ecstasy were like sweet music to his ears and made him persist with a fervour in his movements. She felt his mouth curl in triumph, felt the perspirations and increasing heat of his skin against hers before they resumed their kiss, pausing often to regain their breath. It thrilled him that he was able to send her into raptures, something he alone could do to her. Ananya hugged him close to her unable to comprehend the reality of it as her senses became drowned in his touches yet again and tried hard to meet his rhythms as they symphonically rose and fell in unison rubbing slowly against one another, she leaned onto his shoulder and breathed out a sigh as they slowed down to a stop. I hate you for the same reason I love you, she thought feeling the sweet ache below her navel. But he wanted to look at her and drew her back while pressing his forehead against hers. She closed her eyes and smiled approvingly while his mouth brushed hers and ran his fingers slowly down her neck and further down tracing the swelling of her curves. He then kissed her down her neck moving slowly down her body to her bare navel planting soft kisses below, the burning sensations lingering on her skin. Ananya threw her head back sighing deeply before leaning in and kneeling down to meet him. She brought her hands to his face and kissed him.
'I don't hate you. And nor do you hate me'. Her eyes twinkled endearingly. Garv watched her with a softened expression.
'Then tell me what you feel for me'. He said in a whisper. She nuzzled her face against his neck affectionately while wrapping her arms around his shoulders.
'Lets not say it lest we curse it' she said gazing fondly into his eyes and cupped his cheeks with both hands while kissing him tenderly on the mouth.

Some things are better left unsaid'. She said enigmatically encircled his shoulders with her arms again.
Garv brushed her soft tresses to the side and kissed her tenderly on one cheek then the other while she closed her eyes in contentment. He glanced lovingly into her eyes, a smile reflected in them.
I love you. He thought. She hugged him closely settling into the warmth of his chest while he smiled upon her.

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Final Scene

A hammering on the doors. Garv and Ananya jerked up to the booming noises coming from the other side of the doors. They had fallen asleep in each other's arms. Ananya watched Garv hurriedly sweep his shirt from the floor and quickly buttoning it up as Shakti followed by Amar and Samar burst into the room. This unexpected shift in the atmosphere made everyone pause. Samar and Amar glanced at each other, plain confusion written on their faces while Shakti glanced at Garv and Ananya suspiciously noting the dishevelment of them as they stood up.

'What is she doing without her bandages?' he commanded a growing revulsion contorting his features

Garv held her hand in his as Ananya looked on at him with a mixture of reverie and fear. Garv smirked at Shakti,

'I untied her because I wanted to give her some company'

Don't play with me Garv, it's not working'

You think I'm playing with you?' he jeered

Garv released her hand and confronted Shakti in the face. There was a moment of disconcerting silence as the elder brothers locked their eyes in a face-off. Shakti commanded Samar to tie her up again before addressing Garv, all the while keeping his eyes fixed on him.

What do you think you're doing?' Shakti snapped with pronounced malice. Garv got straight to the point,

You're just upset because she doesn't reciprocate your feelings' he said viciously narrowing his eyes. Shakti replied with a measured composure,

Don't fool yourself Garv, she's playing a game herself, she has no interest in either me or you.' Garv smirked suggestively. Shakti frowned wondering why Garv wasn't ruffled by what he had just told him.

'Maybe you should ask her that' Garv said a mischievous glint in his eyes Didn't you wonder what I was doing here locked up with Ananya?' He asked self-assuredly strutting closer to him.

'Just me and her... alone' Garv said twisting the words into him for extra effect. Shakti looked at him nonchalantly.

'There's a limit Garv, seriously, don't embarrass yourself with lies'.

Garv was clearly enraged but he checked himself and said with a side glance at Ananya.

'She hasn't objected to what I've told you so you can assume whatever you like.' He said in a sinister undertone.

'Waise bhi chote, we've shared some intimate moments that you will never get yourself since you betrayed her'. He said tenderly, disguising the bitterness he felt towards Shakti. The tension was so thick at this point it made Ananya recoil inside. At the same time she felt used, and looked in repulsion at Garv. She was growing more convinced that this was all being done to spite Shakti, he hated him with a passion and she wouldn't put it past him to have planned to seduce her just to show Shakti that he could. She was unable to find her voice feeling frustrated that Garv had played her, and gained the upper hand in the game. Deep down she knew it would come to this but wasn't one bit prepared for the hurt it gave her even though she knew well that trusting the any of the Thakur brothers would only end in disaster.

