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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lakhan thakur was a man full of hopes. He spent ten long years in a hope that one day his love will win her over. And that hope is still there deep in his heart. That hope has kept him going when ever storm hit his life. And today was no exception. Today she accused him of being a murderer. Even if the whole world said that he wouldn't even care. But she, he wanted her to trust him,he wanted her to know that he can never do such a sinful crime. Yes he was a rowdy. But he can never kill a person. And that too dolt. No never. He wanted to scream. Break each and everything that came to his sight. But he didn't. That would show his vulnerability. And lakhan thakur does not like anyone seeing that part of him except his thakurain. HIS. Yes she was his thakurain even if she refuses, he was determined to keep her as his forever and beyond. He tightly clenched his fists and vowed to himself that he will make everything right again even if that takes going to the earths end and coming back. Many ideas flowed to his mind but only one was looking appealing. His heart protested against it. It told him that this will not work, that it cannot survive if he execute this plan. But he knew the plan that his brilliant brain has hatched will work. He can't listen to his heart at the moment. But he was sure that it will be his heart that will win at end. With that thought lakhan thakur opened his eyes and quietly got out of his room. He was going away, he need to go away from poonam. Because he knew as long as he was in her sight it will remind her about her brothers death. He hoped that his absence will make her think about the incident again and see the truth that he did not kill her brother. With out giving it a second thought he sliped out of the house and got into his jeep and drove away into the darkness in the hope that his sun will find him. Bring him back to their world where they both will trust each other as much as they love each other.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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šŸ‘ It is nice...you depicted laakhan's emotions beautifully.
Keep writing...will wait to see more from you and of you too😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww...
the scene that we have been waited so long..

lovely writtng dear...
love it so much...
keep writing more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!its awesome..really awesome i loved it.. plz write more šŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hope ...a strong word which makes us going even our life hits the darkest of the shadow ...

dear a great start do write more ...I loved it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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šŸ‘šŸ¼ great update...omg wat happend nxt...waiting for nxt update..

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