Bin TEre Sanam part 26pg 16 - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome job! both of you are really good at writing!, good luck with finals everyone! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
okay everybody i have an announce i am going to india for a month this may so i dont no if u guys want me to continue or not i wont continue a lot tho but i have narmeen helping me narmeen i need ur feedback cya
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Posted: 17 years ago
^please dnt worrie i will post the update tomoz for deffo 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

please let me noe if it is bad....so doodles11 can carry on...i will not take it to heart if u dislike it 😳

sagar went and hid behind the religious idol.surili was smirking away as she was walking towards vidya as she was right she can only find her in a mandir.on the other hand sagar started to record there conversation.

sur-finally mujhe tum akir milgayi
v-tum....tum kya chathi ho ?
sur-sagar...aur tum to ab uskay baccha ke maa banewali hoon right ?
v-haan
sur-ek baat to hein mein tumhari aur tumhare hone wale bacce ke dushman hu....and i will kill you
v-mein tumse nahin darti...aur baat meri bacce ki tou mein uska kayaal rakoongi....tum to usse cho bhi nahin sakti
sur-(pointing her finger at vidya)u watch vidya...u watch

vidya did not say another word as surili walked off...2-3 mins later sagar came walking to vidya with the tape recorder in his hands.he stood right infront of her

s-tum theek ho na vidya ?
v-wo humare bacche ko mar dalegi !
s-nahin vidya aisa kuch nahin hoga...mujhper yakeen hein ?
v-haa aap keise batte kar rahe hein

she hugged him really tight not wanting to let go of him...sagar rubbing her back while they were hugging....they forgot about there surroundings.5 minutes later vidya broke apart from there ever lasting hug.

s-kya huwa ?
v-suniye dher horahi hein hume....
s-chale

they both walked out the mandir hand in hand....they walked home as it was a nice sunny day and it was good for vidya and the baby.as they were walking sagar saw vidya admiring the roses at the flower stand.

v-mujhe wo phool chahiye....please
s-sure darling....mein abhi lekar atta hoon
v-(happy)okkie thnx

2 minutes later sagar came back with a bunch of red roses.....

v-wow mujhe tou sirf ek chahiye tha...lekin itne saare
s-yeah tou kuch bhi nahin....

they walked home.sagar opened the door and walked in....as he was entering the house he noticed a parcel so he walked bak out agen..... he saw a parcel next to a bunch of poppy flowers but the parceled box was placed on the wooden bench.he went and saw the parcel and saw it had vidya written on it

v-sagar....sagar....
s-mein yaha hoon...waveing his hands in the air

vidya walked upto him as she wanted to noe wat was in the box infront of him..

v-yeah kya hein ?
s-mujhe bhi nahin pata...chalo saath mein dhekte hein
v-okkay then

they both sat down on the sofa and sagar started to remove the tape which the box was sealed with. he put it on the floor on the side so it does not stick onto him or vidya.before he could carry on vidya felt the urge to vomit.she put her hand onto her mouth and ran upstairs.sagar looked at her running and went behind her as he was worried.in the bedroom vidya was in the washroom...sagar could hear her vomiting and relaxed himself as she had already told him its normal in pregnancy.he sat down on the bed waiting for vidya.5 minutes later vidya came out drying her face with a bath towel.she looked really pale...sagar got up and went to her

s-vidya tum theek ho ?
v-haan...hum bilkul theek hein...
s-(touching her face)you look very pale...you sure ?
v-haa baba haa...mujhe bohat neend arahi hein...
s-mujhe bhi ! darling lets goto sleep
v-okay

vidya got into her nightie and sagar got into his comfy trousers but he had no top on....you could see his six-pack....looking totally hot.vidya tied her hair up.and went into bed...sagar got into bed before vidya he pecked her on the cheek and wrapped his hands around her waist.vidya was blushing away.he kept on stroking her back with his fingers to get her attention.

v-kya hein....?
s-vidya tou kitni unromantic ho....mujhe yeah sab accha nahin lagta
v-mein aur unromantic...theek hein...

she turned her position towards sagar and looked straight into his eyes and kissed him on the lips...sagar put his left hand on the back of her neck so she don't back off quickly.they kiss lasted for 10 minutes and over.....vidya backed of

s-WOW...vidya tum tou mujhese bhi zyada romantic ho...kya baat hein
v-mujhpar phirse shak mat karna...
s-sorry
v-its okay

vidya cuddled up into sagars chest and closed her eyes.sagar put his hands around her and they both eventually went to sleep.

Edited by narmz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow narmeen, dis is great<<<<3333333
plZ continue sooooon<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
AWSOMMEEE update Narmeen..
pls cont soon
--Nelly
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great update Narmeen!
Cont soon!

- Charri 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwww i loved it cont soon plz 😃

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