Bin TEre Sanam part 26pg 16 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
awesome, like Vivah sort of! 😃 keep it up!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
ok heres part 7 u guys are really getting into it rite narmeen haha

vm- jaldi karo beta mahoorat nikal rahay
they all take vidya somewhere to get dressed and meanwhile sagar is getting dressed somewhere else
sagar quickly gets dressed and he comes out about 2 minutes and 45 seconds hes wearing a lightblue kurta with darkblue work on it 5 minutes later vidya comes out with the traditional lehnga the same one she wore of her and sagars first marriage.
s- ur looking hott
v blushes
v-shut up
they do the sindoor saat phere and now its time for the farewell of the bride.
vm- beta tumhaari yaad bohot ayingi
both mother and daughter cry she hugs her mom now its shalus turn
s- vidya ill miss u remember u have to call me everyday
v- dont wry
they both hug
sagar and vidya both get into the car.
s- so do u want to say anything
v shakes her head no
they arrive at sagars haveli
they do all the rasams
now its time for u no what
vidya is sitting in the whole bridal position on the bed with her face covered with her dupatta sagar arrives he sits on the bed he lifts her gungat{veil}
v- sagar agar accident main mujhe kuch hojatha
s- tho main marjata why are u asking me these questions
v- i was just wondering would u ever get married
s-no i wouldn't because bhagwan could never separate us
they both have an eye lock sagar leans toward vidya vidya could see the intensity in his eyes they both kiss for about 5 minutes vidya gasps for air.
v- sagar this jewelery is really bothering me
s- u want some help
he takes all the jewelry off of her
s- better
v- yep
it starts raining vidya gets up and goes on the balcony {javedi zindagi is playing in the background}
v- sagar lets go outside
sagar couldn't say no to her they both go outside and vidya starts playing in the rain and throwing water on him. sagar picks her up and takes her to their room and they both just have a long night
next morning vidya gets up but sagar is holding onto her she tries to let go
s- where are u going
v- i have to go take a shower
s- come on u dont need a shower u dont smell or anything
v- eww thats gross
they both giggle
v- i promise ill be back in 10 minutes
s- 10 minutes is a long time
v- no its not
s- u no i could go with u
v- shut up
vidya heads for the shower she comes back exactly 10 minutes later with her hair all wet and shes drying it
sagar just stares at her
v- what are u looking at
s- u of course
vidya is tying the strings to her blouse and shes having a hard time sagar comes up to her and ties it for her vidya blushes
v- thxs
s- ur welcome
v- dont u need to get ready
s- i dont have to but if u want to
v- yes i want u to i dont want a smelly husband oh by the way were having our reception tonight did u forget
s- yeah but ur here to remind me
v- now go
s- one kiss
v- sagar u were never like this b4
s- yes i was but i never expressed anything u no im a very shy person
v- yeah i can tell
s- come on
v- what
s- my kiss
vidya heads for sagar and pushes him and runs
half an hour later everybody is at the dining room eating breakfast
s's mom- beta u have to go to ur maayka for ur pakfira ki rasam { the ritual where girls go to her maaya for the first time}
v- ji mom
s mom-tho jaldi kao maayka jana hai
s- whats up
s mom - yaad hain vidya ko uskay...
s- ji yaad hain dont worry
alrite thats it ill do some later bye
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
thats an awesome update!!! LVOED IT TOTALLY!!!! ...umm i am not sure how to do taht ...and try someoen who has another fanfic and can change the topic name...sry=)) i just suggested it
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
thnx for da update....please countinue soon....i like the storyline to ur ff 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
Lovely update! AMAZING JOB!!!!
Plz continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
👏 <--- For you 😳
- Chari 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
xellent wrk keep it up... 😆 nd ill pm you hw to edit your title if you need help k lol 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
awesome update totally loved it=)) update soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
i dont no where part 8 went i am so mad i dont relly sagar= s
vidya=v
sindoora= si
sagars mom=sm
sagars dad =sd
chinu=c
they are about to leave and sindoora enters
s- di aap agayi
he touches her feet
si- haan beta im here
sindoora sees vidya
si- yeh kaun hain
s- di yeh vidya hain my wife
sindoora gets shoked
si- wait tumhaari shaadi hogayi and u didnt tell me
s- sry di
si- its okay
vidya seeks blessing from vidya
si- bohot khubsoorat ho tum
si- vaisa tum laug kaha jarayho
s- di vo actually honeymoon
si- oh i see
s- di we have to go
si- dont wry have a nice trip
s- thanks di
sindoora has an evil look going on in her face
meanwhile sagar and vidya arrive in Goa and are in their hotel room
v- im so tired
s- yeah me to lets go out
v- u just said u were tired
s- yea i no but i still want to go out
v- okay let me go freshen up
s- okay hurry up tho
vidya comes back a couple minutes later
s- is that what ur wearing a sari
v- yeah wats wrong with it
s- were going to be walking all day dont u have any jeans
v- i dont wear jeans and u no that
s- sry
they both go boating in a nearby lake
s- this place is beautiful
v- yeah it is
s- u no something preetier than this
v- what
s- you
they both have an eyelock vidya splashes water on sagars face
s- hey tats not fair
v- in love and war everything is fair
s- thats not funny
sagar splashes water on vidya
v- what was that for
s- remember everything is fair in love and in war
v- shut up
sagar gets up trips and falls in the lake
v- omg sagar
sagar swims back up
v- are u okay
s- just a little wet
v- here let me help u
she reaches out her hand for sagars. sagar pulls her in the lake
v- why did u do that
s- just felt like it
v- sagar this isnt funny im all wet
s- yeah tats wat happens when u fall in a lake
v- i didnt fall u pulled me in
s- sry i thought it was funny
v- sagar!!!
sagar gets sad
s- im relly sry
vidya starts laughing
v- its okay i could never get mad at u
they both splash each other with water 20 minutes later they both come back on land
sry guys thats it my dad has to pay the bill online i will write a lot tomoroww because im home all day no skool partay hahah cya muahh
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
awesome update 👏 ...dnt forget to update tomorrow 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
hi my new member..... and i relly like ur ff
pls cont soon.. 😛

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