’Somewhere’ - My Stream of Thoughts; UPD - Page 16

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey when will you be continuing?☺️ it has been a long time😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nishiiiiiiii, so glad to see you here!! 🤗 And thank youuuu, Mandy, and Sravi! 😳 Yap, sig problems fixed now, thank God. :P
Gahh, I completely forgot about this, let me see when I can update.. maybe by this weekend. School's starting soon, have homework to finish *sigh* I'll try updating later!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sorry to all 😳 I'll try and update in a bit... will get back into the writing mode!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Pleeaaase....update!😊 It has been a long long long time!!!!😛
Cant wait to read wat happens next!!!!😳
-Divya
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Posted: 16 years ago
Umm... wow! 😳 I've actually got a few PMs from some of you, asking me to update this. First of all, I'm really flattered... I didnt expect to receive PMs regarding this, so thank you 😳 As for updating, it won't be happening anytime soon, I'm afraid... too many other things going on right now. Though I just re-read the last part myself and it really bothered me that I just ended it that way... so I dunno what I'll do, maybe I'll update one more in a bit and then none until I'm more free again... we'll see! But just wanted to post here and thank you all for the continued support! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ah, okkie Ammu... Me understand... update when you have time.
Edited by charri7878 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
now it's time for u to be Dulhann of the week sis😉
that's what we say intense wrter👏👏⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
"Toh phir kya baat hai, Divya?"
Divya continued to look him, guilt overriding her mind. Why was she leaving? She knew she couldn't run away from him, run away from her feelings... she had to stop herself.
He shook his head slightly, his eyes full of bitterness, and a sense of pleading. "Don't go."
------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Sagar...?"
"Hmmm?"
"Kya kar rahe ho?"
"I'm holding your hand... why, am I not allowed to?" He laughed, dismissing her question as a joke.
But Sagar wasn't just holding Divya's hand. Ever since Divya decided not to leave and to sit on the bench next to him, her hand wasn't left alone... it remained in his, the grip tighter than usual, as if he wasn't going to let her go. Neither of them talked, but there was enough tension in the atmosphere for Divya to be able to say anything.
"Aren't you..."
"No."
Sagar began to slowly push his hand away very slightly from Divya's, but by no means was he letting her go; he instead started to brush his fingers against her own.
Divya gasped; an electric current jolted through her, and her shoulders stiffened.
Sagar continued the same motion, but now placed his fingers in between hers...

"Sagar --"
He interlocked them slowly, causing Divya's body to turn completely rigid, lost in what he was doing.
"What --"
Their fingers were fully entwined now, his hands soft but the grip tight, and unbreakable.
Sagar turned to her finally, his gaze piercing Divya's eyes. Her body still remained immobile, eyes widening, unable to understand what was happening to her.
"Divya", he whispered, and that was all he needed to say, for Divya's body became numb as she exhaled finally and allowed herself to fall into Sagar's arms.
I actually just penned this down a few days ago and was contemplating on whether or not I should post it. I won't be updating anymore for a long time, so I thought I'll leave this as it is for the timebeing... I'm not quite sure exactly if what I wrote even made any sense, but there you go :) Thanks again for all the lovely comments!
Edited by ammmu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was really cute..but too short😔 anyways loved how you described it
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Posted: 16 years ago
Fixed the post now, oops! One part I wrote didn't show up here, for some reason... so added that in.
Thank youuuuuu Mushtari ji very much! :) Was it really that short?? For me, it seemed long... maybe because it took me forever just to write it, I made quite a few corrections along the way, haha :P

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