LaakhAm OS - Good bye (Updated Part II on Page #4) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Blue-Pearl

Pallo...👏. You have written it beautifully and this is first time i read Poonam's pain.

Like always you know how to use your words...awesome work...

Mujhe judaai pasand nahi..laakhan ko jaldi wapas le aa...

Aur please ise jaldi khatam kar...

Keep writing 🤗

Originally posted by: .LovelyDreamer.

Pallo.. Jaanu...🤗

Its too good re...

Totally love it.. each and every words ..

u make me imagine things..

Bad Pallo 😡

and this . " Poonam could see a drop of blood on his finger, without thinking about anything she brought his finger to her lips and sucked the blood out of it. " 🤪 U make me remember Vampire scene of last few episodes... 🤣

Eagerly waiting for ur next update..

Make it fast dear.. hahaha

Originally posted by: menoila

Acha OS likha hai bae, next part do ftafat, bhaiting

Bhool mat jana, jsa aksar yha log krte hai 😆

Originally posted by: richurachna

lovely pls update 2nd part soon. and request you to PM also

Originally posted by: girlTalks

Ayyo,hum se bhi koi inspire ho gaya 😲
What will happen ti litrature 😆
Sense of acheivement here 😆
Very nice pallo and best pary it was sensible ,those kamine cvs seriously need ti visit this forum
Likhte rahiye,humko bahut acha laga
aur this is for going ahead and penning your thoughts down 🤗