Shakti's outrage reached its peak and he pulled Garv by the open collar of his shirt while saying,

'Just look at you with your half-open shirt, strutting your cleavage around like a sl*g. It's no wonder she gave in to you just like all the wh**es tend to do', Shakti lashed out cruelly while throwing him back.

Garv face was livid with a deadly rage, he clenched his teeth and kicked Shakti forcing him to stagger back. Garv approached him but Shakti recovered quickly and punched Garv in the face. Blood trickled down the side of Garv's mouth as he turned his head to look at Shakti, his face seething with temper while he gritted his teeth, it was a ghastly sight. Garv straightened himself and responded by pounding Shakti hard against his jaw and stood heaving over him as he watched his younger brother reeling from the blow. Amar jolted out of his initial shock and ran over to Garv in attempt to detain him from inflicting any further damage on Shakti but was thrown roughly onto the floor while Samar let go of Ananya and held onto Shakti who shoved him away. Shakti regained his footing and advanced on Garv, drawing him by the collar of his shirt again and threw him roughly against the door, he tore his shirt apart before knocking him several times in the chest and jaw. Garv gripped one hand round the back of Shakti's head and swiftly swerved him round till he came clashing against the room wall while he thrashed him ruthlessly in the chest with his clenched fist causing him to lurch back from the blows. Then, in an odd turnaround of events he pulled him into a close suffocating hug. Shakti held tightly onto him and they remained wrapped closely in a bloody embrace. The youngest brothers were stupefied by the sight and rushed over to them this time managing to pull them apart, and their hysteric yells were drowned out as Garv and Shakti glowered fixedly at one another. Meanwhile Ananya had seized her moment to break free when Samar had released her. She had found Bhavna in the side room tied up to a chair lying unconscious and was undoing her ropes in a flurry. She sprinkled some water on her and was relieved to see her eyes open.

'Bhavna we need to get out of here very quickly, the brothers are in the middle of a violent fight' she said trying to conceal her panic as she saw the horrified expression on Bhavna's face. They edged forward to the door, Ananya saw the brothers still locked in a stare-off while the younger brothers tried to pacify them. She held Bhavna's hand tightly and they slipped past the drama unnoticed as their backs were turned to them. Just as they were heading for the door, they heard a sickening crash of a glass vase that toppled over. The brothers swerved around. No time to be wasted, Ananya frantically undid the locks while Shakti, Garv, Amar and Samar headed towards them before the doors finally came open and Ananya and Bhavna came stumbling out. Ananya swivelled on her feet and locked the door in their faces just in time. The girls sprinted away without looking back. They darted for the staircase and on reaching the landing safely they quickly glanced up. To her dismay she met the seething looks of the boys who had somehow managed to break the door open as they looked down on them from above.

'Ananya! Don't you dare leave us Ananya!' hissed Garv through bloody teeth.

It was as if the power had shifted, she caught a glimpse of desperation in his features and should have felt slightly gratified that her absence would have that effect on him. But it no longer mattered anymore. I will have to leave you Garv Thakur. All of you. I don't want to be a part of this destructive dysfunctional family any longer. I choose life.

The girl's whipped around the hall's pillars to make way for the door but brothers bolted down the stairs in a matter of seconds, and to their terror were quickly advancing on them. Ananya knocked some chairs over to obstruct the brothers' view, tripping both Shakti and Garv but before she could get away she felt a firm hand tug at her ankle till she came tumbling down, she tried to pull away but was being dragged back. Bhavna run!' she screamed

It was too late however as Amar and Samar seized Bhavna by her waist just as she was about to reach the door. She squirmed against their combined strength and Amar kept a hand closed over her mouth. Meanwhile Shakti had twisted her round and was dragging her along the floor into him but she gave him a good kick in the stomach sending him reeling backwards and quickly shuffled away in panic when she was instantly dragged by her leg again this time by Garv who hauled her in to him, and speedily crawled over her before she could flee again. She thrashed helplessly under his weight before he pinned her arms to the floor and gazed at her possessively. He kissed her hard, and she could taste the blood on his lips and felt his hot chest through his green shredded shirt as he crushed her beneath him.

