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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Isha_201


Prith😳👍🏼

Great job,such a wonderful plot.... ❤️

I liked that Bondita stood beside Anirudh supporting him always. Anirudh's biggest strength will be none other than his wife only.

In serial also,they should show this things.

Ani-Boni sounds cute... Not like Ani-Mini... 😆


The colour matching was on the top...

Blue blue... Both Ani Boni😎

Isha 🤗 Thank you dear .

Boni will be biggest strength of Ani forever. Ani-Mini sounds so awkward together 😆

@bold: Glad you liked it.❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Isha_201


I thought I will read all the chapters and then will comment but I couldn't stop myself from typing... 😆

It is so so so.... Much good.. bondita's confession was damn🤗

Ani's Mishti confessed her love to him. Yay!!

Chapter 2 was also very good... Sampoorna and Mini explaining Boni to express their love... ❤️

Mini told her the right thing to confess her love.

Thank you Isha 🤗Glad you liked it. Ani's Mishti is too mishti(sweet).❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey guys 🤗 I'm back with chapter eight. Sorry agar zyada intezaar karna pada aplogo ko. Here it is

Chapter-8

“Tum sab log yaha?” said Anirudh in shock.

“Ha Anirudh Babu wo aj na ham sab yahi rukenge. Hame aadesh Mila hai.” Said Saurabh and chuckled.

“Kya?(Ani said almost shouting) Mera matlab tum sab yaha rukoge aise achanak kyu kya baat hai?” Anirudh tried to suppress his emotions with a fake smile.

“Ha Anirudh ham sabko na aj yahi rukna hoga. Kahi tumhe koi pareshani to nahi hogi hamare yaha rukne se” said Mini and smiled mischievously looking towards Rudhita and nudged Sampoorna and she smirked.

“Tum sab log yaha aa gaye wo v aise samay par isse badi paresani aur Kya hogi” Anirudh murmured.

“Ji dada kuch kaha Kya apne?” asked Som with a smirk.

“Ha Som kuch kaha to nhi par ha kuch kehna hai tumse zara idhar to aao.” said Anirudh.

“Are Anirudh Babu jo v baate karni ho Kal kar lijiye. Dekhiye raat v bahut ho gyi hai. Baki baate subah hongi.” Said Anirudh emphasizing the word raat.

“Ha bilkul Anirudh ye sab chodo raat bahut ho gyi hai. Baate to hoti rahengi. Abhi baato me samay kyu gavana!! Kyu hai na Bondita!!” said Mini and winked at Bondita and Bondita blushed at this. Anirudh couldn’t see this.

Anirudh became so happy thinking that finally he can romance with wife. He wanted no one should be there in the house tonight as this is their special night but at least these Kabab me haddis giving him privacy.

“Sahi keh rahi ho Mini. Raat bahut ho gyi hai. Mujhe to bahut nind v aa rahi. Ab ham sabko sone chalna chahiye. Subhratri.” Said Ani happily.

All were looking at him and smirking. Anirudh was so happy that he couldn’t interpret what they are upto and why they are here after all planning. But Bondita understood something is fishy.

And before Bondita could say anything Sampoo said, “Ha chal Bondita tu hamare saath. Anirudh Babu ko to bahut nind aa rahi kahi tujhe to nahi aa rahi kyuki tujhe ham dono ke sath jagna hai thodi der. Kal ke liye tyariya jo karni hai. Uske baad tu hamare sath wahi so jana, thik hai. Aur…”

Mini cut her off and said “Are ye kya Sampoorna, Bondita se pooch Kya rahi ho wo Mana thode hi karegi. Aur ankhe nhi dekh rahi iski aisa lag raha aj Puri raat jagne ka iraada tha (teasingly).”

Bondita blushed and now Anirudh was hell irritated these guys were spoiling not only his mood but also his special night.

“Are kya hai ye sab? Tumlog Bondita ko kyu le ja rahe ho? Aur hai Kya Kal Jo tyariya karni hai aur tyariya karni v hai to tum aur Sampoorna v to kar sakte ho na Mini ( Bondita signalled Ani to stay calm) Mera matlab Bondita bahut thak gyi hai. Subah se kaam kiye ja rahi aur bazaar v Jake ayi hai thak gyi hogi na.” said Anirudh.

