Bin TEre Sanam part 26pg 16

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Posted: 17 years ago
#1

sry part 8 is on pg 1 and i also got my pg numbers mixed up

part 1

part 2 pg 1

part 3 pg 1

part 4 pg 2

part 5 pg 2

part 6 pg 3

part 7 pg 4

part 8 pg 4

part 9 pg1

part 10 pg 5

part 11 pg 6

part 12 pg 6


part 13 pg 6

part 14 pg 7

part 15 pg 8

part 16 pg 8

part 17 pg 9

pr 18 pg 10

pr 19 pg 11

part 20pg 12

pt 21 pg 12

pt 22 pg 13

part 23 pg 14

part 24 pg 15

part 25 pg 15

part 26 pg 16

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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
part 2
precap vidya accidentally hugs sagar

Vidya realizes what she has done and Sagar is enjoying the moment while it lasts. she quickly lets go of him.

Vidya- um i really sorry. the reason why im so happy is because my father gave this to me before he died and he told me to take care of it. so this really means a lot to me.
Sagar- its ok i understand
Vidya walks out of the kitchen and into their eating area.
vmom- beta tum waapis agayi sagar kaha hain
vidya- woh bas abhi arayhai
Vmom-ok
vmom-{to sagars mom] vaisa aap laug delhi waapas kab jarayhai
sagar arrives that moment
smom- aabhi toh humhain nahin pata shahid ek haftay main
shalu- yeh tho achi bat hain kyonki kal mela [fair] horaha hain aur aap logo ko pata hain har sal vidya he nach thi hain humare mela main, pura benaras vidya ku janta hain
vdad- acha beta yeh toh bohot achi bat hain hum kal zaroor ayingay aur tum logo ku pata hain ki sagar ko gana aur nachna bhi atha hain
vidya- relly toh phir tumhaare liya kal meri taraf say ek surprise hain
sagar- relly ill be waiting
well this is going to be the next day
every1 has gathered around to see vidyas performance sagar brought a gift for vidya.
vidya comes on stage and shes wearing a really nice lehnga just like the one when madhuri wore from aaja nachle. sagar is just staring at her.
vidya- this yr i decided to do something new some one else is going to dance with me
the crowd yells "kaun"
vidya- actually aap log unko achai say nahin jantay unka naam hain sagar pratap singh!!
the crowd cheers
sagar just cant belive what has just happend he runs up on stage
sagar- vidya yeh kya pagalpan hai
vidya- yeh pagalpan nahin hain ur going to dance with me
sagar- magar maine toh practice bhi nahin kiya
vidya- dont worry humare pas ek ganta hain
sagar- sirk ek ganta
vidya- ha dont wry ull do fine i have faith in u
sagar cheers up
after an hr they both come on stage
theyre performing to nagada nagada
they dance their hearts out
everyone loved the performance
in the end of the song they both have an eye lock for like 5 minutes.
chinu- dada aap nay toh bohot acha nacha hain. good job
they both snap out of it
sagar- thxs chinu
just then somebody covers vidya eyes from behind and picks her up its none other than tushar
tushar- hi vidya omg maine tumhe bohot miss kiya
vidya- omg main bhi kaha thay tum itne din thak
sagar is just watching them his heart is broken he thinks that tushar is vidya bf
vidya introduces sagar to tushar they both shake hands.
sagar- aap laug ek dusray ko pasand kar thay hai kya u no like love
vidya- omg are you kidding me i cant belive you just asked that question
sagar feels embarasssed and not wanted
vidya- no yaar hum dono sirf dost hain kyon aap ko laga ki hum dono u no
tushar- vidya any1 would say taht were husband and wife u no we were always meant to be.
vidya- shut up tushar
sagar asks vidya if only them two can go and walk together in the mela [fair] u no cuz hes new
vidya- of course itll be fun main bas abhi change kar thi hun
tushar comes up to sagar
tushar- isnt she beautiful
sagar- excuse me do u like her
tushar doesnt reply he just leaves
vidya comes back in a black churridar in golden piping. with nice heels
vidya- chalay
sagar- of course
vidya- they both go on a ride and vidya gets scared and
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3
good job on ur update...Plz conitnue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4
i LOVE UR ff!!!!!!!! plZ continue sOOn
o ya btw im tahmina do read my ff[tera mera pyaar] if u can<3333
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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
thxs guys the pressure is on haha

