’Somewhere’ - My Stream of Thoughts; UPD - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
The long update is just great.....can we hav one more like this 😊
Plzzzzzzzzzzz 😃
Edited by lexie - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
Mandy Mandy Mandy we won we won we won!!! 😃 😃 First match only, but it's definitely something.. though did you see Italy vs. Netherlands though, they were clobbered yaar 😳 World cup champions, that too!!

Oky, cholly for all that football talk 😳 😆

Wow Ariba, you are too sweet! 🤗 Thank you so much for giving me such detailed comments.. thank youuuu!

About making siggies, i need to find some good pics and get inspired.. will do so soon, i hope 😳

Thanks again everyone, I'll try and post the next part of the scene soon! 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

Oky, so I just properly read this previous part now, and it was quite bad 😳 whewwwwww! Kind of vague as well.. hopefully i can write this better, when im in better senses😛

Divya, slightly taken aback by his straightforwardness, decided not to say too much in response. She smiled in return, and watched him as he walked away, parting himself away from her, heading towards another direction...

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Next Day

Divya didn't know what to think. With Sagar gone, she finally had some time to herself... but did she want to be by herself? Why was it that she felt comfortable, even slightly comfortable, by his presence? Though most of the time, there were always awkward silences between them... but for some reason, she didn't mind. On the contrary, it suited her... because after yesterday, she never felt like talking much. In fact, after yesterday, she never felt like doing anything much at all...

Though that could change.

"Divya....."

"Agh!" Divya jumped; she didn't realise she wasn't alone.

Sagar stood in front of her, amidst all her other surrounding friends.

"How can it be..." she muttered.

"Kya?"

Divya closed her mouth. She meant to say aloud how could it be that Sagar appeared at the same time as her friends, and that too, in the park.. but it was a complex question and she didn't quite know how to word it properly, so she stopped herself.

"Kuch nahin... hi."

His quizzical look remained, yet a smile creeped along his face.

"Well, baatein ka waqt nahin hai, ab jaane ka waqt ho gaya hain. Come with me."

"Since when are we going somewhere?" Divya couldn't help but ask; she wanted to know his response.

"Since now. Ab chalo mere saath."

She took his hand again, without hesitation this time, and allowed him to lead her on, wherever they were going... it was deja vu, just like before, she was leaving her friends, and heading off to somewhere else, somewhere she didn't even know, yet she allowed it to happen...

"You know, you really are pretty."

Divya's eyes widened.

"Tumhe kuch bolna nahin.. bas itna hi kehna chahta tha."

He smiled again, still not completely readable.

"Sagar... why?" She paused for a second, wanting to re-collect all her thoughts before she started talking again.

"Mera matlab ki... we've just met each other now, and you suddenly want to meet me? We haven't even had a proper conversation yet, either... I still can't fathom why I'm going wherever I'm going with you, but if you can just tell me what we're doing, then I'll be a lot more comfortable... Kuch theek nahin lag rahi hoon main." She finally let it all out, condensed it may be, but whatever she had to say was done now.

"Divya... tum nahin samjho ge. Bas thodi der ke liye intezaar karna; jahaan pe main tumhe lekar jaa raha hoon, wahin pe jawaab milegi. So just wait, please..." Sagar stopped, short of his words, and kept walking, pulling Divya gently beside him.

She sighed, hoping their destination would be clear.

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Oky, so it looks really long, but that's because I separate my dialogues quite a bit... this part I can imagine, and that's why I'm penning it down.. where it goes, you and me both will have to find out!😳 I promise though, this is going somewhere, however slow it may be...!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
First! 😆 😆

Ammu Ammu Ammu! Yeshhh we won! 😛 😛 ...I felt a little sorry for L. Podolski...because he had to be against his homeland. But ok! Can't wait for thursday now!
Aur ha...I saw Italy vs. Netherlands yesterday. Couldn't actually believe what I saw there. I thought Italy would have been much stronger. But okies...

Oops sorry...back to your FF. 😳 😆

Awesome update! I so want to know what's happening next...so you better continue soon. Muahaha! 😛

Anddd...I love the way you write. You're sooo talented. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Ahhhh loved it!!! 😳 😳 😳

I'm glad she did ask him! 😉 😆

You need to continue super soon! 😆

I'm totally in love with this FF (I'm calling it that, so you know it's gotta go nice and long) 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
it was a really sweet update 😳 although I am as confused as Divya 😆 but no probs... I'll let you explain later as the story progresses 😛

You know what? I agree with Meera...I'm also going to start calling it an FF 😉 😆

A lot of people may not like reading detailed writings and the such but I really enjoy it! Which is why I'm reading this FF 😛 I can sense a sweet story 😳 hope you continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
I love this Ammu! Sagar is so mysterious and I am loving how they just randomly disappear from the crowd. It's so unlike SV or AD who publicly display their love. Glad they have privacy even though they aren't "in love" yet...it will work for the future 😉

Great part! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58

Awww, yah i know Mandy, Podolski was playing against his home town but .... we WON! 😃

And omg, Spain and Russia, 4-1... wowwww!

Again, thank you all so much for everything 🤗🤗 You all are so appreciative, makes me feel so ishpecial! 😳

Sravi, uff, I wish AD could have some privacy, ufff!!😛

Awwww yah Ariba, i know, im cholly, it is confusing.. i'm trying to tie all the loose ends, hopefully I can do it well 😳

Haha Meera, chaluuuuu!! 😛 Let's just say I'll keep on writing until my imagination with this scene runs out.. or atleast, as long as I can. That's fair 😛

Thank you all soooo much again! 🤗

Edited by ammmu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: ammmu


Haha Meera, chaluuuuu!! 😛 Let's just say I'll keep on writing until my imagination with this scene runs out.. or atleast, as long as I can. That's fair 😛

😳😆 Tee hee!😆 And that still makes me happy!😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
^ Aaannyyyttthhiiinnngggg for youuuuuuuuu 😛 😳

Will post the next part in a bit.. i think ive got it pretty nicely imagined in my mind right now! 😳

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