FF Ananya & the Thakur Brothers: Into the Dragons pit (END) - Page 6

Hi debo, thankin thee!
The next part will be the final chapter. It takes does take time to write these so I will be finalising it with my next chapter to celebrate the shows end.
I didn't really like this chapter as much as the previous one but I guess I wanted Garv and Ananya to take their relationship further.

Riys after that you will write more na?...on AnArv?..please don't stop writing..if you want I will make a banner for your FF too..😳

Originally posted by: OtakuGirl-Debo

Riys after that you will write more na?...on AnArv?..please don't stop writing..if you want I will make a banner for your FF too..😳

Thanks for offering, that would be nice. Im busy with work in the upcoming weeks but late July I will be free so I warn you in advance that I wont be able to prolong the story till then.

riyaaa ☺️

Baaammm...this part... a little unexpected for me...but totally loved it as you wrote every single scene with so much perfection... n specially first part was like a prologue for the 2nd part... as Garv was so distributed n little bit jealous of shakti...though he didn't expect that Ananya herself wanted him to be close with her.. that too with that milk n pills...drama...

N as i said before i didn't expect that 2nd part so soon.as ananya said but i liked her self contradictory parts... just she didn't expect herself to surrender completely to him... but she just messed up in her own game... n Garv's hotness n aggressive temptation r exactly on point... but though it's all started with lust but somehow outcome was much more than it...coz that smile was enough to show their pure pleasure n satisfaction which they didn't find in anyone else... so story is on a perfect track now...
Ria...claps for you... for such a brilliant piece of write up...words... expressions...even scenes... fully awesome... waiting for next part... write soon pls...

Originally posted by: debs4u

Baaammm...this part... a little unexpected for me...but totally loved it as you wrote every single scene with so much perfection... n specially first part was like a prologue for the 2nd part... as Garv was so distributed n little bit jealous of shakti...though he didn't expect that Ananya herself wanted him to be close with her.. that too with that milk n pills...drama...

N as i said before i didn't expect that 2nd part so soon.as ananya said but i liked her self contradictory parts... just she didn't expect herself to surrender completely to him... but she just messed up in her own game... n Garv's hotness n aggressive temptation r exactly on point... but though it's all started with lust but somehow outcome was much more than it...coz that smile was enough to show their pure pleasure n satisfaction which they didn't find in anyone else... so story is on a perfect track now...
Ria...claps for you... for such a brilliant piece of write up...words... expressions...even scenes... fully awesome... waiting for next part... write soon pls...

Thankyou for your kind comments deb! Yeh Ananya is in a complete mess, playing a dangerous game, she was secretly drawn to him and which showed in this scene and Garv loves it.. I wouldnt have rushed it if the serial itself was extended, as it is I just wont find the inspiration to continue without it.
@bold Im glad you saw that, I didnt want to explicitly show it but implied it hopefully through some moments

Originally posted by: ..DRoadSoFar..

riyaaa ☺️

see what u have done to us... ☺️

m dead now

keep wrriting more

Thankyou! Stay tuned, got one final one on the way.

Yeah i understand Ria...coz of the show ended its in a bit hurry... n yes that smile was important... n m sure everyone was through to it...n i always loved reading your tiny moments... so for me it's just perfect...
n hopefully next part 'll on fire if you are gonna end it...waiting for their realizations over the hatred n acceptance...

N pls after this do write more on AnArv...anything you want... would love to read you more...

Originally posted by: debs4u

Yeah i understand Ria...coz of the show ended its in a bit hurry... n yes that smile was important... n m sure everyone was through to it...n i always loved reading your tiny moments... so for me it's just perfect...
n hopefully next part 'll on fire if you are gonna end it...waiting for their realizations over the hatred n acceptance...

N pls after this do write more on AnArv...anything you want... would love to read you more...

Thanks again and tune in on friday when Ill be posting my finale!

wow what did I just read?! its so good
1st part too in the brothel was apt with garv and Shakti at loggerheads even while they both trying to ruin Adharsh marriage
Onto 2nd part! Garv was so hot! I'm blushing thinking about it! I was surprised by sudden change of ananya to fall for him but then who wouldn't for Garv!
😳