Part 3

vidya holds sagars arms for the whole ride and her head is leaning on his shoulders. he thinks its the happiest day of his life. and he wishes itll never end a sec later the ride stops and vidya is really dizzy sagar- kya main apki madat karu r u ok
vidya- chakkar aray
without thinking sagar lifts her up and vidya is really shoked by this by this time its like in the evening so the streets are deserted and sagar put vidya down and their making their way to her house suddenly a bunch of goons come and start saying bad things to vidya. she starts crying
sagar- shut up ladki say asay bat karthay hain
he goes toward them and vidya stops him
vidya- forget about them
then a goon comes and grabs her arms and starts molesting her seeing this sagar tries to beat him up but the other guys are holding
vidya- SAGAR!!!!!!!!!!!!
sagar somehow gets free and beats the other 2 up he goes toward the other guy and by that time the other guy ran away
sagar- vidya are u ok
vidya- she cries and hugs sagar for about 10 minutes
sagar- its ok vidya main hoon na {tum se Hi} is playing in the background
sagar sees vidya shirt ripped at the top near her collerbone area he puts his jacket on her
for the next of the walk to her house vidya is holding sagars hand
vidya- sagar thank you soo much i dont no how ill repay u
sagar- its ok yaar are u sure ur okay
vidya- yeah can u pls not tell any1 about this
sagar- dont wry were friends rite
vidya- of course
sagar- so do u like any1
vidya- no i dont like any1 yet but im starting to
sagar gets shoked hearing this
sagar- kaun hai wo
vidya- i cant tell u
sagar gets sad
vidya- so wat about u
sagar- wat about me
vidya- do u like any1
sagar- i like u
vidya- not like that u no love
sagar- yes i do but i dont no if she likes me
vidya- tell me who she is
sagar- y u didnt tell me
vidya- yeah b/c im a girl
sagar- so
vidya- so what
sagar- kuch bhi nahin
sagar- tell me about urself
vidya- like what
sagar- like anything
vidya- well i have lived in benaras my whole life but i relly want to go to delhi for college they dont have good education here
sagar gets relly happy
sagar- omg u should come i live in delhi
vidya- i no
saagar- so y dont u
vidya- my mom doesnt want me to
sagar- y
vidya- she wants me to get married
sagar- so u dont want to 😊
vidya- of course i dont are u kidding me i want to marry the man of my dreams
sagar- oh relly and how is ur man of ur dreams like how do u want him to be
vidya- i want him to be nice,caring listening to me all the time
sagar laughs
vidya- u no wat the punditji told me that the man who im going to spend my whole life with will express his love soon
sagar- oh relly
so this is it im going to write something tonite sry im getting hungry
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6
no problem, that update was overall, very sweet! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#7
part 4 need some more feedback if u guys have any ideas i will post them