'I love you Ananya, don't leave me'. He said breathlessly. She returned him a look of pity, and kissed him back. It caused him to slacken his hold on her arms and she timed her moment to kick him hard before briskly pulling herself away. Garv leapt up and pulled her into him from behind wrapping an arm around her while pressing one hand over her mouth to stifle her scream. He brushed his mouth against her neck while saying

'Ananya I won't let you leave... I love you too much' her face wreathed with anguish and tears rolled down her face from a mixture of pity and the pain he was causing her not just from squeezing her tightly. Shakti looked genuinely affected as he watched Garv profess his affection. Ananya bit down on his hand and fled his hold and hurled a chair at Amar causing him to fall backwards. Bhavna made a frenzied escape from them and caught Ananya's hand.

They were all screaming her name but she continued to run without looking behind her. Whatever may come she would run. She thought solemnly. I was ensnared by all of you into a life I never wanted. Leaving was the only way out of this madness. Bhavna stopped suddenly and said Adharsh' but Ananya reassured her, they would not harm Adharsh however much they might have threatened to. Adharsh would eventually come to his own senses and leave the household to live with his wife. Ananya once again shut the doors on them hearing their desperate thumps and poundings against the doors mixed with their bouts of swearing emitting from the other side. She gave one last look at the house before walking off looking into the distant horizon that was beginning to glow with the specks of a rising sun.

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Edited by daenerysnow - 9 years ago
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Scene 12



Bhavna walked in the hall feeling a growing unease
in the pit of her stomach. She had hoped one of the brothers would come round
and be the bigger man but stubbornness just seemed to run in the whole family. Adharsh
and his brothers were at a cold war with each other and she knew it was partly
because of her. She came to an abrupt stop as she reached the end of the
corridor hearing muffling sounds issuing from next door before she could listen
inshe was suddenly grabbed around her waist and about to shriek when immediately
stifled as a hand closed over her mouth.


'Sshhh' a whisper in her ear.

She thrashed in his hold but the arm around her was
too strong.

She was starting to feel faint and fell motionless back
into her captor. She melted into a pool of blackness...


...Her vision was blurry as she began to adjust to
the dim light. She felt a searing pain at her wrists, as someonetwisted
her arms behind her. The youngest Thakur was tying a rope around her while Amar
held her in place.


'Tighten it securely Samar'


'What are you doing?' She stuttered in alarm


'Teaching you a lesson.' Samar said the faintest
hint of a sneer curling his mouth
. She writhed about as Amar held her.

'Please let me go, is this a way to treat a
woman?!' Hethrew her down onto a chair and rested his hands on either
side.
She gazed up looking petrified.

'No. But you give us no choice.'


He said and bent low to meet her pale complexion
while eyeing her with a desire in his eyes. He brushed his fingers slowly down
the side of her face while she shuddered from his touch. Tears were forming in
her eyes but it only transfixed him.


'Amar you fool, she's not Ananya that we can share
her'.
Amar stood up looking resentfully at his brother. Shakti approached the chair and knelt down. She
hadn't noticed him lurking in the shadows. He gazed at her pitifully.


'Someone from the brothel wants you dead for
running away.' She looked aghast.Shakti examined her keenly.


'So you tell me ladki, how does someone as innocent
as you end up in a brothel?

Bhavna shook her head in incredulity.

'I don't know what you are talking about. Please
let me go.' She said shaking.


'Well aren't you just the player' a new voice spoke
jeeringly from the dark. Garv came forward while Shakti stood up.


'Listen 'bhabhi ji' we can do this cat-mouse game all
night, as it is, Adharsh is drunk senseless that he won't be coming to your
rescue anytime soon.' He spoke with a tenderness that masked the underlying threat
of his message. Bhavna tried to restrain the flow of her tears.


'Why...why are you tormenting me? I don't know of any
brothel!' She cried with mounting dread. Samar said sarcastically,


'Hush laundiya, why are you looking shocked for?
That brothel is a place we frequent, you should have been more careful'.


'I don't have any idea what you are on about' She wept.


Garv looked at her with a foreboding calm. He knelt
down and said


'Really? So you really don't remember me?' He said
suggestively. She looked at him blank faced, genuinely rattled by his
insinuation.