“Are Anirudh bazaar mai v gayi thi Bondita ke sath. Waise v chinta mat karo hamlog Bondita se kaam nhi karwayenge. Sara kaam mai aur Sampoorna kar lenge. Bondita bad hame hukum degi fir to thik hai.” said Mini.

“Are nahi didi ye aap Kya kar rahi. Aplog kaam kare aur mai baithi rahoo aisa to nahi hoga. Mai....” Bondita trailed off as she saw Anirudh glaring at her.

“Acha tumlog jab khud hi sab kar sakte ho to Bondita ko le jaane ki Kya jarurat hai Mini” said Ani trying to keep himself calm and cool.

“Are jarurat kaise nahi Bondita Bahu hai iss Ghar ki. Uske bina tyariya kaise hogi. Ghar ki Bahu ko hi na Ghar ke riti riwaazo ke bare me pata hota hai. Are Sampoorna samjho na ise.”said Mini and turned towards Sampoorna who was standing opposite to Ani and smiled wide enjoying the teasing. Saurabh and Som were standing beside Sampoorna and the trio chuckled.

“Mini tum v to jaanti ho na Ghar ke reeti riwazo ke bare me tumne itne saalo tak wo sab Kiya hai.” Said Ani losing his patience.

“Ha Anirudh mai to jaanti hoo par mujhe thodi pata kaun si chiz kaha rakhi hogi. Aur kitne saal ho gye Anirudh mujhe ye sab kiye huye. Waise v mujhe jyada yaad v nhi mujhe apne sasuraal ke reeti riwaz hi jyada yaad hai ab.” Said Mini with a fake sad expression on her face.

“Ha aur mujhe to kuch v nahi pata apke yaha sab kaise hota hai tyariya kaisi hoti hai.” blurted Sampoorna before Ani could say anything as Ani was coming to her with the same question.

“Ha dada Jane dijiye in sabko bahut sari tyariya karni hai. Saurabh dada aap v chalo. Hame v to kitni tyariya karni hai. Batuk v ata hi hoga.” Said Som.

“Are kya laga rakha hai kal ki tyari Kal ki tyari. Hai Kya Kal aur aisa v Kya hai jo aaj raat ko hi tyariya karni padegi. Kal kyu nhi kar sakte.” Said Ani almost shouting.

All laughed out loud. They couldn’t control anymore. Sampoorna and Mini started giggling. Anirudh and Bondita were standing shocked. They looked at each other and then at Som, Mini and Samarabh who were laughing hard.

Som saw his Dada and Boudi's state and started to say “Dada…. Boudi ….Wo Kal…..” “Kal hamare pariwaar ke liye bahut bada aur khaas din hai” a manly voice cut him off .

Anirudh and Bondita turned towards the direction of the voice. He saw Kaka, Binoy and Sumati were standing there with a wide smile on their face.


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Guess Kya honewala hai Kal RC Mansion me? Kis baat ki tyariya chal rahi? Itni planing ke baad sab wapas kyu aa gaye Kabab me haddi banne 😆

Waise acha nhi lage to v don't throw tomatoes please 😆

Edited by Prit_007 - 4 years ago


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Posted: 5 years ago

Lovely story 👏.simple,cute,non-complicated,non-dramatic and short yet beautiful.keep it up.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Derrick55

Lovely story 👏.simple,cute,non-complicated,non-dramatic and short yet beautiful.keep it up.

Thank you dear 🤗❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Such a cute one.. Poor Ani.... Please don't test his patience 😂😂

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Posted: 5 years ago

I think tomorrow is Bondita and Anirudh’s wedding anniversary. am I right?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Such a cute one.. Poor Ani.... Please don't test his patience 😂😂

Abhi to thoda aur satana hai patibabu ko 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I think tomorrow is Bondita and Anirudh’s wedding anniversary. am I right?

Actually Shrishti it would be a good idea but maine kuch aur hi soch rakha hai.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Prith well written 😳

Bechara ani ko sab taang karraha hai 😆 kabab mein haddi banke 🤣

Ani special night gayi phikki 🤣

Btw family is planning to get them remarried kya😳

Beautifully written ⭐️

Now can't wait for next update...prith write soon

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