sagar gets happy vidya notices
vidya- hello are u okay
sagar- um yeah im okay um vidya can i ask u a ?
vidya- yeah what
sagar- u no how every girl would want to be proposed some how. i no cuz i have sisters
vidya- y are u asking me this?
sagar- just wondering
vidya- well i would love for my dream guy to propose me by...
sagar- go on
vidya- taking me out on a long drive and having this candlelight dinner with no one but us and have fireworks that say "will you marry me" thats my idea of a perfect propose.
sagar- wow thats cute and simple
vidya- yep thats how i like things
sagar and vidya arrive home
vidya- i think u should come inside
sagar doesnt want to its getting late but vidyas mom comes
v mom- sagar beta tum yaha par ruk kyon nahi jathay
sagar- kya no its okay main manage kar lunga
vidya- oh come on sagar dont be so formal
sagar- teek hai laykin main ghar phone karna chatahoon
v mom- don't worry main hoon na
sagar is getting ready for bed but remembers he brought a gift for vidya that he totally forgot about he takes it out of his pocket and heads for vidyas room he knocks
sagar- um vidya
no one answers
he opens the door
sagar- vidya where are u
suddenly vidya comes out of the bathroom with only a towel wraped around her
vidya OMG
sagar- omg i am really sorry
vidya - sagar go
sagar leaves feeling really bad he comes 5 minutes later and makes sure he gets vidyas permission to come in
sagar- im really sry
vidya- no im sry i yelled at u
sagar- no im sry
vidya- no i am
sagar- were both sry lets just forget it
vidya- okay by the way how come u were in my room
sagar- actually i brought a gift for u
vidya- oh really let me see
sagar- opens up a little box with a really nice necklace but simple vidya loves it
vidya- omg this is soo preety
sagar- yeah it is isnt it
vidya- well put it on
vidya sits on a chair infront of a mirror sagar puts it on. lots of intensity in his eyes
sagar- it suits u a lot right
vidya- of course it does u brought it for me
sagar- thats true
they both laugh
this is going to be the next morning
vidya is singing the bhajan om jai jagdish
everybody arrives at the temple in their home including sagar by the way vidyas hair is still wet
👏
after she sings she gives aarti to everyone sagar is last its only them two left
sagar- ur looking pretty and happy today
sagar takes the prasad
sagar- anything special
vidya just laughs and whips her wet hair at him and sagar gets wet she runs for it sagar just loved that moment rite there
10 minutes later they are all sitting at the dining table
shalu sits right next to sagar
shalu- vaisay aap ku pata hain ki vidya itni khush kyon hai
sagar- nahin
shalu- usne aap ku nahi patayan hain
sagar- nahin bolo na
shalu- aaj vidya ka janam din hai
sagar get surprised and thinks thats y vidya was so happy
shalu- aaj shaam di kay naam matlab aaj hum unkay liya party hain but it is a surprise
sagar- ur secrets safe with me so its at ur house tonite
shalu- yes it is thats why last nite maji told u to stay overnite so u can help us because there are no men at our house
sagar- okay i see
shalu- im going to take her at the mall today
sagar- do u mind if i can take her
shalu- of course not if u want to then its okay
sagar- thxs
half and hr later they both arrive at the mall sagar takes vidya to a girls clothes shop
sagar- pick anything u want
vidya- u choose i will wear
sagar- okay bhaiyya kuch acha dikana
in the end he picks out two saris for her and asks her to pick one of them she says she wants to go try them on
2 minutes later vidya arrives and taps sagar on the shoulder
vidya- how do i look
sagar- ahhmazing
shes wearing a red sari with gold work on it she truly looked "ahhmazing" lol
vidya- what
sagar- uhh u look good
sagar- dont u want to try on the other one
vidya- okay
she comes back a couple of minutes later
sagar forgets about the other one and says that she should buy this one {it was blue with black work on it}
vidya- no this one is perfect
sagar- are u sure
vidya- yes im sure
sagar gets sad
vidya forces sagar to buy something for himself and she picks out a shirt for him and he buys it
v's mom tells her that she should get ready and that they are going to a weddding today vidya gets upset dont u want to say anything to me v's mom hasnt even said happy birthday to her as of yet v's mom says no she has nothing to say she gets upset
vidya is walking downstairs and says
vidya- who turned off the lights off