'Wh..what are you implying? You all just want me
out of Adharsh's life don't you?' She said dejectedly while Garv regarded her
with a deadly look.


He dragged her up and threw her against Samar who
held her arms tightly from behind her.


'Adharsh was paying you for your services and like
true romantics you both fell in love with each other. You were the damsel in
distress and he came to save you from that desolation. And you kept each other's
secrets.' He walked up to her and gave her a piercing look.


'Am I right?' Tears streamed down her face and she
looked at him in disbelief.


'Not so bholi after all, are you dear bhabhi' he
leered twisting the words into her and watching carefully for her reaction.


At that he commanded Samar to take her away to be
locked up. She writhed about hopelessly as he slapped his hand over her to
quell her screams and pulled her away. He opened the door finding Ananya
standing on the threshold...

She stared at them in pure shock. Everything
happened in a flicker of seconds. Shakti pulled Ananya in and pushed her
against a wall closing his hand over her mouth while Samar took Bhavna with him into a
side room. Ananyas eyes were wide with fear. With no time to lose she pushed him away and fled the
room, while the brothers rapidly followed her out. She tried to run as fast as she
could but they were gaining in on her. She turned sharply round a corner and
clashed into Samar who shook his head rather insinuatingly and regarded her
with a dark look.

She felt them hem her in and tried to dart away but
was pulled roughly by Garv who encircled his arms tightly from behind her. The
familiarity of his body heat got to her while he brushed his face against her
neck, trying to resist the urge to tear her apart with his teeth.


'Hi again' he whispered, she felt his hot breath
against her skin while his lips brushed lightly up her neck.


Shakti frowned as he caught Ananyas expression
which had softened at the sound of Garvs voice.
Shakti moved forward and wrenched her away while
Garv threw him a vile look. He threw her into a room, and the others followed
them in. Amar drew the lock on the door.


Garv walked
up to her and pulled his gun out pointing it to her forehead. He then trailed
it slowly down her body following the movement with his eyes while keeping the hilt of the gun pressed firmly against her navel. He drew
right up to her then and she squirmed against him as he brushed his lips across
her cheek and to her ear, he whispered suggestively,


'You had better behave tonight Ananya'. He kissed
her softly on cheek. She scratched at his face as he did but her defiance only
aroused him and he shoved her hard to a door pinning her arms against it till
she gasped.


'Why do you continue to disobey me, sweet patniji?'
he grimaced seeking her out as she twisted and turned her face away from his
close proximity. She felt his breath warm against her skin and he brushed his
mouth teasingly against hers almost rekindling the intense moments they had
shared not too long before.


'You're pathetic' she said spitefully while meeting
his tempting gaze. Her resistance both enraged and intrigued at once. His eyes
glinted with a sliver of malice as he tackled her to the floor pinning her arms
down and she felt his crushing weight above her. They gazed at each other for
an interval of a few seconds. She failed to understand how this was the same
man who had shown a more tender albeit passionate side to him when they had
been together. He had behaved quite differently when they had been alone and
yet now there was definite malice in his intentions. She wondered if she could
ever keep up with his temperament. Garv finally let her go and swung her up with
mighty force and throwing her till she landed onto
a sofa. Shakti pounced on her and pinned her down onto the sofa. She tried to
propel herself up but he pushed her back.


'You won't be leaving this room alive unless you
co-operate.'


'I don't have to listen to you. You are all
pathetic, locking up a helpless girl all because she refuses to buy into your
lies' she scoffed. Shakti scowled and released her and went in search of a
piece of cloth to use as a bandage. Something to shut her preachy mouth up. Garv's
temper was inflamed as he had watched them within inches of each other but he kept
himself under control while eyeing them with plain disgust.. Amar gripped Ananya
by the nape of her neck and pulled her up.


'Lovely wife you always make this harder than
it should be' he grimaced.


Ananya had a thought, deciding she wasn't going to
let them gain the advantage again.


'Ouch, ouch, ouch!' She yelled. She flopped down on
the sofa as Amar released her surprised by her sudden change in reaction.What
are you moaning about? He said impatiently


'When Garv threw me on the sofa, my ankle twisted.
I can't stand.' She exclaimed rubbing at her ankle, it wasn't a complete lie.


