Pyaar Ka Izhar: A Rudhita SS (chap-17 updated on page 48) - Page 12

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Prith well written 😳

Bechara ani ko sab taang karraha hai 😆 kabab mein haddi banke 🤣

Ani special night gayi phikki 🤣

Btw family is planning to get them remarried kya😳

Beautifully written ⭐️

Now can't wait for next update...prith write soon

Thank you Lalz 🤗

Ani ki special night par sabne pani pher diya 😆

@bold: That will be revealed in next update 😆 Btw mujhe ideas bahut mil rahe 🤣

I'll try to update soon.❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Thank you Lalz 🤗

Ani ki special night par sabne pani pher diya 😆

@bold: That will be revealed in next update 😆 Btw mujhe ideas bahut mil rahe 🤣

I'll try to update soon.❤️

Better you update soon

Mujhe suspense pasand nahi 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Better you update soon

Mujhe suspense pasand nahi 😆

Mujhe bahut pasand hai 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Prit yaar this is such a saccharine sweet story. Hayeee. I enjoyed reading the entire story so much. *swoons dramatically* Pyaar Ka Izhar turned my cheeks rosé shaded. 😆☺️

The only thing that gave me 440 volt ka jhatka is your Soudamini. I choked on air at her characterisation. Maybe the kind of love she needed, changed Mini for better. Kaash show mein bhi uski shaadi ho jaye.

Your Ani is so pyaara and romantic. Aniruddh babu kya aap mere liye bhi thoda sa khaana paka sakte hai, woh kya hai na mujhe bhook lag gayi hai. Shotti. 😛🤣(Really I got hungry.😳Khaana do mujhe Prit. 🤣)

Also my Rudhita babies dancing.

Aii haatho, dur hou, shoo shoo humare Rudhita ke romance mein kebab mein haddi ban na bandh karo tum sab? Sharam nahi aati to ruin the sacred hubby wifey quality time. 😡

Ani yaar roko apni patni ko. Nahi toh gaya tumhara special night bhar mein.🥺

Also please update soon I'm dying to read the rest of the story. Itna pyaara tha yeh.

Edited by Briti1107 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Briti1107

Prit yaar this is such a saccharine sweet story. Hayeee. I enjoyed reading the entire story so much. *swoons dramatically* Pyaar Ka Izhar turned my cheeks rosé shaded. 😆☺️

The only thing that gave me 440 volt ka jhatka is your Soudamini. I choked on air at her characterisation. Maybe the kind of love she needed, changed Mini for better. Kaash show mein bhi uski shaadi ho jaye.

Your Ani is so pyaara and romantic. Aniruddh babu kya aap mere liye bhi thoda sa khaana paka sakte hai, woh kya hai na mujhe bhook lag gayi hai. Shotti. 😛🤣(Really I got hungry.😳Khaana do mujhe Prit. 🤣)

Also my Rudhita babies dancing.

Aii haatho, dur hou, shoo shoo humare Rudhita ke romance mein kebab mein haddi ban na bandh karo tum sab? Sharam nahi aati to ruin the sacred hubby wifey quality time. 😡

Ani yaar roko apni patni ko. Nahi toh gaya tumhara special night bhar mein.🥺

Also please update soon I'm dying to read the rest of the story. Itna pyaara tha yeh.

*Hugs*

Aww Thank you so much Britu 🤗 for your chashni me doobe pyaare pyaare comments ❤️

I love romantic Ani Babu ❤️Apne ap ko Bondu ke jagah imagine kar bin khana khaye hi pet bhar jayega, Shotti 🤣

Saudamini is negative everywhere even in my previous OS she is too creepy 🤬so thought show me mile na mile yaha ise thoda change kar dete hai 😆

Abhi to Ani Babu ko thoda aur satana hai 😉

Will update soon ❤️

Btw here is link for my OS, share your reviews

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153425382

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153487801

Edited by Prit_007 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Review for Chapter 1 and 2

Wonderfully written. 👍🏼

Loved the Saudamini of your SS. Now, I feel kaash show mai bhi positive hi rakhte mini ko. It would have been fun to watch.😃

Bondita is avoiding her sisters' questions, but they not leaving her😆.

Anirudh and premgranth😲😆.

Not possible now, but may happen in the future in the show. If Anirudh can become doctor to cure her problem. then definitely he can read premgranth also to impress his wifey.

😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Mujhe bahut pasand hai 😆

Waiting

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovelypathak

Review for Chapter 1 and 2

Wonderfully written. 👍🏼

Loved the Saudamini of your SS. Now, I feel kaash show mai bhi positive hi rakhte mini ko. It would have been fun to watch.😃

Bondita is avoiding her sisters' questions, but they not leaving her😆.

Anirudh and premgranth😲😆.

Not possible now, but may happen in the future in the show. If Anirudh can become doctor to cure her problem. then definitely he can read premgranth also to impress his wifey.

😳

Thank you so much Shilpi you read and commented 🤗

Ani will definitely read premgranth when Bondu will become adult 😉😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Where were you. I was waiting for you in EDT. I have written a Rudhita OS of almost 4000 words. I tried to write something romantic on grown up Bon but it turned to kachra I guess. I was about to post Briti, Mahi and Shilpi encouraged me and I was about to post but fir complete karne lagi to post karne ki himmat hi nhi ho rahi yaar

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Where were you. I was waiting for you in EDT. I have written a Rudhita OS of almost 4000 words. I tried to write something romantic on grown up Bon but it turned to kachra I guess. I was about to post Briti, Mahi and Shilpi encouraged me and I was about to post but fir complete karne lagi to post karne ki himmat hi nhi ho rahi yaar

I was busy helping mom for janma ashtami 😆

What..?

Abhi isi waqt post karo..!

Mein raat sothe waqt padungi..!! 😆

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