suddenly the lights open and you see the sari which sagar really wanted to buy for vidya but she didnt like it as much. sagar gets a surprise and he sees that shes wearing the same locket he gave her and gets really happy then they all start singing happy birthday u can see the happiness on her face
vidya- whats all this
v's mom- tumhe laga ki main bhool gayi
vidya- ek minute kay liya toh laga ki aap bhool gayi
she seeks blessings from her mother and then from sagars parents
s's mom- bohot achi lagri ho aag
vidya- ha kis khas insaan nay mujhe yeah sari di
they both have an eyelock chinu goes to sagar and shalu goes to vidya they both snap out of it
shalu- happy birthday vidya
vidya- thank you
chinu to sagar- what happend dada
sagar- uhh nothing
chinu- no ive been noticing that your not really focused on one thing
sagar just blurts out that hes in love rite to chinu
chinu- what whos the girl
sagar- uhh
chinu- come on dada tell me
sagar- vidya
chinu- so what did u buy for her
sagar thinks that he didnt buy vidya anything
sagar- omg chinu i totally forgot
chinu- r u kidding how could u forget u went to the mall with her
sagar- i no it just slipped out of my mind
vidya walks up to sagar so how do u like my sari
sagar- it looks relly nice on u. u look gorgeous
vidya blushes
vidya- so wheres my gift
sagar- sry i forgot
vidya- its okay than i have a gift u can give to me which is priceless
sagar- what
vidya- u have to sing a song
sagar- what are u serious
vidya- come on its my birthday
sagar- ok
vidya makes an announcement that sagars going to sing
and he sings " pheli nazar main" by atif aslam from race
they both start dancing along with all the other couples
guys this is a modified version of benaras i no they wouldnt let this happy with an unmarried couple but in my fanfic anything goes}[/B everybody starts clapping
they both start to blush
thats it i wrote way too much love u guys tata lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8
part 5
now its cake time vidya cuts the cake and everybody claps she feeds it to her mom sagars parents chinu shalu and at last sagar they both have an eyelock sagar says happy birthday to vidya and very sweetly she says thanks after and hour or so everybody decides to leave { u guys know how like an movies the main actors sit on a round table and play spin to bottle or something} well all of that is going on so chinu shalu sagar and vidya are all playing spin the bottle
sagar- chinu u first
chinu spins it and it lands on sagar
chinu- truth or dare
sagar- dare
chinu- ok u will have to go tell the girl u like right now and say i love u
sagar- no way
chinu- u have to
sagar starts to walk up to vidya
suddenly shalu blurts out that tomoroww a very respectable family is coming to see her for a rishta
sagar stops and says he will do it another time
that night sagar thought he shouldve told vidya he regrets it
scene shifts to vidyas room shes only thinking about sagar and only him and just doesnt know whats happening to her
that morning v's mom tell her that we are all going out for breakfast
vidya- i thought that my rishta was coming to see me
v's mom- oh they had to cancel
vidya gets really happy
😳
when they reach the restaurant they see sagars family " ok this isnt a restaruant more like a dhaba" they decide theat they will have breakfast together
s's dad- umm hum laug picnic kay liya jarayhai aap laug chalangay
shalu- of course we will
they all go to like a park and all the youngsters go boating when they come back their parents announce something
both parents = we want sagar and vidya to get married
they both have a shock on their face
s and v = kya
v's mom- beta this was all a plan no rishta was coming for u today and both of us ending up at the same dhaba
sagar and vidya look at each other
vidya runs away sagar goes after her
sagar- um vidya i was wondering if ur ok with all of this
she nods
sagar- great then tonight i want to take u somewhere
sagar is driving and alongside theres vidya
vidya- where are we going
sagar- just wait enjoy the moments
they both stop at the middle of knowhere
he covers her eyes and leads her up to a candlelight dinner as soon as he lets go over the fireworks are in the sky and say" will u marry me" vidya starts crying
sagar- do u not like this
vidya- no this is perfect
she goes and hugs sagar


now i will have to go bye
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omG wat a great update<33 i loved it plZ continue sOOn<33333
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omG wat a great update<33 i loved it plZ continue sOOn<33333

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