'Ouch, it really pains!' She cried squinting her
eyes. Garv eyed her suspiciously before kneeling down before her.


'Let me take a look' he said, he shifted his eyes
wickedly in Shakti's direction before taking her shoe off. He slipped his hand
around her ankle and massaged it gently, she tried not to wince and grew very
conscious of his hand seeking her skin just beyond her ankle, moving up her
leg. His face was a dark shadow as he bored his eyes into hers surveying her
intensely. She withdrew her leg slightly but he didn't let go. Shakti looked at
Garv repulsively and intervened. He dragged Ananya up and tossed her to Samar. The
action only fed Garv's pride as smirked upon Shakti's reaction. Ananya faltered
in her step as she was flung harshly against Samar who spun her round to face
Shakti while holding her in place.


Shakti walked menacingly to her swinging the
bandage around his wrist before starting to tie it around her mouth. She gazed
imploringly at Garv who simply looked at her mysteriously. Samar held her arms
behind her as Shakti knotted a rope around her wrists. He then threw her
against the floor and they all stood over her intimidatingly.


Garv knelt down to meet her weary expression. He stroked
the side of her face gently and she responded to his touch by swiftly turning
her head away.

'The more you resist us the more we chase you down.' He said softly into her ear before standing up
again.


'Don't mess with us Ananya, we know your tricks
only too well' Shakti said darkly.


'And stop interfering in our business laundiya, or
you will come to regret it' Amar remarked rather flippantly. At that they walked
away leaving her in the dark.


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Ananya opened her eyes in a
daze, almost forgetting where she was. The sounds of the door being unbolted
had jolted her awake, she must have fallen into a stupor. Could it be Adharsh?
She thought waiting with expectancy, perhaps he had rescued Bhavna who would
tell him where she was. Of course her hope was all in vain, her misfortune
continued its rule as she looked at Garv who was emerging from the dense
blackness, locking the door behind him. Ananya retreated against the wall with
a racing heart while he edged forward. His face was a shadow. He knelt down but
she started to kick wildly, before he lifted her up and turned her round calmly
untying the rope from her wrists. Her heart leapt with a small flicker of hope,
but was quickly extinguished the moment he spoke.

'I despise you, I want you to know that'. He came round to face her and there
was a flicker of madness in his eyes. Ananya pulled the bandage off her mouth
and flung it aside.

Hating her was easier, destroying her till she begged for mercy was easier. And
then there was Shakti, her history with him compelled him to fill him with
contempt. She was only property...something he had to remember when looking at
her, when becoming lost within her earnest eyes ... and she was his, only his.

'We often pretend to hate what we desire most' the words just slipped out,
Ananya didn't know what possessed her to say this to him. Maybe she wanted to
reel him in, maybe she enjoyed it despite of her better sense. Or maybe she saw
herself mirrored through his eyes...

Garv pulled her into him and shoved her against the door.. His face was inches
against hers, suffocating her vision, eyes burning into hers. He placed one
hand on her cheek running his thumb along her mouth.

'I feel nothing but hate for you.' He said softly breathing against her mouth
before kissing her deeply. Something inside her stirred at the tone of his
dreamy voice. She realised she should be fighting him off but his kiss was
sending her into a trance, and she relaxed into him while running her slender
fingers through his hair in approval of his advances. There was an urgency in
it making them seek each other as if nothing else mattered.

As they broke for breath she said

'It's not hate Garv, it's not what you think it is.'

'Don't test my patience Ananya' he breathed heavily.

Garv fixed his intense eyes on hers and he resumed his kiss with her again with
more vigour this time while unfastening his shirt and tossing it aside. She was
thankful to him as she slid her hands up his bare chest feeling the flexing taut
muscles of his body. He pulled her up by her hips and onto the table. She
leaned into him while he kissed her down her neck and pressed his fingers into
her waist slowly running one hand up her body. There was a playful look in him
as he met her eyes.

'Now tell me that you hate me.' He said huskily before kissing her
again. Ananya felt him brushing his thumb playfully across her blouse just
before he pulled her down from the table again and brushed his body fervently
up against hers as they kissed, causing her to break the kiss, while gasping
from the intensity. Her voice was arousing, compelling him to venture into her
with deeper urgency as he did before. She clinged tightly onto his arms as he
found her mouth with his, kissing her softly. He brushed his mouth down her
neck

'Do it Ananya. Tell me you hate me.' He breathed, sliding his fingers just
beneath her blouse and fondling her there gently. Ananya melted into his warm
enticing touch and gasped as he became persistent in his caresses.

'Garv' she sighed from resignation, not managing to say anything more as he met
her mouth with his again. It was the reaction he was waiting for but he wanted
to surprise her even more. He slid his hand back around her waist again and pulled
her into him while thrusting himself into her hips till they clashed against
the wall, causing her to gasp from the shock, he kissed her softly and slowly began
rubbing up and down her body giving her time to match his pace, insistently seeking
her mouth with his as she shied away more from want of breath. He pressed his
forehead against hers looking at her reassuringly and spoke softly

'Tell me if you want to me to stop' while further probing her reactions
with a deep fondness in his eyes as he continued to steadily press himself into
her, his mouth was hot against her skin

'Don't stop..' she said breathlessly leaning into him and clutching his skin. He
smiled savouring the high pitched sounds of her submissive moans, feeling the
arching of her hips as he urged her closer still into him.

'Then say it, say that you hate me' he whispered against her mouth in a
raspy tone. She squinted her eyes shut, sliding her hands across his back and turning
her face away his from his in order to reclaim her breath while relishing the
sensations he was giving her. What more
do you want from me Garv?
She thought internally. He grew aroused by the
sounds of her voice. Her compulsive moans of ecstasy were like sweet music to
his ears and made him persist with a fervour in his movements. She felt his
mouth curl in triumph, felt the perspirations and increasing heat of his skin
against hers before they resumed their kiss, pausing often to regain their
breath. It thrilled him that he was able to send her into raptures, something
he alone could do to her. Ananya hugged him close to her unable to comprehend
the reality of it as her senses became drowned in his touches yet again and
tried hard to meet his rhythms as they symphonically rose and fell in unison
rubbing slowly against one another, she leaned onto his shoulder and breathed
out a sigh as they slowed down to a stop. I
hate you for the same reason I love you,
she thought feeling the sweet ache
below her navel. But he wanted to look at her and drew her back while pressing
his forehead against hers. She closed her eyes and smiled approvingly while his
mouth brushed hers and ran his fingers slowly down her neck and further down
tracing the swelling of her curves. He then kissed her down her neck moving
slowly down her body to her bare navel planting soft kisses below, the burning
sensations lingering on her skin. Ananya threw her head back sighing deeply
before leaning in and kneeling down to meet him. She brought her hands to his
face and kissed him.

'I don't hate you. And nor do you hate me'. Her eyes twinkled endearingly. Garv
watched her with a softened expression.

'Then tell me what you feel for me'. He said in a whisper. She nuzzled her face
against his neck affectionately while wrapping her arms around his shoulders.

'Lets not say it lest we curse it' she said gazing fondly into his eyes and
cupped his cheeks with both hands while kissing him tenderly on the mouth.

Some things are better left unsaid'. She said enigmatically encircled
his shoulders with her arms again.

Garv brushed her soft tresses to the side and kissed her tenderly on one cheek
then the other while she closed her eyes in contentment. He glanced lovingly
into her eyes, a smile reflected in them.

I love you. He thought. She hugged
him closely settling into the warmth of his chest while he smiled upon her.

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What to say?! Riya!! Garv is so commanding the way he kept challenging her to hate him inspite of the very intimate situation they were in 😈 as if he want to hear her say that she hates him and prove her wrong by making her submit to his passions
Then she also refutes that thinking by showing her affection for him.i think there is power play between them, garv wants her to wholly give in to him and she wants garv to reciprocate feelings beyond lust, by making it seem as if its something deeper
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Thank you kesar for reading it. It took me time to write this FF and I really appreciate your thoughts on it. I was rewatching some of the old begusarai eps and feeling somber watching the sweet raw camaraderie of the Thakur bros. such a shame this show never got its due from the stupid channel.
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Ahhaa...finally... i have done reading this last chapter... wow...m so sorry ria...i was offline since long... n i miss reading this...

N what to say... i can't believe it's over... n i loved all parts of this chapter... first of all i liked the way you wrote the heated convo between bhavna n the brothers... threatening to pleading... both sides... fabulous writing... n how ananya came in between them n trapped in... my heart just cried for her...

N garv-ananya's hot n intense steamy encounter... wow...there are so many different kinds of emotions in between that part... garv was always on high with his emotions.. whether its lust or love... he was never that admitting type of a guy...n ananya was always confused about her feelings... but finally actually they have said the unsaid... in mind to in eyes to their true feelings came out loud...

N last part was truly dangerous... i was expecting a hard heating face off of shakti n garv...n here it is...shakti just couldn't bear the fact that the girl he ditched.. even they all betrayed her... but she chose his brother instead of him... even without knowing each other well enough she came so close to garv...i really felt bad for garv in last while ananya was leaving... his eyes were full of pain n fear of losing her.. oh man... same with ananya...but she had no choice but leaving him...

Ria it's just mindblowing...every emotions.. every dialogue... scenes... bows down to you...claps...n again sorry for the long comment... but can't help...
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Originally posted by: debs4u

Ahhaa...finally... i have done reading this last chapter... wow...m so sorry ria...i was offline since long... n i miss reading this...

N what to say... i can't believe it's over... n i loved all parts of this chapter... first of all i liked the way you wrote the heated convo between bhavna n the brothers... threatening to pleading... both sides... fabulous writing... n how ananya came in between them n trapped in... my heart just cried for her...

N garv-ananya's hot n intense steamy encounter... wow...there are so many different kinds of emotions in between that part... garv was always on high with his emotions.. whether its lust or love... he was never that admitting type of a guy...n ananya was always confused about her feelings... but finally actually they have said the unsaid... in mind to in eyes to their true feelings came out loud...

N last part was truly dangerous... i was expecting a hard heating face off of shakti n garv...n here it is...shakti just couldn't bear the fact that the girl he ditched.. even they all betrayed her... but she chose his brother instead of him... even without knowing each other well enough she came so close to garv...i really felt bad for garv in last while ananya was leaving... his eyes were full of pain n fear of losing her.. oh man... same with ananya...but she had no choice but leaving him...

Ria it's just mindblowing...every emotions.. every dialogue... scenes... bows down to you...claps...n again sorry for the long comment... but can't help...


Thank you debs! Don't be sorry, the longer the comment the better! I'm glad you liked it. The Bhavna scene was enjoyable to write. Also that fight between Garv Shakti was inevitable and when they hugged it was almost like a twisted way of showing their love for each other. I decided to have a tragic end because it felt realistic, wasn't a sustainable relationship, Ananya is too down to earth for that.
Thanks again for your kind appreciation!
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Sorry Ria for such a late reply... Update was bang on. You presented bhavna's condition so perfectly and there comes ananya. I felt bad for both of them. Garv ananya scene was perfect. You are damn good in writing that part. Loved how you made garv confess his feelings in a twisted way. Shakti garv fight was inevitable. But these two can't afford to be against each other when situation goes out of control... Right? Loved how all of them were trying to catch girls. Though in end I felt bad for Garv (I can't see him sad, no matter what) but it was best for all of them. Lastly wonderful update.
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Originally posted by: luvankit

Sorry Ria for such a late reply... Update was bang on. You presented bhavna's condition so perfectly and there comes ananya. I felt bad for both of them. Garv ananya scene was perfect. You are damn good in writing that part. Loved how you made garv confess his feelings in a twisted way. Shakti garv fight was inevitable. But these two can't afford to be against each other when situation goes out of control... Right? Loved how all of them were trying to catch girls. Though in end I felt bad for Garv (I can't see him sad, no matter what) but it was best for all of them. Lastly wonderful update.


Awww thanks nihaa?
Thanks for your generous comments!- in this story the Thakurs got their thrills from tormenting the poor girls, Garv pushed the limit and Ananya just couldn't cope with that even though she sensed he was falling for her and she for him. The Garv Shakti dynamic was enjoyable for me to write and of course that hug just shows how complex their bond is.

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Awww thanks nihaa?
Thanks for your generous comments!- in this story the Thakurs got their thrills from tormenting the poor girls, Garv pushed the limit and Ananya just couldn't cope with that even though she sensed he was falling for her and she for him. The Garv Shakti dynamic was enjoyable for me to write and of course that hug just shows how complex their bond is.

😆 No its Shikha.

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